MG SS - Dil ke rishte - [Part 6/ Pg 20/17mar] [updated]

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Manisha Govindraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

awsum update

luvd d song sequence

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Maan admiring n drooling over Geet! She is singing n dancing! Maan does nt wanna marry Sam! Superbly written, update soon

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

part 3
nice part...
lovely...
cont soon dear...

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Angelrehana

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Posted: 11 years ago

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MG SS --Dil Ke Rishte--

Part 4 {written By Zeba & Thought+ Edit by Nelu}

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geet : maan

. maan turns and see geet ...

. maan : geet tum yahan??

geet : maan I'm sorry who main yaha se guzar rahe thu, toh aapki aur aapke mom ki sab baaten sun liye... Sachi main maine jaan bujj ke nahi suna..

maan: its ok geet... I trust you...

Geet smiled: Maan agar aap bura na mane kya hum do minute k liye baat kar sagte hai???

maan : haan sure geet

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maan take geet in his cabin

. maan : baitho geet ...

geet : ji ...

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. both of them sat but

geet was not getting how to tell him ...

. maan : bolo geet ...

geet : maan aap bura mat maan na ki mai yeh sab bol rahi hoon, Actually I want to say to something As My Friend...

maan : haan bolo geet...

geet : maan aap baar apni Mom ki baat toh Mann lijiye na,

ek baar sameera se milke dekhiye ki woh kese hain, bina dekhe hum kaise kisi ko kese mana kar sakte hain??

. maan : I know Geet but I don't wanna marry now...

Geet: I understand maan... par apki mom apke liye kuch galat toh nahi soche ge na, Aap ek baar usse mill ke dekho, kya pata apko sameera ache lage?? Ya na bhi pasand aaya, toh apki mom ko yeh to acha lage ga na, ke apne unke liye, Sameera se baat ki...

Maan: But I

geet: Aur Agar Babaji na kare kabhi assa ho, ke aapki behan ko bhi koi bina dekhe reject kar de toh apko acha lagta???

Maan: Geet [He got angry]

. geet : dekha maan sirf yeh khayal se aapko itna gussa aaya toh socho uss ladki ka jise aap bina dekhe bina koi waje ke reject kar rahe ho ...

aap ek bar milke dekho agar aapko pasand nahi aati toh mana kar do aur aapke aur aapke mom ke bich bhi joh kuch chal raha hai woh bhi sort out ho jayega ...

. maan : hmm tum thik bol rahi ho geet mai ghar jake maa se iss bare mai baat karta hoon ...

Geet: Thnk you mere baat smajh ne ke liye... nd Sorry agar maine apni hadd par ki ho...

Maan: heyy don't say like ... You say na We r frnds??? Toh frnds ke bicch toh koi hadd he nahi hote...

geet smiled Big...

Maan: Geet kal hum sab picnic pe chalengE...

geet : sab matlab ??

. maan ; geet sab matlab sab bache aur tum or Ria...

. geet : maiii haye babaji mai kaise jaa sagti hoon??

. maan : geet tum jaa sagti kyun ki tum aab yahan sirf rehti nahi balki tum bacho ki teacher bhi ho kal subha ready rehna ...

geet : ok maan...

Maan: Wese geet i forget Say that u danced & sing ver well...

Geet was shocked: Aap hume dekh rahe the??

Maan: yapp..

Geet Blushed...

.Maan now bye ...

maan : bye geet

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maan reached home and goes to his mom room ...

. maan : mom

. mom : aa gaye aap aab fursat mil gayi aapko

. maan : mom please aapko pata hai jab mai orphanage jata hoon toh mai late aata hoon ...

. mom : hmmm bolo kya hai .

maan : mom please aap mujhe se naraz mat rahiye...

mom : toh aap humari baat man kyun nahi lete ...

. maan : mom maine bohat socha aur phir main ek decision liya hai ki mai sameera se milounga ...

. mom gets happy...

mom : maan aap sach bol rahe hai aap sameera se milne ke liye ready hai...

. maan : haan mom mai ready hoon lekin meri ek shart hai ...

. mom : sharth kaisi sharth ...

. maan : mom agar mujhe sameera pasand nahi aayi toh aap mujhe force nahi karogi ...

mom : thik hai nahi karungi aap bas ek bar mil li jiye aur mujhe pakka yakeen hai ki woh aapko pasand aayegi...

maan : kab milna hai ...

. mom : maan woh aabhi London mai hai 1 week baad aayegi tab hum aap dono ki meeting arrange karwa denge ..

maan : ok mom mai thoda rest kar leta hoon nd kal main bacho ke sath picnic ja raha hu...

mom : thik hai mai aapko dinner jab ready ho jayega bula lounge ...

maan head's towards his room & Get rested In bed...

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Precap >> Picnic

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Edited by Angelrehana - 11 years ago

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

awesome update

so geet made him ready to go to meet sam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Maan will be going to meet Sameera...

but before that he will be going for a picnic with Geet and bachche...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

So geet convinced maan to meet sameera for once & maan complimenting geet on her dancing & geet blushing on it
waiting for picnic

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Geet n Maan nw friends! She asks him to consier wt his mom sed! Maan tells him mom he will meet Sam! Maan praises her dance! update soon, well written

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Alpha01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

So Geet has made Maan agree to meeting Sameera. Loved the way she explained and made Maan see a girl will feel to be rejected without meeting them. Picnic should be full of masti.😊