The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie
Thud thud thud...

no words except THUD...

AND HERE COMES MY FAV SCENES... THUD..

Mannu😃

Thanks dear... you have no idea for how long I was holding my breath..😆

Glad you liked it😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: Onir
Tu Bin Bataye: hayee
Great moments I feel just before the storm ... loved her trust and his protection and care. 😊

He hasn't told her about his two year further studies and impending distance... but yet dreams of commitment and showing her around as his. 😳

I know further misunderstandings and doubts are going to crop in yet these moments will let them live and dream. 👏

The tear and smile scene I loved 😳

And this time I have a bonus of next one updated too... 😃

Missed you🤗

He is a possessive man what can we say?😆

Jaldi padh lena..

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gurti30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#663

beautiful dear

sona mam gave birth to twins and geet saying hamare bache and man is being happy hearing it. must be thinking of future😆

loved the shayri by auto driver😆

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mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#664

"Acche nahi hain tewar mausam ke aaj kuch,
Aashiq mizaj logon ka Khuda khair kare"

Love this one! ❤️

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: mayyo
"Acche nahi hain tewar mausam ke aaj kuch,
Aashiq mizaj logon ka Khuda khair kare"

Love this one! ❤️

Nauri ki baaton ko dil se laga rakha hai...😃

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Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: dqno1

Missed you🤗

He is a possessive man what can we say?😆

Jaldi padh lena..

Missed??

Yes Ma'am 😆

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: Onir
Missed??
Yes Ma'am 😆

Yes you were not here for the poll at the end of the last chapter...😃

I was curious to know which couple you would pick..

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#668

lovely lovely part...one question Avi, is the precap from present???😳😃

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: honeygrape
lovely lovely part...one question Avi, is the precap from present???😳😃

No Purvi, it is from the continuation of the night...😊

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Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#670

"Lilaah marr gaye" ... 😳😳😳

Seriously Avi that last line in the poem was so apt 👍🏼 Maar dala ... THUD.

He wants to give her the Locket 👏 Good progress and what dreams with the pillow ... Maan babu is one chupa rustam 😆 (Reminds me of someone 😉) Daadi will do her best I guess

Loved all of Naureen's shayaris 👏 Especially --- Is dharti se uss ambar tak, do hee cheez gazab ki hai ... Ek tera bholapan, doosra mera deewanapan" Hayee ❤️

In dono ke bholepan aur deewanpan ke wjaha se toh hum sab yahan ghayal hai 😉😆

Loved his thoughts about "Humare Bacche" and not even allowed a hand kiss 😆 how innocent thoughts na? 😉

But... raat abhi baki hai..😳☺️. and I'm waiting for it

Continue soon 🤗