VENOMOUS DESIRE-THREAD 04 - Page 11

Originally posted by: idunno

first and foremost in spite of so much security how come karan dare to enter in their mansion + bedroom
by knowing geets life in threat why there is not surveillance in big mansion like that?it is common to have surveillance now a days specially in the house of such a big business tycoon they should be guarded in every way as they have more enemies ,so it is unbelievable that person like karan break their privacy with so easily.

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

First of all thank U for d bada wala update

Now both the parts of the update were superb.The first part with a tensed Maan and Veer,trying to figure about Karan,Karan's creepy morgue,and Maaneet passionate love making.Superb mixture of every mood and emotion.

And then the outstanding 2nd part.I have never read smthng like this.Karan slipping in Maaneet's room and seeing them in their most intimate position,God!!!!!!!!

Maan will go red with anger and Geet with embarresment when they come to know about this.

And during the whole time Karan tries to lay his dirty eyes on Geet but Maan protects her even in sleep.Grt.

Karan's camera trick also failed.Me too happy for that.

But Veer's dream was scary.I hope nothing like this happens in real life.

You even gave hint for d next track.'The room with haunted sounds!!!!!!' Woohoo.

Me excited.

Gr8 part buddy

hi dear, thanks 4 da pm n emotional update! Geet worried abt maan !Hate Karan! He is der in KMn nobody knows! After Geet! Gt cameras! Bt MAan holdonh her n he sees nothing! update soon! Well written