MG SS - Dil ke rishte - [Part 6/ Pg 20/17mar] [updated]

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Angelrehana

@Angelrehana

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Posted: 11 years ago

--- MG SS " Dil Ke Rishte" ---

= Prolouge =

-- Rishte bohot hote hain humare pass...
bohot se bandhan se hum jure rehte hain...
Par Kuch rishte Humse nahi humare Dil se jure hote hain
Lekin wahi Dil ka rishta Humara sabse khass rishta hota hain...
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wahi rishta hume sab se jiyada sukun deta hain,
Har pal woh humare sath rehta hain ,,
woh rishta humara wajud bann ke hum main sama jata hain,
kuch isse tarah Maan Aur Geet ka rishta jurr gaya tha
Ek Izzat, Ek samman, ek Dil ka rishta jurr gaya hain!!!
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PAR Kya inka yeh Dil ka rishta kabhi Duniya main woh jee payenge, ya phir woh Dil main he reh jayega??
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kya woh kabhi apne Dil ke rishte ko naam de payenge???
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Kya woh Ek ho payenge???

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Geet aur Maan ke DIL KE RISHTE Ki kahani janne ke liye LIKE AUR COMMENTS KARO...
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Guys Prolouge is written by me Now This Story will Continue By Nelufar & Zeba...
Keep Loving us 😛😛
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nd yes as i'm newbie,so if suddenly my Id got deleted , so i will not able to continue... The real Writer Nelu or Zeba Will Continue It...

- with love AngelR -
sorry for mistakes!!!

See bleow for CS nd Index

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Angelrehana

@Angelrehana

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Introduction-------

MAAN SINGH KHURANA (Age 24)
Owner Of KC... Kind-Hearted but yes very serious when it comes to his work...
Loved His family {Dadi, Mom & Annie} more then anything... He can do anything for them but without marriage Cuz Firstly he thinks he himself is a kid now
Loved Kids A lot... Their sweetness made him forget anything...
He donated a big amount every month in "Dreamland Orphange" to help them... he also passed his free time their...

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{Dadi & Annie is same like Serial}
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Maan's Mom {Tina Singh Khurana} : Very sweet lady.. loved Maan a lot... alwyss want to see him happy... She wants Maan To marry her Frnds Daughter Sameera...
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Sameera : Will reveal her soon...
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GEET HANDA (Age 20)

She is Baby girl all i can say... she is full of life.. She loves her Sister {Priya} more then Herself ... she promised her mom to take care of her alwayss.. She is very matured but she don't want to show it... she liked to be a kid...
Now She is living with her sisTER in "Dreamland oF Kids" orphange...
And yes Most important She loved Kids A lot...
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Rajji Handa : Geet's little cute sister She is 16 Only

Index
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Part 1 -Page 2
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Part 2 - Page 6
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Part 3 - Page 8

Part 4 - Page 11

Part 5 - Pagge 15
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Part 6 - Page 20
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Part 7 - page

With Love AngelR { CS written By : Nelu }

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

prologue
nice...
cont soon...

PS - can u post the link when u update in this thread dear?
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Angelrehana

@Angelrehana

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

MG SS~Dil Ke Rishte~
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Part 1

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Girl: Maam please try to understand... i don't have any house, I and My sister need Shelter help us...
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Mrs Kia: No Miss.. This is a orphanage not a hotel that u ask and i give you...
We have some rules, This is place for Orphanage KiDs and u r grown up women please go away...
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Girl: Maam please i don't have job and i can't see My sister like this...
She is suffering from high fever from 3 days... Please help us...
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Mrs KIa: but Miss we are not the owner of this orphanage...
Its All Mr.Maan Singh Khurana's... He don't want kids life in danger, so he can't allow any new people here...
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girl: plzzz Just once let me talk to him.. i'm sure he will help me..
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Mrs Ria: okk i will call him and ask if he said no then you have to go away...
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girl: okk i will but first u ask HIM...
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Mrs ria called Maan : Gd noon Sir!!
Msk: Gd noon!! why u suddenly called?? My Kids r ok na??
do they need anything??? (he get tensed)
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Ria: no sir everything is fine!! kids r ok!!!
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maan: good, then tell me what happend??
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ria : actually sir, Miss {she ask the Girl her name}
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Girl: maam its Geet, Geet Handa!!
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Ria: sir, Miss Geet wants to talk u something??
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maan: with me?? ok give her the phone...
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ria: yes sir . .

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She pass the phone to Geet...
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Maan: Hello??
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geet : Gd noon sir!! Sir I'm Geet handa ...
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maan : yes how may I help u miss geet
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geet : sir I don't have any house me and my sister need shelter please sir try to understand my sister is suffering from high fever from 3 days I will be very thankful to you if u may help us... [ she said in one go]
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maan : hold down miss I understand your situation but I have some rules I can't allow anyone before knowing them I can't put my kids life in danger...
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geet : sir I understand but please sir my sis is really suffering and I don't know any other place I will give my all information to mrs ria but now I am in a need at home please sir...
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maan : but miss...
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geet cut him in between..
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geet : sir can't u just gve us for some days,, i promise if i get job thn i'll leave frm there ...
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maan : ok miss geet u can live over here but till u get the job ..
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Geet: Thank you so much Sir... I promise i will never give a chance to complain...
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Maan: hmmm!!Okk...
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geet give the phn to ria
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maan : Mrs ria let them stay here for few days but be careful
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ria : ok sir
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Maan allowed geet to stay there...
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It was Maan routine to visit orphanage...
once a week so he decided to visit orphanage on Saturday as he was free...
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He went there and saw all kids jump towards him.. Kids adore him and he adore them Spending time with them was his fav hobby...
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But just then he saw a young girl who seems new over here as he knws all the kids of orphanage there sitting on the bench ...
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He went to her and sat beside her
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Maan : Whats your name?
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Girl : rajji!
Maan : Hey me Maan...
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Maan notice that she was looking pale and was week but still she had a smile on her face and was looking somewhere when he notice her gaze she was looking towards the kids playing...
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Maan : don't you want to join them ...
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Rajji : I would like to join them but I am sick and my sister told me not to play so much...
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Then the talking train went on and rajji and maan was started coming close to each other...
rajji even started calling Maan as bhai...
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Here geet was struggling for job... as she knows that she cant stay in orphanage forever. Wherever she applied for a job she got rejected or some says you don't have any experience...
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He knew she had a sister and was eager to meet her as well..
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Maan and rajji and kids had to much fun that day...they were playing blindfold. Maan was blindfolded and they played and played until their legs give up but maan was not able 2 catch any of them...
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Precap : Maaneet Meeting
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PS: This Part Is Written By Nelu & Zeba
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Love AngelR

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Nav2010

@Nav2010

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice starting:) waiting more:)

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nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Thankss for sharing our story 😊😊😊😊😊

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maya

@Maya_Maan

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Such an cute cute story,,, waiting for more... nicely written,,, congrats dear... 😛😛😛😛😛

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Angel

@amita5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Loved the first part

please update soon

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome part
maan gave geet and rajji shelter

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Geet came in search for shelter in Maan's orphanage...

it is very pleasing to see a Maan who love orphanage kids and take care of them so carefully...abhi tak Maan ko sirf khadus ke roop mein dekha tha who don't even want to go to any charity function...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm...

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MG SS - Dil ke rishte - [Part 6/ Pg 20/17mar] [updated]

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