The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#861

😃
I read d part again to cmnt.And my expressions at the end is jst like this😃 with My Maaneet's kiss.Haiii sensuously adorable.Maan gave so many kisses to her moon😲Naughty 😳 Actually lovely.

Love d part where Geet remembers"Pahen lo nahi toh pehna doonga"😆Its one of my fav. dialogues of d show.And then d rain,d white shirt,d moonlight,d song,Maan asking her out for d farewell party in d most sensuous way and she agreeing,just outstanding.

And then comes d legendary 'Locket',they exchanged each others chain like 'Jaimala' and kissed.

God after so many beautiful moments they fell prey to MUs and suffered pain,feeling sad.

Yet eagerly waiting for next part😊

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#862

Ooops I forgot to mention about the Maan Thud,even I suffer fm that😔

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teja21

@teja21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#863

dat was awesome

loved it

thanx fr d pm dear😃

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: dqno1

How will she or any other writer.. hint hint... know that people are waiting for them?

You should bug her... wo bura nahi maanegi...

If she does blame it on me...😆

She won't fight with me...😃

okays 😊😊

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: LILY111144
prt 46 nd 47wah re kabir kya kismet payee hei khane ko kush nehii dande hei tere naseeb mein...lov dis line.finally locket came into pic.high point s HAMARE BACHE ,maan ki to nikal padiii...😉 aur mere dil ne kara THUD..auto scene mast aur upper se driver ke kya kehne,,,,,,songs nd shary lov it...rain ,coffee lightning geet maan ki bahon mein ...kya apko bhiii dar lagta hei yeh to maan ki giit hi push sakti hei...
adam in black vest ...😆 dey exchanged deir lockets dance nd,,kiss, hw many tyms I rd both prts 4gt de count ,aftr rding thud prts by thud writer mein bhi ho gayee hun thud 😉,,,,,,,👏👏👏👏👏

Thank you thank you thank you Lily...😆

Itna applause.. finally was able to get them to this stage... even I was too eager to write this scene..

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: sona-rai
Main bhi THUD:) Maan Thud:0
it an Amazing Beautifull Lovely Update:)
muahhh Avi:)

Sona... 🤗

humare bacche Mubarak tujhe...😆😆

Ek aur aayega.. end tak...😃

chaar maange thay na...😆

Avi demand fulfill karne main maanti hai..😃

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#867

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
😃
I read d part again to cmnt.And my expressions at the end is jst like this😃 with My Maaneet's kiss.Haiii sensuously adorable.Maan gave so many kisses to her moon😲Naughty 😳 Actually lovely.

Love d part where Geet remembers"Pahen lo nahi toh pehna doonga"😆Its one of my fav. dialogues of d show.And then d rain,d white shirt,d moonlight,d song,Maan asking her out for d farewell party in d most sensuous way and she agreeing,just outstanding.

And then comes d legendary 'Locket',they exchanged each others chain like 'Jaimala' and kissed.

God after so many beautiful moments they fell prey to MUs and suffered pain,feeling sad.

Yet eagerly waiting for next part😊

Abhi kiss part baaki hai...😆 Avi thodi zyaada naughty hai... saving for 50th update..😃

About the MUs Geet did not fall prey to it...

I am surrounded by such strong females that it is hard for me to show flaws in women..😃

MUs won't be for long don't worry..

Thanks so much Sampa. I look forward to reading your comment😃