THE LOCKET (11) - MG FF - New thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 16

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muskanp thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
U have a blog
I didn't know
Plz give me t link na


Now t update
Thud thud thud
😳

Every word was so full of essence
Oozing out of booming something special on either of them


Pink suit wow
Couldn't even imagine
Lekein I guess one could carry it 😉


But purple shirt was too much


T nightie part was he he he
Just hot!!!

Ok going to read again
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 49
awesome...
excellent...
this is sweet torture...
feel sorry for Naina and Dev...
Dev is controlling so so so much...
where did u get Abhinav's such pix?
awesome pix...
and Geet shes the cute character in this...
and the way Dev made her say sorry was so lovely...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful part avi...start with moring on skype with wet dev...wow...poor tara first day hi vo to out ho gayi...droolling over dev and then pick suit ...super start of the day...she was used to him all day waiting for him, making dinner of his choice, just loved it...she is slowly slowly falling for this daily chores with him...
the scene of last night was sesual...he never tried to touch her, kiss her or hug her...just touching his back fingers on her cheek...so sweet of him...which made her crave for more...loved his making her heaving by just his lovingly words...
loved how he took care of geet by appointing kabir as her driver confirming geet is in safe hands of kabir
lovley part dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
tara drooling over dev😳
she got used to him aur jab ek din nahi aya tho gussa hogayi
loved it
waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Right fm d starting U had all d ingredients to kill Us Avi dear.I mean if one's morning starts with such hot skype chat and day ends with such sensuous dinner then life toh set hai boss.God even I cud imagine the sight when Dev was explaining how he undresses Tara,then we cant blame poor Tara's thots.

And then she chose pink suit for him,poor Dev.But he carried that well too.

My fav parts were d ones when Dev caresses her cheeks,haiii maar daala.They dont need to hug or kiss,without them also they are superb.


Fabulous part buddy

Thanks Sampa😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

U have a blog
I didn't know
Plz give me t link na


Now t update
Thud thud thud
😳

Every word was so full of essence
Oozing out of booming something special on either of them


Pink suit wow
Couldn't even imagine
Lekin I guess one could carry it 😉


But purple shirt was too much


T nightie part was he he he
Just hot!!!

Ok going to read again

I just made one over the weekend.. abhi kuch post nahi kiya maine...
If I try to do all that I won't have time to write... soch rahi hu for some parts only to use it..😃
I am so happy to see you enjoy my story Muskan. When a silent reader posted their first post today on my thread, it reminded me of Matri, when I who was silent posted my first post on that story. Those beautiful days when you updated twice thrice a day... so much of Geet and IF is tied with you...🤗
Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 49
awesome...
excellent...
this is sweet torture...
feel sorry for Naina and Dev...
Dev is controlling so so so much...
where did u get Abhinav's such pix?
awesome pix...
and Geet shes the cute character in this...
and the way Dev made her say sorry was so lovely...
cont soon dear...

Pictures are courtesy India-Forums...
There are more sizzling ones of Abhinav but it is too hot for my story😆
Thanks Deepa. Glad you are liking it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
😲 comment ka kasht karo 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

😲 comment ka kasht karo 😲

tired hoon 🤢
is baar rehne de na 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

beautiful part avi...start with moring on skype with wet dev...wow...poor tara first day hi vo to out ho gayi...drooling over dev and then pick suit ...super start of the day...she was used to him all day waiting for him, making dinner of his choice, just loved it...she is slowly slowly falling for this daily chores with him...
the scene of last night was sensual...he never tried to touch her, kiss her or hug her...just touching his back fingers on her cheek...so sweet of him...which made her crave for more...loved his making her heaving by just his lovingly words...
loved how he took care of geet by appointing kabir as her driver confirming geet is in safe hands of kabir
lovley part dear...

Thanks Madhuri.. I suppose this part is my happiness for all the people who doubted that they could fall for Dev. I am so glad that I stuck to what was in my head regarding the characters. Though he is naughty Dev has grown over the past two years and has become more mature because of Tara.
Glad you liked it.

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