MG SS - Dil ke rishte - [Part 6/ Pg 20/17mar] [updated] - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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MG SS ~Dil Ke Rishte~

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Part 2


Geet was coming to the orphanage losing all her hope of getting job

She was going to her room when she heard of kid's voice in garden she went towards the garden and saw a man blindfold and kids around him

Geet (s.t ) : yeh kaun hai aur bacche inke saath khelte huwe kitne aacha lag raha hai lekin maine inhe phale kabhi nahi dekha

While thinking geet was moving ahead where there where playing

Maan : pakad liye

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And he open's his blindfold with a sweet smile but he saw a beautiful girl in his arms he was mesmerized by her beauty and then maan lost his balance and both fell on the ground...

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maan was just staring at geet and

our geet was trying to move but how can she move maan was on top of her

Geet : suniye

.No response from maan

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Then all the kid started shouting bhaiya har gaye bhaiya har gaye ...

Maan came back to his sense and got up from geet

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Maan extended his hand towards geet to help her Geet keep's her hand on maan's and he pulled her up

Maan : sorry woh mai bacho ke saath khel raha tha

Geet : ji koi baat nahi

Maan : waise aap yahan nayi hai kya maine aapko phale kabhi nahi dekha

The suddenly rajji comes

Rajji : maan bhai yeh hai meri didi geet and runs to play with our kids

Maan : ohh toh aap hai geet jab bhi rajji se milta hoon woh bas aap ki hi baat karti hai

Geet : aa aa aap Mr khurana

Maan : hi MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Geet : hi aap yahan

Maan : woh kya hai na ki mujhe jab bhi time milta hai mai yahan bacho se milne aa jata hoon

Geet : ohhh aacha

Maan and geet settle down on a bench and see's kids playing

Maan : toh aapko job mili Geet see's towards maan and give's him a smile

Geet : nahi aabhi tak nahi

Maan : aapko job nahi mili phir bhi aap smile kar rahi ho

Geet : toh kya karun rone se toh mujhe job nahi milegi na

Maan liked the way geet was talking positive

Maan : waise aapne kahan tak padai ki hai

Geet : maine BA ki hai

Maan : hmmm toh tum ek kam kyun nahi karti bacho ko hi padaha lo waise bhi mai inke liye teacher dekh hi raha tha aab tum yahin rehti ho toh mujhe bhi easy hoga inke progress mai nazar rakhne ke liye

Geet : lekin mai mere pass toh experience nahi hai

Maan : experience tab aayega na jab tum kuch karogi

Geet : thank you so much mai jab bhi gayi mujhe experience ke wajse se job nahi mili aap sab se alag ho

Maan : nahi geet mai alag nahi hoon mai bhi ek aam insaan hoon bus mere kam karne ka tarika alag hai so u accept the proposal

Geet : yes

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Precap : Geet teaching & Maan Drooling 😉😉

PS: This Part Written By Zeba...

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Thank you so much for ur likes & Comments...😃

Love AngelR

Edited by Angelrehana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it dear... Feeling so nice,,,, well written,,,

Love Maya

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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
awww wt a lovely meet
so sweet
milte he in each others' arms hayeee😆😆
n maanu lost in her
n offered her job also impressed by her positivity
lvd it
want more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chalo Maan ko bachchon ke liye teacher mil gayi and Geet ko naukri...

Maan is very soft and caring nature...

awesome update...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan in first meet itself started to impress her...

Now maan gave het job..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome story 😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
finally they met
so geet & her sister is going to stay in orphanage for more time as geet will be teaching there
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a nice start.. Geet need a job.. N Orphanage mein rehani ki permission di Maan ne Geet ko.. Maan N rajji too become clost N he acepted her as his sis..Waiting for next one..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very good n waiting for next😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update! Finally dey meet! Maan offers her a job, well written, update soon

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