Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58

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Dona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#351

loved the update...

maan geet are similar yet so different...so near yet so far...complex emotions...

there is something that binding them not letting them go...

its like darjeeing started to show its magic little by little...

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Muskan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#352

I see how they r cautious yet themselves
Nice part
Happy new year
Thanks for the update

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Madhuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

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part 43 - why she said that nothing she has created ever lasted...hoping that her relation with him lasts forever...what maan was thinking..?

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#354

commenting after many days...
but now have read the story again, and most of the comments as well..
really insightful discussions on the story and each chapter...

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#355

Chapter 41

looks like Gopal Kaka knows about Dev and Nayantara or he starts off with everyone in this moody, scary way but develops a bond over time. it happened with Geet also...
his equation with NT and Dev is similar to what Heer has with Geet and Maan..

and Dev, a spoiled brat initially, using his charm to impress others, living in the shadow of Maan..the background much like GHSP Dev, but major difference is he returned back from the point of going down further and emerged out as a successful man...Maan was not with him during the struggling times...even his father did not support him fully, probably he missed Maan a lot during that time..

What are those nightmares..He and NT, behave as if they are completely strangers..in this update, his thoughts revolved around everyone except Nayantara..but in the end, he rushed to the hospital as soon as he heard about her..

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#356

Chapter 42

this Geet is so different..
so far except that channel surfing part, there were hardly any moments apart from her work where she had enjoyed thoroughly, wholeheartedly...she is going back to her care free self..
Even with Maan, the feelings of awkwardness, of being alone does not cross her mind now...neither they are avoiding each other...Maan is still a bit reluctant, but
the silences between them are slowly lifting up..
it is good to see them exploring new things together..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 9 years ago

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#357

Chapter 43

they are becoming quite comfortable with each other once again, the way they were in the initial days after the marriage until she said that..

what was she referring to for that was not lasted..it was unintentional because that belief has been settled deep down within her such that it came out unconsciously...seems there are many layers to the reason that got accumulated causing them to drift apart..
but this time they are consciously making efforts to not let it affect..

fabulous updates...waiting for the next.

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 9 years ago