The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
Great part.

The Dev-Tara kiss was superb.Though it was urgent more than passionate yet needed.

And then kabir saved Geet fm Brij.God I almost thot that creep got her but thank God Kabir was there.And then Kabir's ST made me remind that there's always no Kabir to save the various other Geets.I was scared for Geet and Us.

And finally Dev came to know about the truth,superb.It shud've happened.

Great and happening part.

Waiting eagerly for d next.

Missed Maan.

yes, that is what I wanted to convey. Too early for passion from NT at least

NT would not have told Dev so this was the way To get the matter before him.😃

Maan coming soon😃 Maybe for your b'day😃

Thanks Sampa

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Thank God, Kabir came at the right time, warna Pata nahi kya hota.

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Jaggy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Amazing update ...loved it Kabir ur angel Awww Dev concern n care for geet muaah

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

awesome update glad kabir reached in time to save geet and dev heard tara tell geet the whole truth and what was going on awesome update loved it that brig is one sick man thanks for the pm

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love2_soma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

sahi kahoon humein toh dev-tara ki story zaada interesting lag rahe hai maan-geet se...kyunki unke life mein toh zudai...dukh aur dooriyan k siba mujhe kuch dikha nehi...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Awesome update dear 👏👏👏👏
Loved the update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ But that Brij😡😡😡😡
waiting for next part
update soon
Thanx 4 the PM Sweety

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valli30

@valli30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

nice part
tara and dev worried about geet
kabir was there at right time thank god
tara telling geet about the reason of her leaving
dev has listened their talks😃
loved it
continue soon

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

lovely and relieving update...😃

after reading the teaser, though knew that nothing wrong will happen to geet, but still jab tak pad na loo ... chain nahi... kabirs spontaneous thinking and act have really freed geet from the upcoming danger...loved kabir more when he told dev about being indebted to geet and all...he is surely a lovely person as he not only acknowledges the help of others but knows there worth too...

dev... just a sweet heart... the way he was ready to attack kabir thinking that he is the culprit, his tight hug to geet and calling her bacha (kaash maan suntha😉), he caring kabir... just made me love him more...

after reading the last part where nt was chased by a person in the bus, i had thought he as devs detective... he was just a random person?

the last portion... thanx... after all dev came to know every thing... and the way he told about the rules to her ... though he is hell angry but sounded cute too...😆

cant wait for the next part... will u include dev tara too along with maaneet??i cant believe am asking this... avi kya kar dya tumne... 😆

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Madhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#349

superb part dear...i always like dev-tara parts...feels like dev is potraying real MAAN and maan is here more sweet, polite, less rude...(I know REAL MAAN yet to come in next parts...)

happy that dev was there all the time to help his tow lovely ladies...hleping geet as her brother, taking care of her when he saw her with kabir...

this part goes to kabir...he saved geet on perfect time...geet always befriended everyone easily and they help her more willingly...it prooved here...but sad that kabir could not see the brij's face...he was behind geet from long time...will he again attack her like this...

tara is scared b'coss of her geet is in danger...she leaving her all alone to stay in that house...but glad that she told everything to geet and dev herad it...

wow...dev in action now and scared tara in problem...she was shaked with his threaten...he will not leave her so easily after her kiss & hug...

next dev-tara part will be exciting...please avi make it more intersting...

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
superb part dear...i always like dev-tara parts...feels like dev is potraying real MAAN and maan is here more sweet, polite, less rude...(I know REAL MAAN yet to come in next parts...)
happy that dev was there all the time to help his tow lovely ladies...hleping geet as her brother, taking care of her when he saw her with kabir...

this part goes to kabir...he saved geet on perfect time...geet always befriended everyone easily and they help her more willingly...it prooved here...but sad that kabir could not see the brij's face...he was behind geet from long time...will he again attack her like this...

tara is scared b'coss of her geet is in danger...she leaving her all alone to stay in that house...but glad that she told everything to geet and dev herad it...

wow...dev in action now and scared tara in problem...she was shaked with his threaten...he will not leave her so easily after her kiss & hug...

next dev-tara part will be exciting...please avi make it more intersting...

@underlined: 😲😲

Glad you are liking it Madhuri. Dev already dimaag pe chaaya hai along with Kabir. Maan is tricky for me cause I don't want to mess with perfection. Wait and watch. Hope I don't disappoint.

😃

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