Secretly Smitten#1 (Thd 2 Link @ Pg 143))

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyyy friendss, I'm Mona again with my fresh story.
I'll update it weekly 😊


Secretly Smitten...



Story of small Maan and little Geet. They were innocent, they were kids, they did not know what they were doing, but their naive act became the most unexpected incident of their life in which they had to suffer for entire life..


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Hieee.. I am Geet & this is my story

Geet, a face of innocence

Geet, the echo of songs

Geet, a flower from heaven

With shinning leaves,


Geet, the sound of cuckoo

Geet, the arms of love

Geet, the lap to heal

And happiness to be feels,

She was the girl; she was the wind of fresh breeze

She was the girl; she was the swing of feathered leaves,

Whirling of soil in bright sunshine,

And spreading of fragrance to all around,

She was sound of rain,

She was children's playful game,

Her laugh was sweet and wonderful,

Used to make laugh God over clouds,


But she was child of aloofness,

She had lack of happiness,

She had wait for her life to come back,

To kiss her and make her also alive..



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INDEX

Part 1 (Scroll Down)








Part 10

Part 11



Thread 2


NOTE : My all DOWNPOUR readers, please you all don't need to be afraid because this FF I am going to update weekly till Downpour ends, so you will get daily update as it it getting now...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1


"Chachi see, Bhaiya tore my doll!!!''

5 yrs old Geet came running to the hall where her aunty was sitting with some guests. Five pairs of curious eyes (two men and two women and an elder old lady) turned toward the child, who was stood there and crying before them.

"Chachi see na!'' Geet comes to her aunty and showed her torn stuffed-doll. As she faced the people before her, everyone's eyes widen seeing her and they got shocked.

"Savita ji, Is she married??'' Question arose in everyone mind, looking Geet with filled head with red Sindur and tying Mangalsutra in neck, wearing a little frock which was coming till her knee she was holding her doll in arms and was sobbing.

Savita, Geet aunty got sacred. She did not want to disclose the truth before would be in-laws of her elder daughter who had come from city. They had come to see Neer, Geet elder cousin, 18 yrs old and was supposed to be marrying soon.

"O nahi ji, how can she be married ji.. We are not that conservative. Yes of course we live in village but our thoughts is far above from this low mentality people who believe in child marriage'' Savita spoke with extra sugar coated words, but inward she was hell afraid.

"Then why she was wearing Mangalsutra?'' The old lady asked curiously. She called Geet to her. "Beta, come here''

Geet first looked to Savita and finding permission she walked toward lady. She made Geet sit in her lap and heeded to her Mangalsutra which was so big for her small neck. It was hanging till below of her chest.

"Its real gold'' Lady was surprised along with all presented people there, leaving Savita alone who was scared.

"Haan ji Maaji, its gold. She must be playing with her friends and in play would have worn my Mangalsutra. Haina Geet!!'' She stared the little Geet who was yet not realizing what was happening there.

"You were playing na Geet!!''

Geet nodded. Yes of course she was playing with doll.

"Haan, I was doing wedding of my doll but that Bhaiya torn my doll'' she again complained caressing the messy hair of her toy.

"No prob Beta, we will bring new doll for you'' The old lady said lovingly, seeing the cute innocent child who was looking not less than a little fairy on earth.

Guests got satisfied, thinking in play Geet would have worn the divine marks of marriage. They continued their process and finally Neer marriage was been fixed.

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In late evening, Geet sees her father was returning back, without waiting for anyone say, she rushed to bring water for him.

"Baba water''

Mohan who was removing off his shoes bending down, looked up and sees Geet, his little beautiful daughter. Looking at her, his every tiredness and worry used to vanish off in no time. Every time her face made him remember his departed wife, Rano and the ocean of love started to flow down in form of tears but he never showed his tears to anyone. He smiled looking Geet, took water from her hand and was to drink it when his eyes fell on her Mangalsutra and Sindur. His veins started fluttering strongly in fury. Without drinking a sip he carried Geet in arms and hastened inside.

He stopped before his elder brother room and said in loud sound,

"Bhabhi, what is this!!''

Hearing his shout Savita came out running along with her husband.

"What Mohan?''

Neer also came running out from her room who was dreaming about her marriage. Mohan removed Mangalsutra from Geet neck and showed,

"This Bhabhi, what's this!! For God sake how many times I would have to tell you all I don't accept this marriage which happened with my daughter. We all know it was just a game damnit!!!'' He wanted to remove Sindur mark from her head when Savita stopped him.

'Mohan please, don't do this it will bring unfortunate in Geet life''

"What unfortunate I don't believe in this rubbish!!!'' He placed Geet down on floor. Scared Geet runs to Neer and hid behind her. Neer placed her arms around her protectively.

"Savita saying right Mohan, you should not have done this. Should not have removed Mangalsutra from her neck, it can be unlucky for her'

"What unlucky Bhaiya. Look at her age. She is only 5 Bhaiya not even has started living her life. What unfortunate can harm her when her own people are not letting her live her in freedom? In this tender age she has been forced to obey all rituals which a married woman does when we know, her husband never would come back, Maan will not come back Bhaiya he will not!!!!



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yehhh me firstđŸ€—đŸ„ł

geet is marriedđŸ˜Č

maan is hr hubby😃

but y he will nt cum back
Edited by dhakdhak22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds very very interestinggg...aww that kkid is chhooo cutee ...😊 eagerly waiting for the story to unfold
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice stroy di love it😛😛
its looking diff 😊😊.
maaneet ki shadi hogaye đŸ˜ČđŸ˜ČđŸ˜Č.
geet ki chachi ko geet ko mg nd sindoor nahi phenya chah etha
pata nahi kya hoga
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh.. new one.. Interesting..Liked first part.. But how this marriage thing happened..? Waiting for it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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intresting and new concept
She is just a little baby
And is married
She is so cute
Maan is gone
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey mona tune bataya kyun nahi tum ek nayi ff start karne wali ho tumse khatti raat ko downpour ke thread pe dekhti hoon tumhe
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhakdhak22

yehhh me firstđŸ€—đŸ„ł



Congrats dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya111111

hey mona tune bataya kyun nahi tum ek nayi ff start karne wali ho tumse khatti raat ko downpour ke thread pe dekhti hoon tumhe


aree maine abhi kisi ko bhi nahi bataya .. noon me toh post hi ki and srf FB pe links post ki .. raat me sab ko thread pe bataungi .. ab tu bhala leke mera wait mat karna waha

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