The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 69

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Posted: 11 years ago
dat was nice

thanx frr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
good update
hamara bachee😊
waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
ahhh so she delivered twins on way to hospital
maan this will happen with you once geet is pregnant
well that wont be for a while
but its best to get some practice ahead of time
hamare bache hain really geet
waise true maybe in future but not now
wow kya mausam tha
bol dijiye maan
maukka bhi hai aur dastoor bhi
and you never know when you will get the chance again
ahhh maneet what a day it has been for them
and still more to come
lets not forget dev tara too man
lagta hai bahut kuch hone waala hai aage
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
wo superb..
ah maan ne decide toh kiya..bt will he be abke to execute it...
dadi ko bhi pata chal gaya...ohhh
hehehe..humare bacche... future mai yeh jarur sach higa...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully written as always.thank you for sharing.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved it maan and geet being part of a birth bonds you in a way noting else does loved how kabir hid and both looked in together awesome update thanks for the pm brilliant
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Posted: 11 years ago
Simply awesome update
Superb part
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurti30

beautiful dear

sona mam gave birth to twins and geet saying hamare bache and man is being happy hearing it. must be thinking of future😆
loved the shayri by auto driver😆

Thank you😃 Glad you liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

"Lilaah marr gaye" ... 😳😳😳

Seriously Avi that last line in the poem was so apt 👍🏼 Maar dala ... THUD.

He wants to give her the Locket 👏 Good progress and what dreams with the pillow ... Maan babu is one chupa rustam 😆 (Reminds me of someone 😉) Daadi will do her best I guess

Loved all of Naureen's shayaris 👏 Especially --- Is dharti se uss ambar tak, do hee cheez gazab ki hai ... Ek tera bholapan, doosra mera deewanapan" Hayee ❤️

In dono ke bholepan aur deewanpan ke wajah se toh hum sab yahan ghayal hai 😉😆

Loved his thoughts about "Humare Bacche" and not even allowed a hand kiss 😆 how innocent thoughts na? 😉

But... raat abhi baki hai..😳☺️. and I'm waiting for it

Continue soon 🤗

Thanks Onir😃
I so love this quiet love of theirs. I think of everything I have written, this Maan is closest to my heart, sort of resembling someone close to me..😉
Can't write romantic scenes without the shaiyari.
Naureen is sorely missed by me. Mari saves the photos and I save the shaiyari...😃
Raat abhi baaki hai... Par inn dono ke saath kuch bhi ho sakta hai...😆
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeygrape

kabirs misery , when will it end...i feel bad for him...glad that he has megha though he doesnt acknowledge it...😊 loved their last scene , the way megha giggled n his reaction to that... guess thats the next 'non-maaneet' pair am gonna start loving in ur story other than dev-istar..😳.

so kabir-megha are in the running too..😃
.btw he doesnt call her istar these days Avi...Dev ko yaad dilaavo pls...He called her other names to stay away from her Purvi. Now that she is close to him, he will call her Tara.
dadima is a great help always for maaneet...😳 glad that she s there in favour ...
their past ends here means , time for maans arrival😃 and also tym to see his anger/hatred towards her...scared to see that
Someone who loves cannot switch to hate just like that. Sure he is upset with her but it is not hate, it is self preservation and ego now.
ok so his mothers locket, thats from where the story gets its name...😊
loved the faith she has in him...
Try as I may, I cannot write a bad Geet. Love is faith and she has spent two years with that.
and even after being scared he stayed with her through out...
loved the autowala n his songs😳
Avi's love for music has to make itself known...😆
eager to know what happened in the past that got them separated...next waala part jaldi jaldi pls😳😃
when are we getting the part 2 of this one btw...

and the precap...hayyee,...thats my favourite dialogue...pehan lo warna pehna doonga❤️

Thanks Purvi...

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