A LIE OR A TRUTH OF LOVE.. MG SS FINAL PTS pg 39 nov 29 *COMPLETED* - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 5 n 6
nice updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part..
maan is thinking about geet seeing her sis antics
w8ing 4 next encounter
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb updates for parts 5 and 6. Maan just got out of a relationship but his mind is somehow on Geet who he has met once. Glad that daadi understood that he needed the time to sort things through and so she didn't insist that he return immediately as she had originally asked. Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the six parts
It's nice story
Sameera cheated maan hate sameera
And geet is really close to her father and had a sad impact of her father death
Continue soon dear
Want to see how they are going to meet second time
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part...😃pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice updates
Maan daily watching geet...but hasn't seen her face
Who killed geet's dad...eagerly waiting to know ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 9

it was the daily routine since last two months maan was with her physically present but still he havent made her aware of his presence.. Till now he knew it was her.. The girl who messed up with maan singh khurana but strangely he couldnt get away with those painful eyes...
Those eyes haunted him.. Unka dard saha nahi jata tha ... Maan was brought up with so much love and care his eyes were always twinkling with mischief... He was the apple of his family.. Being the youngest he had an undue advantage...
Today it was five and he was late.. He went and today she was not there... His eyes scanned the whole place.. The barn seems aloof without her.. He went and sat on the same place...
Today she was late.. Geet was having her last days of college... She was busy but today she felt like coming after sunrise...
The brightness she wanted to absorb.. Without knowing that someone was thete on her place she went and sat besdie him.. He was so lost in his life and his memories with included her too.. They were in a trance ...
Maan : kyun kisi ko bhula mushkil hota hai... Kitna chaha tha maine use.. Sab kuch sach tha.. Ek sapne jaise phir ek dum se sheese ka wo kwab kyun toot gaya... Dard hua tha.. Bahut dard.. Abhi bhi hota hai.. Par uss dard se jyada apno ko dukh pahuchane ka guilt hai...
Geet : pyar toh main bhi karti thi par unhe maine kho diya... Apno ko me bhi dukh deti hun.. Mere aansu unhe rulate hai.. Par khud ko rokna mere bas me nahi hai... Me bhi kya karun...

Maan just smiled and he knew that it was her.. He turned towards her.. What an irony seeing her he forgets anything everything.. She seems so soft and endaring... A soft and tough baby doll types.. And he absolutely loved to see her dressed in suits.. Pure punjaban.. And hard to handle...
Maan: tum mujhe maaf karogi uss din ke liye... Kisi ka gussa maine tum par nikaal diya...
Geet looked in his chocolate brown orbs which were having contentment .. She smiled and blinked her eyes.. She somewhere doesnt even remember that incident...
Geet without saying anything just went..
Leaving maan in a pure contentment
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it was two months they share the same time in the morning.. He couldnt share what he want but he knew...
Maan had been equally dedicated in his work.. The construction was half done.. There were already praises for him and none knew who is he.. Some call him maan some shehri babu and some maan babu.. He was change..

He often talks with his dad and daadima regularly telling her about his day.. But not about his geet...
Geet yes he knew her name.. They were carried off as friends she had shared her griefs and her joys with her and he had told her about sam and the incident that brought him here...
Maan : sam ne mujhe dhoka diya .. She cheated on me isliye i broken up with her.. She wanted me for some mean advantages and i somehow ot to now..
Par maine sab ko hurt kya...
But who are sab he never told her.. He doesnt tell her about her family... For her he was there and alone... No family and no one...
Maan didnt knew why he had told her about sam but he had ... Something had made him...
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it was late and maan was in the cottage he was late he and had already asked munshiji not to wait for him..
He was tired but didnt knew that something was waiting for him.. It was abou eight and he was literally tires.. When he saw geet was waiting for him.. She came and shoved a piece of sweet in his mouth...
Geet : me aaj bhaut kush hun .. She was literally happy.. And she just told him about her happiness...
Geet : maan i am graduate now... U know it was papaji's wish and i fulfilled it..
Ye lo ek aur..
Poor maan he couldnt even say no that he doesnt like swwets and just ate having it ..
He just went and brought something from his room...
Maan gave it to her...
Maan: geet take this , it will make you more happy...
He gave her , it was a red and golden dupatta that he had seen with hers but that was torn by his mistake...
Geet opened it ..
Geet : ye toh waisa hi hai... You know wo wala mene bhai se zidd karke liya tha

maan : geet will you marry me
he said in a trance making geet rooted on her spot

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow she was. 'there when her DAD died
On man not good thing to see right
But she did
And she can't forget if
As if anyone can
Not easy is it
And maan comes to see her all the time
Well he can't stop himself it seems
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Posted: 11 years ago
Did he just ask that
Will you marry me
In he kya ho gaya hai
So they started talking to one another
Shared their personal problems
And got to know the other
Well at least with her he finds some relief
Forgets all his worries and relaxes
Hmmm but he didn't say about his family
Wonder if that makes a difference
Maybe it will
But what will get say to his proposal
Was it a proposal though
Guess we Will know and soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Achanak se marriage proposal from Maan.. How..?😲 N khurana being involved in her father's death.. what will be her reaction?

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