SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :)

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

y yaar
ho could u do this with ur story
to hell with those who dont like it tey can keep their ass off from this stry na if not ty liking bt na taang adani hoti hai
plz do cont again na plz
mai iss pe comment nhi krugi
i dont like the so abrupt ending😭😭😭

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

wow lovely emotional start.. very interetesting os.. te way geet ki mil killed her ex hubby for geet ki new life was so emotional.. te way geet went through so much oh god, sapna gave nice punishment to tat arjun.. te way is marrying dev but in prologue,im bitting my nails, so lovely start..i love it dear

Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

last part

wow lovely emotional update.. te way geet life is hangiga nd te way my maan married her giving a meaning to her life was lovely emotional.. but geet is drowning in her dark shell was emotional.. te way my maan trying to bring her out of her shell with his love and geet too falling for him was lovely...geet seeing her maa sapna again she went to her shell making my maan ki all effort in vien ..te way my maan with his passion erasing all her bad memories was so emotional, lovely.. i love te update so much dear

very interesting track but why u end it so soon..

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Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Nice updates👏

Waiting for next part

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Actually i did not like the way it ended

but will not say a word here

I still have questions like why did maan marry geet

did he love or just tat he felt the reason he should marry her

and than sapna turning like tat.. i was not very happy with it as geet had given her the place of her mother and i wanted tat to be divine though she was the main reason for geet's destruction

and dev so he just lusted geet and wanted to marry her for his lust but good pammi showed her real face

and maan had the patience for staying and understanding geet and helping her go through all the moments tat haunted her

is was right she had suffered for no reasons.. but last she got the love tat she wanted

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

it ended you soon
dont take things to ur bcoz of that sick people
I truly loved this story
plz atleast give epilogue

and about update
superb part
dev pammi kick out fromKM
maaneet happy

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

yaar when was geet pregnant...update mai aisa kuch nahi hey..
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Ha Geet pregnant thi tabhi toh woh ofice mein maan ko batane gayee n she got divorce papersfrom Maan. then confrontation.. & finally Maneet together..

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Don't knw who r bashing writers and y...pls if u don't wanna read it, leave it der only...

Lovely story...it was rushed I knw bt understand wht made u do dat...dev n pammi were kicked out n dats wht I loved...

Sapna shocked me...I mean in d jail after a yr...bt u r right...in jails it's very common...few out of choice n few r forced to do it...

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Smily

@angel_smily

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

awesome ss

a very diffrent concept

liked it

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

a harsh truth u hv portrayed here buddy⭐️
nd writing such a reality tkes gr8 courage
like u i also rem bout such kinda girls in my hostel i was horrified knowing bout thm 😡😡😡😡😡😡
nd u hv written it truly
nd bout tht arjun too men like these xist in d society 😡😡😡😡😡😡
but thr r also men like maan who r thr nd u hv described maaneet's love so understandingly too 😃😃😃😃😃
i wud say brilliant on ur part to come up wid such topics
thnx fr d pm 😃

Edited by pixelflower620 - 12 years ago