THE LOCKET (11) - MG FF - New thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 107

Originally posted by: Onir

Chp 52:

Loved it 😳

The last line was the cherry on the cake 😉 Mishti morning .. maan toh so misses his mishty... Dev tumhe pata nahi kuch bhi abhi tak 😆

Daadi dropped a bomb so that her matchmaking mission will be complete... And Dev made sure her plan isn't foiled by Naina by droipping a small cracker named "Sasha Patasha" 😆 Too good... Liked how angry she got on him using a sweet's name to associate with Sasha ... Naina is one very Possessive and J woman... 😆

But I like her 😊 And her Prince Dev 😉

Pari and her guilt... nice portrayal of it all. So finally Suraj chapter has ended and I guess it was a worthy closure and complete attainment of his sins somewhat.

I like Naina's dedication and will to be efficient and commitments to her work even in face of adversities. 👍🏼 Inspite of her hard shell she is yet that small girl within who desires and longs for small positive feedback and compliments appreciating her work. 👏

Now just going to read the Juhu beach romance 😳😳😉

Going to hide..

Originally posted by: Onir

Chp 51: Hayee so sweet ... it was a mix of romance and love and yet a tangy twist to it... I was smiling at the end of it 😳

CID Daadi and her mission of "Journey of Dev pasta" 🤣 Usha ka toh pata nahi... I was really laughing imagining her Jiggy wiggy dance 🤣

Daadi ko bhi cool bana diya..😆

Dev Is a sweet ❤️ ... the care and love he showers on her through his understanding and unspoken ways has me fida on him 😳

Trip to Mumbai ... 😉 Daadi is surely going to excel in this mission too 😆😆

Dev is Dev.. after all Maan ka twin hai..

The second part of this update 👏 Simply beautiful. Kabir -Megha ❤️

Life has indeed come a full circle for them... I loved how you revealed their story... Megha's loneliness, her being an orphan, her weaving of dreams just through the simple words and description and viewing it in third person but feeling and living a life in the first person ... hoping for that love and family.

Kabir's fears were very precisely and beautifully cleared out and the sense of fulfillment and contentment he felt did seep in for this couple. 😃

I just loved the last para "he could provide her himself, a family, a place where she belonged. She would offer him all the love in her heart, all the adoration that made him want to be a better person." So true... I liked how you showed his wish of providing her things she should have, but at the same time how he is very sure she will provide him everything he ever desired and might be he doesn't deserve but will work for it every moment... Love does make this change where he doesn't see himself through his achievements or hsi possessions but through her view of him and her needs. ❤️

He still has doubts about being flawed like his father in the end but he could not see her broken. This is why I think Kabir appeals, that inspite of everything he perseveres.

"When separate they were both incomplete and yet together they were complete...a perfect fit.." Beautifully ending to this lovely part 👏

Originally posted by: dqno1

Shukriya... Now the chapter is complete for me..😃

Originally posted by: abinaya.m

hey i am feeling better now and just read the updates man wat a writer u r to potray the feelings so beautifully the nervousness that maan had to ask geet to be his and his misunderstanding and all i would just say 2 words simply and wonderfully superb keep it up chapter 51

Originally posted by: abinaya.m

OMG what an edge of the seat update and i have to give it to u it was mind blowing and the intense love dev and naintara possess for each other is overwhelming but dint expect pari to do something like this out of jealousy. and now just waiting for the update when maan and geet will meet. and also for this teasing precap plz update soon chapter 52