SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :) - Page 12

This was a unique concept and I applaud you for daring to include homosexuality in your story. A shame due to bashing of others you were not able to complete it as you had intended as I felt there were still missing elements like Maaneet€™s confession of love. Nevertheless it was an interesting story with a happy ending for Geet who was finally able to be free of her fears and trust in Maan.

Thanks for sharing.

I've got no words...i love it ...

man that must have been hard for her
but it worked out for them
though i was worried if she will come out of this
and there is nothing wrong with this story
log toh kuch bhi kahenge unka toh kaam hi hota hai
cheers for pm

Hi Harika,
Wow that was a brave topic to choose and write.In jst two parts you showed me d glimpse of the world I've never imagined.I've read and heard about Lesbians but never thot seriously about this section of society.Or how even girls can get hostile or situation force them to do so or errr... I really dont know.

But I have to say that the concept is out of the box.I dont wanna be judgemental but everybody is free to express their views,so one shud not bash one's work,even after knowing that its jst a fiction and not intended to hurt smone with purpose.


I've gained smthng fm d story.The suffeing of Geet,the changing nature of Sapna,selfishness of Arjun,those women who harrased Geet,Maan emerging as a saviour yet having difficulty to form a relation with Geet for a long period of time,everything left a mark on my mind.

I wud love to read the story with more details as you are forced to end it in hurry.

I wont say ignore the bashers and be happy as its not possible to ignore it when ppl PM you and say harsh words.

But pls try to write the third part,jst a request.We are ready to read it.

Thanx for d story and for being different.

Nice parts,..you could write more parts..I wants to know how Geet become independent..

Awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

i m not happy ye last part kyu tha

Heyy Roohi ya Gundi kise ho aaj kal bahut chup hogaya mai dont worry I am back with my torture

Razaa what it meant re the story was soo sensible but yeah you written what s happening in now days

So you dont have to give explanation to anyone what ever the story you wont let down values specially the love between maaneet

Thats y I like your stories and ha titles of your stories were really soo different sach kaho tho I dont know the meaning of them silly me

And story the way you potrated was outstanding and was just awesome trust me maaneet bidding relation was really wonderful

And sapna what she did for geet was really makes me speechless she killed her son but at end she too leading the same life uffo

Geet have maan with her but in normal cases for those girls no one will be there how pathetic it was seeing girls being raped or being murderd these all were still happening

Your story makes me remember things which I am for getting thanks for that

And ha dont give any explanation if any one hurted you with there words just fight back throw them out of your reach you did nothing just writing your own stories so what to bother about good for nothing bashers I love the way you are ise hi raho my Gundi haha. And ha dont end your stories re short stories nahi chahiye muje I want atleast 50+ parts story and story have to be like ROOH RUSWA RAZAA etc so dont dare to start any short story will kill you. You will end story before I started enjoying the esscnse mercilessly hate you for that huh