VENOMOUS DESIRE-THREAD 04

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Sia

@lovesia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

OMg maan got to know that who was his best friend once is trying to harm him by hurting his geet

nd is also behind karan's escape

both veer nd maan r in tension regarding geet safety

OMG maaneet part was hot nd passionate

uss khute de puttar ki toh main chote chote tokde karna chahti hoon how dare he enter maaneet room

doesn't he have any value moral nd respect for anyone

he is such a cheap guy he was trying to see geet all naked but thank god maan ki aadat ki wajah se he was not able to see anything nd when he didn't succeed in that he installed camera in bathroom but again thank god its power dead but special thans to u that the teaser wad just a nightmare of veer

oo veer ki love life ki girl naina is new entry

waiting to know more

nd want to kill that karan *******

BTW dadi ki entry kab hogi kitna time ho gaya hai

Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Awsome update jaanu but i wanna kill that Viraj yaar uska kuchh karrr grrr

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor
Awsome update jaanu but i wanna kill that Viraj yaar uska kuchh karrr grrr

Shona viraj nahin karan..shaayad tu kisee aur FF ki character keh rahi hai!😛

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

amazing updates love it veer too good maan and geet hot passion full romance ..

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Announcement

Hello guys,i wanted to share a news that Venomous Desire is gonna turn one year in 3 days..😊yes on 22nd August..am so happy that my FF is celebrating one year anniversary.😃

So many things happened in this course of time..i got so many friends & readers who gave me love & motivation to write more stories.Love u all guys for standing with me always in this course of time.🤗

First i wanted to share something which is related to this story.When i wrote the prologue..i dint thought that the story gonna get so much popularity.Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai jab kiseene FB se mere prologue ko padkar mein po*n story likh rahi hon aisa kaha tha!That was the first harsh comment i got from FB.But on that time i dint thought of turning this into FF..i had thought of turning it in 4-5 pts of OS but...I was depressed on that time & sought suggestions from other writers when they helped me giving me right way.Believe me even now when i think of the story when i thought on that time i feel like something lacking on that time.😛Seriously i wanted to turn this FF giving a social message to the people from this FF.I was thinking of turning this FF where Maan who was the sufferer of domestic violence ends in love with Geet as much as he hated the world due to that only her mother's life was destroyed.😆It was my concept on first but then it got twists & turns & even i thought that this concept is not gonna suit title too 😕& then i got another concept in which how man acts becoming slave to the desires..no matter is it positive desires or negative desires...& then i got a steady mind to frame the story.😃😳Even sometimes i got blank..😕trying to frame the situations..what will be next..but then i overcame with that too after so many experiences & watching TV..somewhat novels too helped me to frame the characters & but concepts came on its own when i tried to frame the characters & all this becoz of u guys..my loyal readers..who motivated me in every step.🤗Though i have used some kind of vulgar situation which cant be digested by u guys but still supported me & made this FF one year old.Thank u sooo much guys...🤗

Now coming to the competition..am gonna ask questions about this FF...just u need to answer to that..meine bhi dekhoon ki kaun kaun kitna yaad rakha hai is FF ko!😛

One who answers all the questions correctly..he/she will be awarded the best reader of my FF!😃

So here are the questions...😉

1)How did Maan marry Geet?
2)In which part Sameera came back to Maaneet's life?
3)Explain about the Geet & Sameera's contract?
4)Who has snatched Geet's property though she's multimillionnaire truly?
5)What is the profession of Veer's in this story?
6)How Veer makes Maan confess his love towards Geet?
7)When Maan kisses Geet publicly & why?
8)What is the story of Maan's mother?
9)What Maan gifts Geet on the eve of Valentine's day?
10)Why Geet takes sleeping pills which results of the lose of her baby?
11)Who's Angad & why he's envying Maan?
12)Explain the characters of Maan,Veer,Angad,Geet,Karan,Sameera in ur POV?

Hehehe 😆thoda zyaada hi mushkil question hai magar let's see kitne log sahi sahi jawaab denge...will announce the winner of the competition on 22nd August along with double updates😃

Here is the teaser for the double updates...😃

Geet had closed her eyes & had sat folding her legs in Padmaasana posture.A female voice said slowly,"Now drain all ur thoughts..every sorrow & happiness..make ur mind blank!"Geet tries to do that but she was reminded of the kidnap & the almost rape by Vikram & she sweats & opens her eyes.That female voice said angrily,"Dont u have any guts to control it?Fear is an enigma Geet..if u want to overcome it then u need to face it...& when people get to know that fear is the key to scare weak people like u then u r dead..they make u as living dead body!"Geet said angrily,"Am not weak!"That girl said glaring at Geet,"Then prove it...control ur mind..face the fear..live the pain u felt in past..then only u can overcome the pain & fear!Be strong Geet & then see no one is gonna defeat u!"

Geet closes her eyes with attitude but she cudnt attempt to face her past.The more she tried to face it..the more she got weaker.That girl was abt to provoke when Geet said,"I need a break Naina!"Naina saw her almond eyes shrewdly & then nodded & said,"Will make tea for u!"Naina walked towards the kitchen when Geet turned & saw around her.They were in the tree house where Maan had did love making with her making her sore.Geet walked & saw the couch where he once had grabbed her & had did love making till she was sore.She blushed & Naina said holding the tea,"U feeling good Geet?"Geet nodded while Naina continued,"U know why u r here?"Geet nodded & spoke...

How was the teaser?Do share the views & dont forget to answer these questions & pariticipate in the competition😃

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago

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AKANKSHA SEHGAL

@akankshasehgal

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

congrats ...sorry cant answer your quetions as i have yet not read it full.

nice teaser. hopefully i will cope up soon.

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Awesome teaser...will try to answer ur questions once I will b back to home

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MANISHA GOEL

@MANISHAGOEL

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

1. MAAN SUPOOSED TO MARY SAM GEET,S SISTER BT LAST MOMENT SAM GOT A B/W OFFER ND GEET KO APNE JAGAH MANDAP MEIN BITHA DETE HAI IN THAT WAY MAAN MARRYS GEET

2. IN 12TH PART

3. ACORDOING TO D CONTRACT GEET MAAN KE WIFE TAB TAK HAI JAB TAK SAM WAPAS NAHE AA JATE

4. GEET,S CHACHIJI

5. VEER IS AN ARMY OFFICER

6. BY MAKING HIM JEALOUS

7. MAAN KISSES GEET IN BUISNESS PARTY BECOZ SUM GUY NAME ROHIT WS TRYING TO KISS HER

8. MAAN,S MOTHER SAHANA IS CHEATED BY MAAN,S FATHER AS HE MARIED HER FOR MONEY ND THEN THROW HER OUT OF D HOUSE

9. MAAN PLANS SURPRISE DINNER ND GIVE HER A ROMANTIC NOTE ND SARRE TO/DIV][DIV]

10. GEET TAKE SLEPING PILLS BECOZ VIKRAM WA TRYING TO RAPE HER ND IN ORDER TO SAVE HER SHE TOOK PILLS

11. ANGAD IS MAAN,S COLEGE FRND . ANGAD ENVING MAAN BECOZ HE THINKS THAT MAAN HAS LUSTED ND KILLED HIS SISTER ANJALI

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MAAN HE WS ANGRY MAN BEFORE MARRIAGE BT GEET LOVES HAS CHANGED HIM NW HE IS POSSESSIVE SBT HS NEAR ND LOVES ONES
GEEF A SWEET BUBBLY GIRL NW WIFE OF MSK ND LOVES HM BEYOND LIMITS
VEER TRUE FRND OF GEET MAAN READY TO HELP THEM ANY TIME ND A SOFT ND CARING PERSON
SAMERA GREEDY ND SELFISH PERSON CN CFOOS ANY LIMIT TO FULF HER
NNEEDS BT SUMWHERE HAS A SOFT CORNER FOR GEET
KARAN A PSHYCO PERSON WHO DESTROYS GIRLS LIFE AFTER FULFILLUNG HS DESIRE ND MURDERER OF ANJALI NW HS NEXT TARGET IS GMSK
ANGAD MISLEAD BY KARAN ND HATE MAAN BECOZ HE THINKS MAAN LUSTED ND KILLED HS SISTER

Edited by MISHAGOYAL - 11 years ago