THE LOCKET (11) - MG FF - New thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 18

Originally posted by: dqno1

You have read my story before. I remembered your comment.

may be i had tried and forgoten as this ff all the time flashing on my fb page so i had tried to read but there was only dev geet and nt i hate dev so if it was dev as an main charecter i dont want to give strain to my brain.thanks for reminding me that i had tried this ff.

Originally posted by: idunno

may be i had tried and forgoten as this ff all the time flashing on my fb page so i had tried to read but there was only dev geet and nt i hate dev so if it was dev as an main charecter i dont want to give strain to my brain.thanks for reminding me that i had tried this ff.

Just curious abt geets reaction on her veerji coming over for dinner every day

Originally posted by: muskanp

Just curious abt geets reaction on her veerji coming over for dinner every day

Avi has sent Geet to HP for few weeks to finish her masters presentation, it was in terms and conditions chapter 😆

awesome dear

Originally posted by: gurti30

awesome dear

i never loved reading about any other couple than maaneet but u made me fall lin love with his dev-tara

tara chose pink suit for dev but he carried it too well

loved the way dev is making her feel loved and cared and still leaving no chance to tease her

dev arranged kabir as geet's driver

lovely precap

TEASER

PRESS TO LISTEN

You must listen to the audio...

Geet, main tumse bohut pyaar karta hun.

Yeh khat tumhe batane ke liye hai ki Maan ki zindagi mein Geet ki kya jagah hai.

Tumhare bina meri zindagi adhuri hai Geet!

Agar tum meri zindagi me nahi aaogi to ye zindagi koi maayane nahi hai.

Geet, maine iss jahan ki sari khubsoorat cheezon me sirf tumhe hi dekha hain.

Har baat, Har zarrein mein sirf tumhara hi zikr hota hai Geet!

Chand se chandni ke baare me puchu to tumhara hi zikr karta hai

Phool se khushbu ke baare me puchu to tumhari mehek mere seene mein sama jaati hai.

Geet, meri zindagi ko apni saanson se mehka do

A/N: I have struggled with this part for days now. Then I realized that I could not improve upon perfection. One of my most favorite scenes. The dialogues courtesy of Barry Dhillon and the writers of the show Geet Hui Sab Se Parayi. I had to upload the audio because this needs to be in the voice of Maan... Haiyee...

Is anyone waiting to see how it will feature in this story?

VM of the song[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gu-cJ8nkxqc[/YOUTUBE]

Song from the movie: Paap sung by Rahat Fateh Ali Khan

PICTURE CREDIT: INDIA-FORUMS

VIDEO CREDIT TO THE UPLOADER

MAAN'S LETTER AND DIALOGUE CREDITS: WRITERS OF GHSP

me first😃😃

Phewww...finally caught up wid d story...loveddds dev tara...dev is awesome. ...so is naina...I feel bad for punam and punam ka chand...pammi brij suraj are dash dash dash...geet-darji are super cute...geet is so innocent and maan is so lovinggg...haayeee... when will they meet in the present? ??? Can't wait till all the misunderstandings are cleared between them...maan thinks she ditched him and poor geet has no idea abt it...cant wait till maan meets naina as devs fiance and realise that geet is like a baby sister to dev...kabir-megha are cute too... can't wait for maaneet reunion in the present...

Originally posted by: dqno1

I put a note at the end of the update.. Some of my friends have a protected blog where they upload their story. It is up to the writer to give permission for who will read it and also for the writer to take away the permission if people are no longer reading or offering feedback. It also gives an indication to the writer about how many have already read the part.

Oh okay... this idea sounds good... 😊