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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh no Pammi whatever she is doing is utterly wrong ,
Vicky is bound by a promise that he cannot tell Maan about Geet , now I just feel that Vicky should somehow find a way for Maan to find out that the girl is Geet.
the precap again seems interesting
Awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
loved vicky-geet bonding
eager to know wht hapened b/w maneet
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part.. precap is interesting waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely teaser:)
waiting fr update yar:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
meri jaan di plzzz update my this yet another fav story di plzzz dying for the update di😭😳 UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Posted: 11 years ago
double yippeee di my this first new year day is just AWSOME dying for this update for a long time di aur ab eager to read it di eagelry waiting ur pagal is waiting😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4:

Vicky held geet's legs which were red, they were bandaged ... she was still walking like that not bothering about the pain that was hurting her. He never knew that a person can love someone to the level of madness!! The love, the guilt was eating up geet alive ... waiting for her punishment for 15 years was not a joke ... and she didn't know that punishment was better than waiting to see him.



She got up feeling something wet on her feet ... everything about Vicky was so much of pain to geet. More than her pain, his feelings, his loneliness was killing her within. If she would have been alone it would have been different to her. Her guilt would only get mirrored with Vicky's feelings, she didn't even flinch withdrawing her legs back from his grip ... yeh kya kar rahe ho tum Vicky?? Saying she patted his back ... I am fine Vicky, aise mat karo ... please both of them cry and laugh together!! And this is something she had always experienced.



Kya please geet?? You just got discharged from hospital, tumhe koi dard mehsoos kyun nahi hota?? Sirf maan ... Your heart feels only his name ... only his agony ... I am scared you will die with this madness of yours ... tumhara dil pagal hota jaa raha hai, maan bhai ko dekh kar tum aur bhi pagal ho gayi ho!! Vicky completely lost it seeing her that way, he didnt want a conversation. He wanted to avoid it ... He didn't listen what geet said ... simply walked away in frustration.



Wanna leave Vicky ... thode din ke liye chali javongi toh kamse kam maan se dur rahongi, maine unko ek baar dekha, kaafi hai for me to survive a week ... she hugged the pillow closing her eyes, adoring his face that got captured deep inside her heart. Only she knew how she managed to control her idiot mind ... mentally stop herself from hugging him when she saw him for the first time after the long separation.



That night,


Pagal rukna tu bheeg jayegi ... let me help you, a voice came from the car as she was running getting down into her room ... Geet turned around to look, she smiled and crossed her hands ... Karan please, ill manage from here, you will also drench with me ... just leave, she heard her zuzu barking for her.



Geet felt her pallu tugged by her doggy, she knelt down and kissed her on the nose ... missed me?? Solly had to go ... Karan ki mamma thoda strict hai, tumhe leke nahi jaa sakti thi ... and she got busy with her zuzu forgetting karan's presence who sighed and drove away.



Her red saree clung to her body, and she was running here and there to hold zuzu, it was their rain game. Geet loves when it rains, the bandage got wet fully but she didn't even mind ... She smirked as she blocked zuzu's way ... ab kaha javogi janemann?? The dog tried to escape but geet only laughed see her efforts. Her payal, her waistband ... her bangles, her jhumkas ... glowed in the thunders.



Why does she makes him feel she is her?? He saw her innocent form through the window, who was not that innocent in real!! Who was she?? Why was she living in that outhouse?? Why was she so important for his brother?? Maan wanted his answers for his questions ... rain began to pour down heavily. Maan couldn't stop himself from reaching to the outhouse.



Geet halfheartedly went inside still watching the rain ... she inhaled sharply before closing the door. Taking a towel she wiped herself and then opened the cupboard to take out the first aid box, she cleaned her legs and applied the medicine followed by bandaging. She was about to put the box back when she heard a voice ... it was probably of someone coming inside ... kaun hai?? Geet panicked, it cant be Vicky ... Her tummy had butterflies feeling his presence. She gulped hard trying to make out he was in there ... in real. A loud thunder yet again made the power to cut, Geet got worried ... darkness always scared her ... but this darkness with a hope to feel in without his knowledge made her hyperventilate.



Her steps made the payal to chum ... How will she ask them to keep quite? How will she ask them to stop making noise?? When her bangles joined her payal she pouted ... still she walked holding the saree pleats so that they wont hinder her ... She stopped when her room door opened.



She found him holding a lighter in his hand, inching closer to her and for the first time ever she felt the light scaring her rather than the darkness.





With every step maan took further ... Geet backed off and continued until she got plastered to the wall. Maan got irked with her behavior ... why was she running away?? He thought!!



Geet was about to slip off from her place, he held her arm pulling back to the place where she stood few moments ago ... as his eyes met hers he almost forgot what he was to ask geet. There was only fear in them!! He didn't say a word instead rested his body weight on hers arresting her moves ... Geet tripped when zuzu barked, she held maan's shirt for support.


Her fall made him come back to the normal world, he still didn't let go off her instead tightened his grip making his mind to clear the clouds. His hand held her head angling it to level it ... who are you?? Her heart began to thud against the rib cage scaring her. Did he make out her identity?? She thought but feeling his hand going around her bare waist further made Geet to panic, she had no option than pulling it away ... hurting his ego to next level.



You cant touch me this way!! Maanti yaha sab kuch aapka hai ... but not me!! She let her words out intentionally trying to escape his questions. And like she thought he pushed her harshly running his hand on his hair. How well Geet knows him in and out!! She tried to catch a glimse of his facial expression but maan was showing his back to her ... His rage would only go to extremes!! It was like that since his childhood. Once his anger goes high ... Maan wont even think what is right or what is wrong!! That was the reason for the long separation!!



He didn't even knew what to say in retort, what will he say?? Nothing to be precise. Not sparing a glance he left ... leaving geet in confusion.



She cried and cried understanding maan's plight to ask her identity ... he was thinking she was ... of Vicky?? How could he?? But to think of in the other way he is right!! How much does he knew of her?? If he would have known she is Geet!! Then what??



Her mind pondered over his demeanor ... but when sleep took over, geet slipped into a blank world where even those dreams were colorless without him!! without his love!! Dreams never come closer to her with an irony ... as the possessor of them left her only back leaving to sulk in the guilt. Had he been with her ... she wouldn't have been the same geet!! Probably she would have been living!! She is a dead person.



Early morning Geet packed her clothes in the bag and looked at the house ... she held zuzu in her arms and walked out ... she had to leave for she would be missing her train for Delhi. She wrote a letter for Vicky and kept it on the table.

Precap: Maan's pain!!

Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhigaa de poori tarah


i am writing this story for my happiness!! for my di!! though i am not that good she had been my backbone with support!! its been an year ever since i knew of her!! probably the feel i have while writing this story is making me more emotional!! so sorry for making u cry buckets

happy new year girls!! hope you enjoy this year!! i hope my shoba di would get what she desires for!! muahhh di ❤️


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Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tat was just awesome

You have perfectly written wat Maan and Geet feels

The way geet is trying hard not to get weak she gets but she is strong and knows tat she will have to live with this pain of love..

The pain tat probably only Maan can get rid of

and Maan though his mind says she cant be her but his heart somewhere has realized tat she is her only.

The way Geet said tat sentence to her.. how deeply it affected him and Vicky he is being dying to see his sister his friend die each second and now she left

wat will happen with this sudden change in vicky's life...

will maan come to know about her.. will he know tat she is her
Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
loved it
geet is in so much pain she wanted to go away from maan so she leaving this plac and left a letter behyond her for vicky
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet s n so much pain.
nd want to leave for his happiness. .
WAITIN for next part

Happy new year

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