SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :)

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Teju

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Very different story.. Geet was sexually harassed by lesbos... She saw every relation turned down in front of her own eyes...So it was difficult to trust on Maan.. But Still Maan's confession made her her realize that it was love.. not lust.. somehow he wanted to keep her close to him... Nice story..Harika.. loved it.😃

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Rupi_bains

@Rupi_bains

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

amazing part

but so sad it's finished

so quickly...love to read

what ever u write...great work harika

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dolly10

@dolly10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Nice update...but its ended abrupty😕

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

the way u ended the story tells how much u have hurt with the comments given by some people dont think about them. Any how coming to the part i didnt know anything about lesbians from this update i came to know how they interact the girls who live in hostels must have come across this type of people so with the knowledge u tried to tell through ur writing i am appreciating for ur thoughts.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

hi thanks 4 da pm n nice update! Maan marries her! She is depressed bt he assures her! Pammi n Dev kicked out! Maaneet begin their life! well written

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

No its not last part i am not accepting have to write more this is most amazing true story which touched my heart you cant leave like this

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Hey dear I just read today this story
And I really loved it dont take those harsh pms on ur heart
The last part u written in hurry
But me happy that geet accepted maan and now r happy with each other
I can't believe geet had gone through soo much but now she got maan and he will protect geet forever
Me happy that maaneet thrown pammi and dev out of the house

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

hain bashing...kyun...what is in this story that caused so much reaction...

this is very beautiful story...

when I was reading it mujhe laga ki why this part is written like u r giving summary for remaining story...

chalo ok hai ji if u have given whole story instead of leaving it...

Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

part 2

is great maan entry with bang he try his 100% for relation with geet its beautiful he wait for her well done dear but please don't effect work for other opinion that is there point of view so took positively yaar i think you again write this part story is good so...

women relation is part of our life we couldn't deny it