MG (FF) :Back to You# II (#3 Link: Pg. 145) - Page 97

Originally posted by: Alpha01

Brilliant part. So full of emotions. Maan in anger asking if Geet is taking revenge for walking out on her which hurt her and in turn she has hurt him with her reply. The whole story has been full of complexities and undercurrents. Loved it.

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

Never knew the story would cross this thread.

But I guess, its fate still lays away; there remains that essence of Geet and Maan's relationship which has not been explored. Their anguish in all its shades, their helplessness and reduncy...and then the re-emergence of their spririts. Re-emergence of the togetherness they always deserved.

Let's step into another thread to explore that clash, the high octaves

When she finally will come back. Back to him.

# III

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3896376/mg-ff-back-to-you-iii-throwback-pg-105-26-03-15-completed

Originally posted by: QueenDrashti

I reread this part 👏

"But this never was about revenge. If you understand so little of me then I think it makes me much lighter to walk away. And I don't leave because you had once turned your back on me and never looked my way. No...I don't leave because you were selfish. I leave because I am self less."

"Tumhari khudgarzi ne hume toda tha, ab shayad hum jud na paaye... ".

With that she walked out of the room leaving a million shards of past lining the way she had treaded. And a red eyed man whose eyes pricked with tears unshed while a paper weight lay broken by his side. Maan Khurana' lay broken.

this is 1 helluva impacted dialogues ⭐️⭐️

part 34

Originally posted by: -calculus-

part 34

ok i know i m little late but then its better to be late than never ,right frosty ??

awesome part ,whats with the title MR &MRS Superman 😉,loved it

maan trying his best to be a good jamai

but failed to woo his lugaai 😆😆

and at last Mr gallant tyrant was able to convince his future MIL😉

wow rohan is something ,the boy is 3 still his craze for cars and superman is shocking 😛

hmm at the end of the day he is a boy and boys will be boys huh!!😳

glad maan asked geet the mystery behind daddy and superman becoz even i was left scratching my head when rohan ran towards maan like that 😆

zooopp the past 😆

hahaha they all were there to set up maaneet but clueless of the fact that koi unhe judaa nahi kar sakta be it destiny or that yash !!😡

aww maans mother hen look was soo cute ,and i was waiting for the phele aap waali fight but samar came to the rescue and he also became the bazzigar in money fight and made maaneet the bandars .

spectrum -NIFT Mumbai?? is it

aww maan is so concerned about geetu

loved this sweet past memory

ahhan rohan is all set to make geet drown in embarrassment be it superman or noodles

soo far soo good

i hope geet just forget about the L word

awesome part

i was just drooling when u mentioned AUDI XUV *haaye *

loved maans fatherly instincts

thank u for the pm

love ya

aanya

i loved the way you have written this part OLD SINS HAVE LONG SHADOWS... geet i don't know what could i say about her. her character is beyond my expectations n i must give it out to you for it. i loved how she spoke to maan without sympthizing, she put through her views which surprised not just maan but I'm sure it did surprise the readers like me too. i have no words to describe the beauty of this chapter. just amazing. hatsoff to you :) :)

the updates in this thread was tremendous!!! you had written your selfishness had broken ur, now i guess we can never be one i was amazed at how well you had put it across. if maan was deep into his guilt in the past now its geet hmm... superb story yaar :)

ch21-23

hey frosty i am back dear with thread2

hmm well cool work environment dearut seems hectic n loads of work

oh my my maan is all there waiting for his lady love to receive her from office

ok maan again came back with his fav word haan "stay" but well he is just scared for safety of his gal wat can we say

a caring maan can read her tension n tiredness be it of shoe bite , work or a dress for part

so is in past show geet reading him thru out n let him flow with them n he shoot for her glory or in her glory more of say

samar bday plans from hsi family n his dear ones again peeled the deep pain maan holds

n then frnz hanging around with cricket n pizza sounds fun to me

but i am damn confused with later part frosty when maan said he is sleepy n geet shocked????CAN YOU EXPLAIN??????????

again thyat pain of no parents or so i guess n lonely life the normal joy of life with parents n dear ones this is all so gloomy for the one who has been abandoned( deserted as this word you have redefined in your story so will not used although typed earlier) from above

n then seeing someone having the one he cannot have hurs deeply hurts geet please heal him he needs you badly this part is written way perfect dear

n then her dressing up unconsciously for him n he wants her to be pain free from heels or any other thing as he said real and perfect yet few flaws its beautiful isnt'

but yes you are correct it is zor ka jhataka for me too meera n dev well no naina and samar wat happen lost of question but the thot of maan is so correct what he gain or lose in rar race in last 8 years

n then a man to man talk who also share blood and a girl to girl hearty talks who shares a strong bond well it mad us realze destiny is much bigger n wat we thought or planned fate give us way beyond

hai na kind of emotional , cute love life trilogy with full of upheaval and then a chance to life n love which we want or not is another story

in between a pinch of humour n abandoned smile and dance with love n lots of care

Originally posted by: bina_a

the updates in this thread was tremendous!!! you had written your selfishness had broken ur, now i guess we can never be one i was amazed at how well you had put it across. if maan was deep into his guilt in the past now its geet hmm... superb story yaar :)

Originally posted by: RA17

ch21-23

hey frosty i am back dear with thread2

hmm well cool work environment dearut seems hectic n loads of work

oh my my maan is all there waiting for his lady love to receive her from office

ok maan again came back with his fav word haan "stay" but well he is just scared for safety of his gal wat can we say

a caring maan can read her tension n tiredness be it of shoe bite , work or a dress for part

so is in past show geet reading him thru out n let him flow with them n he shoot for her glory or in her glory more of say

samar bday plans from hsi family n his dear ones again peeled the deep pain maan holds

n then frnz hanging around with cricket n pizza sounds fun to me

but i am damn confused with later part frosty when maan said he is sleepy n geet shocked????CAN YOU EXPLAIN??????????

again thyat pain of no parents or so i guess n lonely life the normal joy of life with parents n dear ones this is all so gloomy for the one who has been abandoned( deserted as this word you have redefined in your story so will not used although typed earlier) from above

n then seeing someone having the one he cannot have hurs deeply hurts geet please heal him he needs you badly this part is written way perfect dear

n then her dressing up unconsciously for him n he wants her to be pain free from heels or any other thing as he said real and perfect yet few flaws its beautiful isnt'

but yes you are correct it is zor ka jhataka for me too meera n dev well no naina and samar wat happen lost of question but the thot of maan is so correct what he gain or lose in rar race in last 8 years

n then a man to man talk who also share blood and a girl to girl hearty talks who shares a strong bond well it mad us realze destiny is much bigger n wat we thought or planned fate give us way beyond

hai na kind of emotional , cute love life trilogy with full of upheaval and then a chance to life n love which we want or not is another story

in between a pinch of humour n abandoned smile and dance with love n lots of care