New FF Geet ..........sab ki jaan updated Part - 3, page - 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love it cant wait for next one plezzz
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both prts are sweet
love ths story
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fab update|! well written! pls pm
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PART - 3

One day afternoon he came to RANO's room when he saw that RANO is listening to songs.

MAAN- (came to her angrily and asked) Why are u not taking rest?

RANO- I am talking rest only by relaxing and listening to geet ( we will feel good when wo listen to music we like). I love this geet so much.

MAAN- ok ( when suddenly RANO moaned in slight pain because of the movement of the baby and MAAN got scared)

RANO saw that MAAN is getting scared and told him

RANO- Its nothing beta, baby is moving inside na that's why, it seems like baby also like geet very much.(smilingly and MAAN also smiled seeing her smile) Do you want to feel the baby (MAAN don't understand and see here confusingly for which RANO smiled and took his small hand and kept it on her stomach)

After sometime again there is a movement from the baby when MAAN impatiently asking RANO and MAAN smiled excitingly.

RANO- I think baby like your voice, do u want to talk to baby

MAAN- really and started talking to the baby and whenever he talks there is a movement from the baby which make excited.

After some days, there are preparations going on for MAAN's birthday. That day also like every birthday waited for the time to be 12' O clock to greet him. When the time is going to 12 she went to KM to MAAN's room along with other to wish him.

After wishing him suddenly RANO started feel anormous pain in her stomach and fainted. All got stunned with what happned as it all happned within seconds. With very fearful heart all took RANO to the hospital, there they are informed that RANO is labor. All are worried to hell as RANO is still in 7th month of her pregnancy.

After a long time at RANO gave birth to a cute little cotton baby girl ( at the same date and time of birth of MAAN ). Doctors told that RANO is safe but baby is a pre-matured baby they kept her in incubator as she is facing a breathing problem. After 10 days the doctors told that the baby's health is stable now, but they have to be careful because baby has breathing problem.

On 21st day they celebrated BABY's namakaram along with MAAN's birthday ( as on his birthday his birthday party got cancelled ). On that day at the time of namakaram, RANO asked MAAN to suggest the name of the BABY as she is his gift and born on his birthday.

MAAN- I want to name the BABY as "GEET" (all liked that name and asked from where he got the thought to name as GEET)

Then he told, on that day RANO told that she like geet very much when she was listening to the songs and baby was also enjoying. All are once again surprised of his thought and memory.

Till now all the readers have noticed that only MAAN's character has been discussed regarding GEET and all other matters. Now the following is the nature and view of other children of the house.

Since RAM, VIKRAM, BRIJ, DEV, PREM are the elders of their respective families, they are all responsible and matured. Out of them DEV and VIKRAM is some of light going and fun loving boy. Others, i.e., second sons of the families very funny and jovial boys. MAAN is less talkative when any outsiders are present but, with family members and friends he is very expressive and jovial guy.

Though every child in the family makes fun of him but all of them love him very much and always covers his mistakes he do in his innocence in childhood from elders as he the last child of the family until birth of GEET. Yes he is innocent in childhood.

The elders and male members of the family always gives respect to the women of the families and society. They also thought the children of the families that women are very strong ( not in physical , strength ) and all of them should respect women, as they are considered as LAKSHMI of the family and tears of the women are not good for the family.

Therefore, every child in the family gives so much respect to their elders. Like every elder in the families, the children of the families are also very existed about the pregnancy of RANO. They are the one who helped RANO and assisted MAAN in taking care of RANO and now after birth of GEET.

And about our little angle, as she is days baby, she don't need her mother except at the time of her feed. But if she cries in her sleep or when awake, she won't clam down easily. One such day when she started crying at mid-night. RANO and MOHINDER tried to clam her but no result. Slowly all the elders of the family tried to clam her again same. Meanwhile MAAN also came there as he slept in HM that night after playing with GEET, saw what is happening. Meanwhile, elders thought of calling doctor, but our MAAN silently came to her and kept his hand on her little tummy and patting her, within second she become calm and smiling at MAAN. All become stunned and took a sign of relief.

That was the bond between MAAN and GEET.

Because of life risk, the family members deciding to keep low profile of GEET. It is decided that any function or celebration will be done between the family members and GEET will not take part in any functions and parties.

It is also decided that GEET will attend the school in car by back gate and will be under the eyes of her brothers and MAAN.

It is GEET's 4th birthday and MAAN's 9th birthday. As usual there had celebration at home. That year they decided to distribute sweets at ORPHANGE by GEET. When all the children are playing, then GEET told them she got gifts and asked the other children when is their birthday. Some children become sad and silent and small kids of her age started to cry for gifts. She become scared and also started crying with them. Immediately all the elders and care takers of the ORPHANAGE came there and asked the reason

CHILD - Geet asked when is our birthday and what gifts we got showing her gifts and all of them started crying

All the people around them got sad where Geet asked why they are crying

Then they told that they don't know their birthday and no one give them any gifts

Geet stopped her crying and thought for a while and told to all the people that they celebrate their birthday today and told to her family to give them all the gifts. All her family members become surprised to her thought and followed her orders to make her happy. This way all the orphanage children started celebrating their birthday on GEET and MAAN's birthday.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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terrific update! superbly written! loved it! update soon~!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Awesome ff...
loved it..
cutie maaneet😊
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAAN AND GEET HAVE A BOND FROM BEGINING
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome story...loved it
aww maan s damn so cute...n maaneet bonding
waitnfor n ext..cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just came across ur ff
Its simply awesome
I love evrything abt the family
pm me ur updates pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice ff
luved their bonding
plss continue sson

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