The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

wow what an update...loved it Avi...just so thrilling and how you are weaving all characters like Kabir in the fabric of this story...it is an art to give equal space to all characters and to make their story interesting and I am loving how u do it...

Frankly speaking I am so enthralled with Tara's story and completely hooked into it...it is little sad that Maan is in London because I am missing him in all this action...but still this story is just awesome. I am at the edge of my seat wondering what next...what next...lOL

so Tara forgot rule number 1 and now there is no way in hell that he is going to let her go...

another story I am missing is Chander and Tara's mom...I want them to finally find peace with each other...

ok coming back to update my many thanks to Kabir...I was also quite worried about Geet and many many thanks to you for making Dev know some truths...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: love2_soma

sahi kahoon humein toh dev-tara ki story zaada interesting lag rahe hai maan-geet se...kyunki unke life mein toh zudai...dukh aur dooriyan k siba mujhe kuch dikha nehi...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

I don't understand the underlined portion. Abhi Maan Geet ka dukh, judaii aur dooriyan wala portion has been maybe half an update or only in teasers. I have mostly shown only their time in college and their soft romance.

Soma, please read the teaser on page 5. I know you are worried about Sameera but I have already explained that in the teaser.

Thanks for reading.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: ritzy09
wow what an update...loved it Avi...just so thrilling and how you are weaving all characters like Kabir in the fabric of this story...it is an art to give equal space to all characters and to make their story interesting and I am loving how u do it...

Frankly speaking I am so enthralled with Tara's story and completely hooked into it...it is little sad that Maan is in London because I am missing him in all this action...but still this story is just awesome. I am at the edge of my seat wondering what next...what next...lOL

so Tara forgot rule number 1 and now there is no way in hell that he is going to let her go...

another story I am missing is Chander and Tara's mom...I want them to finally find peace with each other...

ok coming back to update my many thanks to Kabir...I was also quite worried about Geet and many many thanks to you for making Dev know some truths...

Dev and Tara are on the verge of something new and hopefully exciting.

Maan will be a glimpse in the next Dev Tara part. Unfortunately, I need to set up everything in line so that when we come to the present the situations are already in front of the readers and the story becomes more juicy.

Chandan and Poonam will be featured soon too. Dev-NT have to be sorted first for the flow.

It gives me a boost when you comment Ritzy. Thanks so much for having faith in my abilities which sometimes I doubt😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: dumas
awesome update glad kabir reached in time to save geet and dev heard tara tell geet the whole truth and what was going on awesome update loved it that brig is one sick man thanks for the pm

Thanks Kathrina😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: valli30
nice part
tara and dev worried about geet
kabir was there at right time thank god
tara telling geet about the reason of her leaving
dev has listened their talks😃
loved it
continue soon

Thanks😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
lovely and relieving update...😃

after reading the teaser, though knew that nothing wrong will happen to geet, but still jab tak pad na loo ... chain nahi... kabirs spontaneous thinking and act have really freed geet from the upcoming danger...loved kabir more when he told dev about being indebted to geet and all...he is surely a lovely person as he not only acknowledges the help of others but knows there worth too...

dev... just a sweet heart... the way he was ready to attack kabir thinking that he is the culprit, his tight hug to geet and calling her bacha (kaash maan suntha😉), he caring kabir... just made me love him more...

after reading the last part where nt was chased by a person in the bus, i had thought he as devs detective... he was just a random person?

the last portion... thanx... after all dev came to know every thing... and the way he told about the rules to her ... though he is hell angry but sounded cute too...😆

cant wait for the next part... will u include dev tara too along with maaneet??i cant believe am asking this... avi kya kar dya tumne... 😆

Yes, the person following NT was just a random person.

Dev Tara, you will have to wait, Next is Maaneet. I am beginning to doubt that anyone is loving my Maan and Geet parts Hope the next part is to everyone's liking. After that, we will be in the present.

Thanks Lakshmi for your support😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: dqno1
Yes, the person following NT was just a random person.

Dev Tara, you will have to wait, Next is Maaneet. I am beginning to doubt that anyone is loving my Maan and Geet parts Hope the next part is to everyone's liking. After that, we will be in the present.

Thanks Lakshmi for your support😃

some words are unspoken... maaneet, do u think i wont love them???

its just that dev tara part is so intersting now , that am waiting for them...dev have come to know the truth, cant wait to know what will he do...but that doesnt mean that i dont want maan...

in this part too missed maaan... when geet called dev veerji, i wished he could have heard that...😆