THE LOCKET (11) - MG FF - New thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 105

I like how you have shown Tara as the aching for love girl who comes from a broken family yet has so much of humility, kindness and work ethics.. She isnt greedy... She is powerful yet righteous... N lastly I love how Dev doesnt flaunt win Tara using his charm but showing her what life could be for them if they were to be together.. Sometimes simplicity in expression wins over "over the top" expression.. This is one of the few stories or maybe the only one where Dev n Tara have had their story n a good one n not as meanies! Keep up the good work.

I don't know where to like this update...So I am settling for comments...



That was simply Amazing n romantic n cute part...at last DevTara r one in love... such a Beautiful confession

What a romanticaly delicious confession Avi.Though the update started with Aisha,baby,tara and Dev.But the actual start was when Dev and Tara,were dressed in bridal.The way Dev confessed in d most simplest words was great.And d way Tara answered ,wooohooo...way to go girl.Kya seduction bhara confession tha!!!!!!!!!!
Bhai wah!!!!!!!

The dialogues fm KHNH,Fanaah,OSO are my favourite ones,including d song 'dil ibatdat'

And the videos,i dont abt others but m not complaining.M jst too happy wid Maaneet videos.


Great part buddy and thanx for d password.

Hi! your story is good.

Originally posted by: Mrs.MSKForever

I like how you have shown Tara as the aching for love girl who comes from a broken family yet has so much of humility, kindness and work ethics.. She isnt greedy... She is powerful yet righteous... N lastly I love how Dev doesnt flaunt win Tara using his charm but showing her what life could be for them if they were to be together.. Sometimes simplicity in expression wins over "over the top" expression.. This is one of the few stories or maybe the only one where Dev n Tara have had their story n a good one n not as meanies! Keep up the good work.

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

I don't know where to like this update...So I am settling for comments...



That was simply Amazing n romantic n cute part...at last DevTara r one in love... such a Beautiful confession

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

What a romanticaly delicious confession Avi.Though the update started with Aisha,baby,tara and Dev.But the actual start was when Dev and Tara,were dressed in bridal.The way Dev confessed in d most simplest words was great.And d way Tara answered ,wooohooo...way to go girl.Kya seduction bhara confession tha!!!!!!!!!!
Bhai wah!!!!!!!

The dialogues fm KHNH,Fanaah,OSO are my favourite ones,including d song 'dil ibatdat'

And the videos,i dont abt others but m not complaining.M jst too happy wid Maaneet videos.


Great part buddy and thanx for d password.

Originally posted by: preethi234

Hi! your story is good.

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