The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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aditi

@aditi_2010

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#701

Sorry di!!! I could not comment for last few parts...I won't even try excuses just make my best puppy dog face and say sorry I love this right form the very first update but am loving it so much more now...Dev and tara..wow!! am loving how he had made sure he fights for his I-STAR.

And the last two parts were a treat..Maaneet and their subtle romance was just awesome. I loved it to core. Its beautiful how with so small things you showed that geet trusts maan. I hope we get soon the next update as i simply can't wait...😊👏

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#702

awesome Update Dear
I like Maan and geet😳😳😳😳😳
amazing one...Loved it a lot
waiting for next part
update soon and Thanx 4the Pm

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#703

Argh.. aise precap time pe stop kar diya..😈 Geet Hamare bachhe.. girl didn't understand what her words will make sense on person..😉Nice part.. waiting for next part...

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Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#704

Great update👏

Loved it

Thanks for pm😊

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#705

part 46
awesome dear...
oh twas the watchman and not Maan...
Kabir is one interesting character...
missed Naina and Dev though...
but awesome Maan and Geet scene dear...
Daadima feels that finally her Maan is in love...
but no one knows about Maan's girl...
lovely moments...
but why i wonder Maan is so angry and hates, if i say that, on Geet now...
cont soon dear...

PS - nice banner dear...

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#706

firstly... last part par ache se comment nahi kar saki... still settling after the holidays... so lil busy... MAANS THUD EFFECT... every time geet was having this effect, i was feeling the same😳... thanx for this THUD ...

coming to this part...

HAMAARE BACHE... if maan is giving thud to geet... what is she doing? with her innocent and sweet antics am sure she is driving maan crazy... just 2 words and maan will be in the dream world... main , meri giit and hamaare bache😆

Ek taraf se 'humare bacche' kehti hai aur dusri taraf haath bhi kiss nahi karne deti hai.😆😆😆 i just loved ths line yaar...

nature and god is with maan... kya correct time par lightening ka effect diya hain... kudi seedhe uske baahon main... but avi u stopped there😡

will be eagerly waiting for the next... after reading the precap u can imagine how much eagerly😆

ps: this time the song u selected, i hadnt heard before... so heard them and yes i loved the barkha rani...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#707

shayari is sooo beautiful !! all the lines...main kuch na kahun...aur chahun...and ek tera bholapan aur ek mera deewanapan...fabulous !! and the update...hamare bacche...how excited she was...and his cute thoughts...!! and they are having their promised date in the library premises...no one to disturb...he can have all the time he wants with her...waiting ...waiting...

loved the song...mukesh is my favourite singer...especially sad songs...what ever mood I am in...just enjoy his songs...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#708

thank you for the PM..good update...interesting..continue soon..😊

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#709

Originally posted by: aditi_2010
Sorry di!!! I could not comment for last few parts...I won't even try excuses just make my best puppy dog face and say sorry I love this right form the very first update but am loving it so much more now...Dev and tara..wow!! am loving how he had made sure he fights for his I-STAR.

And the last two parts were a treat..Maaneet and their subtle romance was just awesome. I loved it to core. Its beautiful how with so small things you showed that geet trusts maan. I hope we get soon the next update as i simply can't wait...😊👏

Aww Aditi😆 Don't say sorry! I can understand. Sometimes when I write, I too get carried away with the flow and then I have left a res here and there for a while. I understand.

Glad my bhola bholi pair have been loved so much. I had wanted to write this Jodi for so long like this.

Another update coming soon..😃

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#710

Originally posted by: Jannat94
awesome Update Dear
I like Maan and geet😳😳😳😳😳
amazing one...Loved it a lot
waiting for next part
update soon and Thanx 4the Pm

Thanks Jannat.😃