~DIL KE DARMIYAAN~ PT 1 PG 7 AUG 26

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

hi congrats on the new story, superb start, well written, update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

very interesting start...👍🏼

Geet-Maan are getting married...

Maan is her boss and she was forced to marry him...

yaar u don't send pm it is ok but atleast when u start new story then once u can send pm to those who read ur updates regularly so that if u start any new story we will atleast come to know about it...😔

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preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

suhana is pe bhi kripa kar de ...

waiting for update .sweety

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

CLICK ME --> PART 1

Since I had seen many waiting on the thread ..

So thought to give it a try

Do tell me if I should continue

That part on pg 1 was actually incomplete..

So that was teaser..

Those readers who want pms for my updates in blog add sweetsaloni my pm id all other ids are I m not using now

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Shalini barman roy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

great start dear.

loved it so much.

waiting for the next parts😳

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nostalgicmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Frm d name to d first part its awesome dear,waiting for nxt part

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

wonderful update...

first I was not able to understand Geet's turmoil that if she is attracted towards Maan thenw hy she wants to reject him or cursing him...itna confusion kyun...

but then reading further I understand that this is because she was supposed to marry Dev but forced to marry Maan...did Dev left her in Mandap or something happened to him...why Maan married her...is there any plan by Maan to marry her at any cost...did he do something to make Dev leave...

eagerly waiting to read next part...