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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Congrats for new story ...Loved to read your writings again ..
Awesome name n amazing start quite different but loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi dear,its feel great to see you back.really happy. pleasd remember me even if i comment less aur just one aur two. but still this fact will remain''i realliy like yojr simple and sweet style'''. and now my line from maan p.v k'''' kyu maangte hai log , kissi ko duapo duao main ,yeh ab tak tha na maine jaana . aap ko dekha to pata chala , kya hai kissi dilli aarzo ka poora ho jaana. subah ko roshni ki aarzo hai toh ,raat ko chaand ki chandani ki. roshni ko suraj ke saath ki aarzu hai toh raat ko taaro ki . jab tujhe saamne dekha to jaana ke dil ko bhi aarzu thi teeri,ke ho kissi ka yeh bhi deewana ,yeh justazu thi meri . aaj aapko dekh kar yakin hua, ke kissi ke hasi aankho main rahne ki aarzu thi meri. ok noe iys geet turnchand ho haasil,yeh aarzu har raat ki hai.par kissi raat ko poora milla to kissi ko uska ansh bhi nahi. phir bhi usse jss haasil karne ki aarzu raat main hai hamesha rahi. tu woh chaand hai ,jo mujhe haasil nahi. kyoki tujhe chahnd ke bhi main kaabil nahi. nahi hai aarju ke banu main woh phool, j jisse chumne ke liye bhawara jaaye apni zindagi bhul. main shama hu,par tu na bane parwaana ,yeh aarzu hai meri. par phir kyu lagaa is dil ko ,dekh kar tujhe , ke kaash ho jaaye tu haasil ,yahi to jeene ki aarju hai meri.spelling mistake ke liye sorry.me online from mobilea and it really suck to write from it. hope you like m y few lines.please reply that to soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
beautiful start
but geet's last line was confusing me
y she said she doesn't have right to dream n feel these feelings
plzzz continue it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
congrats for new story... missed u a lot & nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

hi dear,its feel great to see you back.really happy. pleasd remember me even if i comment less aur just one aur two. but still this fact will remain''i realliy like yojr simple and sweet style'''. and now my line from maan p.v k'''' kyu maangte hai log , kissi ko duapo duao main ,yeh ab tak tha na maine jaana . aap ko dekha to pata chala , kya hai kissi dilli aarzo ka poora ho jaana. subah ko roshni ki aarzo hai toh ,raat ko chaand ki chandani ki. roshni ko suraj ke saath ki aarzu hai toh raat ko taaro ki . jab tujhe saamne dekha to jaana ke dil ko bhi aarzu thi teeri,ke ho kissi ka yeh bhi deewana ,yeh justazu thi meri . aaj aapko dekh kar yakin hua, ke kissi ke hasi aankho main rahne ki aarzu thi meri. ok noe iys geet turnchand ho haasil,yeh aarzu har raat ki hai.par kissi raat ko poora milla to kissi ko uska ansh bhi nahi. phir bhi usse jss haasil karne ki aarzu raat main hai hamesha rahi. tu woh chaand hai ,jo mujhe haasil nahi. kyoki tujhe chahnd ke bhi main kaabil nahi. nahi hai aarju ke banu main woh phool, j jisse chumne ke liye bhawara jaaye apni zindagi bhul. main shama hu,par tu na bane parwaana ,yeh aarzu hai meri. par phir kyu lagaa is dil ko ,dekh kar tujhe , ke kaash ho jaaye tu haasil ,yahi to jeene ki aarju hai meri.spelling mistake ke liye sorry.me online from mobilea and it really suck to write from it. hope you like m y few lines.please reply that to soon



dr just loved the poem very much
it was really the gist of my story!!!

thanku very much you really write reallly well!!!

kash i have such talents too 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Congrats and welcome back !!!
Nice prologue.
Great start .. Maan in cool dude style.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
The last part of update confuse me.
wonder what Geet is referring ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Hey we can never forget u...
In fact missed u a lot...
U dont know how much I got happy seeing ur pm
Thn a new ff with such a beautiful concept...
Really loving it...
Maaneet fell in love in first meeting it self :D
Lolzz geet thought maan to be mansi's father :P
Update soon...:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
i also wating for ur next after DAARMIYAN that is was m y one of most fav of maaneet ff.though i can't read AARZOO now bcoz of tight schedule.only friday i can read.hope till then find lots of part of this ff.love u
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Oye neha..teko kaise bhulenge? Btw ham apko bhul jaye ye ho nahi sakta aur ap hame bhula de ye ham hone nahi denge...i cnt tell how much happy iam...darmiyan k bad bahot miss kiya teri stories ko..cuz isi darmiyan to ham dost hue na..arzoo-v nice title..part 1 me hi maaneet ka ankho hi ankho me ishara..oye hoye..btw last line of update,what it mean? Geet ddnt deserve those feelings? Ab intro.me tunehi kaha na ki no rona dhona,yar give us light heartd,enjoy n colourful,naughty maaneet ishtory..hehehe maaneet ka bukhar utartahi nahi..awsme start aur next part jaldi dena..muahh bada wala hug nd lots of love..

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