The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 88

Originally posted by: heytal

Absolutely fabulous update!!!!!!!

Simply superb

Loved it

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

😆At last inki sawaari yaha tak pohunchi... It was perhaps the hardest to write this Maan but I am so glad for all that stayed with me to this point..

On RTM anniversary a RTM update☺️

Truly reminded me all the lovely moments and memories😃😭

Finally Maan has his Giit all for himself

Loved he carefully, slowly and steadily eased and approached his chui-mui Meeshti😳

His possession, his concern, his right, his love and his earnest approach so touching

Dil ko chu gaya😊

I think he is the guy of every girls dreams... and yet an everyday person who does tiny tiny things to keep you in permanent meltdown...so far neither his wealth nor being MSK had any impact on the two hearts...

The weather, the ambience, their emotional turmoil, the songs, their dance, their feelings and their unconditional love all weaving a magical aura just for them😳

Nature conspiring for them!!!!

Yes all the stars are in alignment ... zindagi mein aisse pal itne haseen hote hai, that once you experience it, the tingle lasts for years and brings a smile and happiness to the heart. Geet has this memory to tide her through the years of separation...

Thanks Avi for this awesome update

It was truly romantic😛

The way you penned down each minute detail of their expressions, their turmoil, their joy and their restrain was just superb.

I was super happy with the response of all of you. I know this has been a while to come in the story but I could not rush some of it.

I am really running out of words yaar just awesome😃

Loved their jaymala😳 sequence and kisses

Haaye Maan claiming his Meeshti☺️

and Meeshti accepting it too😃

Abhi Mishti bulana baaki hai... coming soon a small part..😃 to bridge the gap between this update and the present.

But itne amazing update ke baad separation🥺

Mera dil nahi maaning😒

But jaldi sab theek ho jaaye

Of course... mujhe rona dhona pasand nahi... Life mein kam musibat hai ki story will be sobby .. not mine..😃

Avi is ready for some naughtiness...😉

Avi🤗

thanks for updating

😳

Waiting for fatakdi and chalia update😎

Originally posted by: LILY111144

avi kab milega another THUD updtt...???...😉😆

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Monday uska milega na... tho aaj use phele ek update de de...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

am so late... sowieee...

though am late, i have read the update more than 4 times...

u have left me completely speechless in this part...tareef kis kis ki karoo ab?? i am completely under ur THUD effect...

"Aap ko bhi darr lagta hai?"LOL... hey babaji yeh ithni cute kaise hain ...

kya timing hain sneeze ka...maan had to release her from the magical hug... but reading on i came to know what a good timeing it was
i enjoyed reading both drooling on eachother...

Adam must be wearing a black vest 👏 but am sure no one can beat maan in a black vest😉

the locket part was just the best...⭐️

and the way he wished her bday... kya kahoon? he was craving for a kiss atleast on her hand... aur yahaan tho kiss ki gaddi laga di


but y the last part of past??? aage kya hua? i mean did maan tell her about his london trip? or did he just gave her the note? even after the kiss y maan didnt confess?confusion hi nahi hotha tab...

now dev tara... no doubts that am waiting for that too