The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: dqno1

Yes you were not here for the poll at the end of the last chapter...😃

I was curious to know which couple you would pick..

One way it was good I wasn't there as you know I am terrible with choosing between my Favourites... I would ask for more with both the couples 😉

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

kabirs misery , when wil it end...i feel bad for him...glad that he has megha though he doesnt acknowledge it...😊 loved their last scene , the way megha giggled n his reaction to that... guess thats the next 'non-maaneet' pair am gonna start loving in ur story other than dev-istar..😳..btw he doesnt call her istar these days Avi...Dev ko yaad dilaavo pls...

dadima is a great help always for maaneet...😳 glad that she s there in favour ...

their past ends here means , time for maans arrival😃 and also tym to see his anger/hatred towards her...scared to see that

ok so his mothers locket, thats from where the story gets its name...😊

loved the faith she has in him...and even after being scared he stayed with her through out...

loved the autowala n his songs😳

eaager to know what happened in the past that got them separated...next waala part jaldi jaldi pls😳😃

when are we getting the part 2 of this one btw...

and the precap...hayyee,...thats my favourite dialogue...pehan lo warna pehna doonga❤️

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: dqno1

No Purvi, it is from the continuation of the night...😊

okies...😊

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#674

Amzing update loved it ..hayee humara bache n maan complain haath pe bhi kiss nhi karne dti lol ...but i guess MU start from this night only

waiting for next update

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krati

@krati5

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#675

"Pehen lo warna pehna doonga"...

avi is line per to sach mein us din mein bhi blush kar gyi thi... waiting for next update

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krati

@krati5

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#676

aur hamare bacche... kitna pyara scene tha

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#677

kya maan bol payega...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#678

Unres my comment on Pg 98

😃

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#679

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Superbly written! MAan in his dream world! Gng to confess to Geet! Dadi notices his behaviour n wonders if he in love! Maan n Geet help Sona ! she has a boy! Emotional moment! Geet in his arms! awesum precap! update soon

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#680

Originally posted by: heytal
Fantastic one Avi
Superb blend of sweet and special moments
😃

Some precious moments of love, responsibility, joy, fear and togetherness so well woven together😳
The moments in the ambulance were awesome...just so touching😊

The best was 'Hamaare bacche!!!!!!!'

Nauri amazing shayri's as always👍🏼
Perfect song!
and then the auto drivers personal touch to it😆
Sach much kahin missis udd na jaaye😉

Finally they are alone and together
rain + coffee+ Maaneet😳

Precap is too hot to handle and hope it stays that way🤔
Avi tera koi bharosa nahi😆

But post this night the much impending separation

Continue soon
Loved it
🤗