Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58 - Page 40

thanks 4 updating... will read

I just have a slight idea about the story... But enjooyed the part .Glad to have you back

Originally posted by: ChandlerBing

This chapter was such a wake up call for me.

You know me so you do know how fanciful I am.

I have always loved the stories where the reality sucked so much that the couple would call it a truce and rediscovering themselves from a different tangent altogether.

I am guilty of writing something like that as we speak.

But then what Maan said had made me snap out of the ideal world where you could be blind to the truth and start building a world that is fiction.

Worst part is I get him. You can't ignore the filth around you

I would want nothing but them to bridge the chasm between them. Not because they are Maan and Geet. Not because they are protagonists.

Just because I remembered how they first met. And it bought back memories of her scar, of the growing distance.

Who doesn't want to be happy? And if not us, at least I want them to be happy.

Thanks for coming back.

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Clears through the fog and sees whom? This fog story which is about depths...
What a surprise haan. I am back to the Darjeeling moods (and woods and rains and wetness and hauntingness and some 4-5 people in the guesthouse and sometimes in the town elsewhere).

I re read it again because I forgot how it was and then this update made me a little less sad and frustrated at them. Made me feel a little less hopeful that there ever can be filmy breakdowns and confessions and a normal patch up where these two will smile together. You know a thought came where I wished these two should call it over, totally over, for their sake. He fumbles a lot and can't voice out what he feels and what he wants from her. He clearly needs her, and when she isn't there or misses his point, can't tell her for the fear of upsetting her or I don't know why, but clearly he fears her and she makes me feel anxious, unsure. So many times. And then he chooses another time to vent out, almost in defeat. I wish he had a friend or a parent or someone else to talk to. Not about their relationship. I am sounding like their counsellor.
About Geet, she is Geet. The conflict. She craves attention from him, she loves him, but she loves her work as well and is clueless sometimes about how he feels about things. But she chose to ask. Okay. Hmmm like that?. But he chose not to give it words. And instead generalised the whole scene and wow words which hurt. Self obsessed people these two.

I really don't want them to be separated, because if that's what happens when there are these tiffs/misunderstandings, I don't want to imagine what happens to them if they completely cut each other off. It's too much love (question mark on that word) and more than that too much expectations from each other and this relationship. I feel like get boring you two please, that would be better.

I think ye jyada ho gaya. And it won't make much sense.

But yo so so so so glad to see you here.

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 45 - Feeling sad for both. She wanted to spend some time with him but he was tired of her thinking about herself. She was hurt when he told her his opinion. They both went so distant. At least geet was trying. He broke her again. She came to mr Khurana from maan. Thnx for updating.

Originally posted by: taahir004

Maan and Geet unknowingly both have drifted so apart though they love each other

the problem is Maan is annoyed his wife has not made her mind up what she really wants

in her life he feels suffocated

while for Geet they have not truly had a fight and the day was pleasant but in Maan's words

she was the one enjoying not him which points at perhaps he wants to be with his wife have solace

so when he tells her how uncertain she is about each and everything it aactually hurts her

that her husband feels that way about her

they both have distance themselves so much that they will have to start right at the beginning again

to mend everything

Geet going out of the room with her gun loaded ...and what was that bang

Originally posted by: honeygrape

I just have a slight idea about the story... But enjooyed the part .Glad to have you back

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I'm struggling to stay awake so I will reply to your amazing insights tomorrow but I just wanted to say you left my heart full with your attention, detail and love (because you can only become this exasperated with those you love).

I'm spoiled to have a reader like you. Thank you for being here.

P.S. Your comment was the reason I took so long with replies. I was so stumped because I'd forgotten how it felt to have such detail and thought put into my work and I was left speechless and grateful. So thank you.

Ayyo. I am stumped by your response too. Thankyou. I feel like a vivacious avid some big word reader or something. You maybe surprised but this story from the first chapter itself was special to me and had a space in my head because it has a feel and imagination to it. And offcourse that factor that what happens after you seal the deal, the relationship and careers and individuality, the concept of reality of big word 'love' and another big word 'marriage', that I found here. And this big city strong headed couple with some individual traits and obsessed about making it perfect I could imagine, but hadn't seen in stories. Or maybe I had but I don't remember. But again, it's different. And I really wish these few stories that I read here, find their readers and their ends ;-). And I will be here till the end, because yo it's so easy to read some really nice stories without a penny and effort. It really is, so I guess readers are spoiled.