New OS--Meri kahani--updated part 7 / page 120

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello friends...


i'm a big fan of GHSP like u all🤗...after watching GHSP and reading so many works on maaneet...i'm writing a small Os on our fav couple😳...sorry could'nt stop my self 😉...hope u all will like it...😆



plz give me ur opinion...will be waiting...



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Silence prevailed in the room...five people and five different thoughts...All are waiting for one person's reply...

Jasmeet took and deep breath and looked at the elder lady and said sorry maaji...ye nahi ho sakta...'

Maaji sighed...felt defeated...but she was determined...she said...jasmeet kya aap bata sakti hain ki kyun mana kar rahi hain...jasmeet remained silent...

Mujhe maaf kardijiye maaji...main aapko kuch nahi bata sakti...mujhe garv ke liye jo bhi karna hai karungi...main zindagi bhar uska khayal rakhungi...par yeh mujhse nahi hoga maaji...

Suddenly they heard a small cry from the adjacent room...jasmeet stood up to see...but her daughter who was silent from the beginning of the discussion stopped her...Maa main dekhti hoon...aap dadi ji se baat kijiye........and went from there...

Maaji or say dadi again asked...Kya aap us nanhi si jaan ke liye bhi haa nai keh sakte...jo apni maa ke liye roraha hai ...hum unke maa ko toh nahi laa sakte hain...lekin tum maan jaaogi toh usse maa mil jayegi geet ke roop mein...ab uski zindagi tumhare haaton mein hain jasmeet...

Jasmeet remained silent once again...she did not give any answer to dadi...how can she let her daughter geet marry her deceased daughter naina's husband...no it won't happen...she will not let it happen...untill she is alive...she wants a good life for her daughter...a happy married life and a loving and a caring husband who will lover her in thick and thin...in happiness and in agony...he should be with her till eternity...but with this marriage it won't happen...if this marriage happens this will be a compromise...and she don't want her daughter's life to be a compromise...and above all that her daughter is still studying...

Sound of geet's anklets distracted her thoughts...seeing 6 month old grandson...smile spreads on every ones face...

The atmosphere of the room lightened...jasmeet took the kid and sat down again and started admiring his features...a replica of his mother ...naina...who is no more now...

Daadi again asked jasmeet ek baar aur soch lijiye.kya app garv ke liye haa nahi keh sakti...usse ek maa ki zaroorat hai...jo use payaar kare,dekhball kare use rsahi aur galat ki raah dikhaye...aur geet ke sivai koi aur yeh nahi kar sakta...

Geet looked at her jiju sitting there and looking at his son and then at geet...as soon as their eyes met he averted his gaze from her...he is hating it ...he is not ready to marry geet or any other girl...he loved naina very much and even after her death he loves her very much...it's impossible to love another time...atleast for him...but his dadima bound him by her promise...and he can't be selfish only by thinking about himself he has a son to look after...he is ready to take the responsibility by himself...but Dadima is adamant on his remarriage...with this marriage... he'll spoil geet's life too...he know geet won't voice her feelings...but he has to do something...

She moved into the kitchen...to get some refreshments...followed by anu...her best friend from school days cum sisters nanad...anu waited patiently for geet to turn...knowing anu's presence geet did not turn...anu lost her cool and asked her....yeh sab kya hai geet...geet did'nt respond...




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Index--------Page 5 with hyperlinks




part 1- page 1

part 2 - page 6

part 3 - page 37



part 4 - page 61


teaser --------page 69


Part 5 - Page 90


Part 6 - Page 113

part 7 - Page 120
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear😊 please do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice starting best of luck and waiting to read more...
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Finally the big writer bug has bit you.
but I m so happy that I m dancing

It's a nice start.

I m feeling bad for all who are passing through a rough phase of their life.

I m waiting to know the answer of jasmeet to dadi.

lovely start
continue soon
My best wishes are with you

I will be waiting😉😉
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow congrats dear

superb start loved it

all are in their own pain waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start
so dadi wants geet to marry her jiju
is it maan?

will be waiting for next part

mujhe kyu lag raha ki aap indu di ho
ek tho aapne rashmi di ki comment par like kiya

And you even said that you have so many stories in your mind

the story lines reminds me of a movie" Abhinandhana".

ye app hi ho na indu di😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it! welcome here! Continue soon.. will be waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratulations for the new os...the first part is awsum,,who is geet's jiju??is he maan or some other guy???waiting to read more...hope u will update it soon😊
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ye kya apna mazaak bana rahi hai ki hamaara😡
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Originally posted by: rashmivaish


ye kya apna mazaak bana rahi hai ki hamaara😡





meri itni himmat...

maine apne hi OD pe like mara😉


kisko milta hai aisa chance...😆
Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago

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