MG (FF) :Back to You# II (#3 Link: Pg. 145) - Page 98

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

Hey Riya!

Same there, got off thread one and your wonderful long comments. Thank you so much for the love and appreciation you've shown my way and for that of Back to You.

Also a big thanks for your messages about your comments on previous threads. To be honest, i wouldn't have looked into them unless you'd told me😛

but i am damn confused with later part frosty when maan said he is sleepy n geet shocked????CAN YOU EXPLAIN??????????

Maan asked Samar to leave with them because he was feeling sleepy. Geet gave him a look beacuse,

a. He had had strong cups of black coffee just a while ago as they mentioned...all that caffeine🥱

b. By self admission, the man doesn't sleep all that well; in fact he is awake most nights😳

Hope that answered your question...

I had to go back and search which chapter it was from😆😛

Thank you for all the comments and do keep commenting...love to read different views on the same story!

Originally posted by: RA17

omg sorry for making you go all the way ok as you mention caffeine i got it earlier but yeah his nightmares doesnt let him sleep

really its fun to read it n i know its difficult to assume somebody will go to thread1 so that y i scrap

you

will be waiting for your response on those comments as well

tc😃

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

Hahaa

No problem!

Glad you asked in the first place😆

I will reply to all comments but just can't say when.so please be a little patient😃😳

My hands are full with the other story for now😳

24-25

o man that was so painful agony that he has seen his parents and over above he sees it as his mistake but even if we take it in real will other ppl wont say it yeah they will

geet thoughts well frosty kudos to you to put such things in words it has come up nicely wont say much as myself stunned

i guess i too need alcohol but naa i am having hot water:(

meera, man n dev having fun of her state aww so cute

well its like after watching sad movie i have switch on comedy show nad i guess like we enjoying brunette too enjoying free show,, separating lover LMAO

i must say as you redefined abandoned now u r now defining virtual world n one thing also common in maan stay the promises he made be it open his wounds or now his success achievements which is only confined to his geet

n really unpredictable maneet i must say man trying his best to hold the temptation least is he can do is to hold his love n she in sleepy mood to tease him saying she loves chocolates

n then y not as you mention samar bday ". Chocolate brown crackling hazel; while their breaths mingled in heaves...

Resonance to tangent

Wow the man took her in his possession so s her drink and then dance of passion but yet later sleeping in each other embrace without any inhibition crossing limits just in each their warmth

That was pleasant enough and then we had warm welcomed the lady in front of whose msk becomes maan a lad

As elderly sight will not miss the foresee geet n maan bonding n those words but wonder what will happen when she will know geet present engagement with yash

Down the memory lane geet goes to maan route which only she got thru no one has no one will but then as I said dadimaa is looking for her maan gal

N then two draamebaaz lovely ppl who want to see other happy after getting so struggles in her life hope geet remain there to maintain the status

Geet back to work n again rebellious nature , n if the lady do against her man will it was tend to happen

But wow the more amazing is your writing the way you write action too is brilliant I can imagine maa in grey coat n fierce red eyes n fighting the black giant

N also I like your relate the fear of death from drowning in river to here when knife was approaching her life
AND, that was not enough you made me go with the same tension n misery of geet n coldness numbness n anger of MSK

Whoa lady wat you do is unbelievable after reading updated I kind of taken a sigh of relief nbut knows the next chapter will bring thunders

Ps I agree to ban gc smirk it kills

Nirvana well such heavy word n using at as the ultimate liberation you have been redefine lot of words for me like abandoned n now this

Actually I have read so many ff n sexual union is more about pleasure,physical n love but this side I guess I am reading it first time where no description of their act as raw but more to the feel and more form geet pov as a gal we may feel to surrender to our love our man and also for him to por his feeling his insecurities, his love protectiveness possessiveness.. n best part is she understood as soon as she saw in his eyes nothing more or less she needs and I guess if maan wud have seen in her eyes too wud have found no guilt but dilemma of her heart n truth saying her mind

You remind me of 11 minutes novel which is the only novel of this kind I have read to far and I can connect with you tats wat you call two body one soul although they haven't but yet they are fom the time they met 8 years back

The flashback to present that is only which remain constant.

Well coming back aftermath is used perfect the effects n side-effects can be clearly seen in both gestures n geet thoughts specially

Man,maan is big thing in world but its scary hope he is fine or is he paying cost to success wonder

Atlast home where all the farce layers dissolve in the warmth of the place

O annie have some prob in her right hand oh gosh lot of things are not wat they seems to hmmm n that accident has not only loss of parents but her right hand .. .IS IT FROSTY?????

Oh god suspense or the bad man entry in FF or the one who is behind all this which is leading to accident n make maan feel unhomely.

30 n 31

Liberation to Ice

Ranveer entry seems to me bad man finally come from backdrop to front end

N then moving to harbor seems lot of memories will revive from recent to old ones but wat she said is bitter truth of live difficult to say more difficult to follow but he did finally as soon his mind recall n calculate the danger he is been surrounded n he let her go for her safety

But her sleepless night was less strange than now it become horrified to see maan conditions to the worst

In between I like how geet assess herself from wat as a person she was now n then

He moves on as he knows his control get weaker but she thot she he has shut himself from her all this gloominess the flashback was like a nice spring loved it n their cute word n wordless interaction.

Well yeah the ice effect begins form morning as geet could not se him for b.f n he is not coming for lunch but still she has got another warm person to greet her

Me too feel lil bad for yash but I guess I love maneet more

Direction hmm nice one geet I guess you have to just setle your personal life chaos n then you think on those lines too sweety

She is going to leave in FOUR DAYS no worried you are there naa frosty

Hmm the flashback always bring smile n carved path for us to understand more how they come up to present

Who sorry I just forgot to type

Wat she was again gone like love struck pupply looking of rhis lover how easily her heart flips but his cold attitude wont

He was dating sameera n going to do some serious business if that great accident wont recall him aout her

Frosty then dinner adi ,ipad ...man im getting CONFUSEDDD

Can you explain????????