The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Awesome update yaara

haaye Maaneet

Giit totally dazed and keeping Maan engrossed in her bak bak😳

Maan struggling between his desires and Giit's important divulgence on Shyamlal🤣

Iss Shyamlal ki toh😡

Maan ke dreamy romance mein ghussing😆

Geet was so adorable bechara Maan control kaise kare

chalo forehead kiss toh mil gaya

not that we mind cheekwali kiss bhi par Maan to Maan hain

Man of virtues😳

Thats why a darling, hain na

Bourvita is the secret of Giit's non stop chattering

Maan ko fruits ke saath yeh bhi try karna chahiye

then we can get more than just 'hmmm and umm' 😆

Glad Geet understood the whole situation and there wasn't much awkwardness between the two😊

Geet relieved that she didn't behave wierdly but little does she know ke Rajdhani kaise daudi🤣

aur na jaane Maan kab tak uss speed se recover kar paayega ya nahi😳

Maan in his dreamy world

shocking Nakul😲 bechaare ke dimaag pe Maan aur Dev kitne shots maarenge🤔

Time for some more karela juice😉

One more addition in Maan's priceless collection😳

Superb update

Thanks for updating so soon Avi

It was really a treat

🤗

Song was just too good and so appropriate😃

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: dqno1
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missing GHSP...

ISLIYE SIRF ISLIYE mai kabhi VM nahi kholti.. it hurts...

i want them back...😭

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valli30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

lovely update👏👏
geet blabbering in her dizzy state😛
maan controlling himself but geet is not helping him😳😳
rajdhani express 😆😆😆😆😆 geet its maan's heart beat
loved their convo😃
maan is so happy to have spent those few hours with geet and that to so near to him😉
geet didn't remember anything
waiting for next part

Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago

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miss_dreamy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

I want to know about dev-istar love story😳 what happened to them... plaese continue sooon

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lovely update... about the song and vm i cant say as my parents dont like me reading/watching love stories or hearing love songs... chup chup ke read kar rahi hoon.. so cant on the video 😔

but yes i really loved the bhang effect esp the dudhwalla part😆😆 loved geet and seriosly bechara maan...

p.s dqno dear u literally forced me to write 😉 love ur bindass attitude👏👏

thanks

Edited by miss_dreamy - 12 years ago

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lehr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

lovely update dear

thanks for the pm 😊😊

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Rajdhani..😆

ohk ab iss update ke baad hum bhi Rajdhani plus duronto sun sakte hai..

shyaamlal and polo perfume.. maan se fruit ka plomish le liya geet me finally...

that was so cute update avi...😃

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: miss_dreamy
I want to know about dev-istar love story😳 what happened to them... plaese continue sooon

--- edited 😆 ---
lovely update... about the song and vm i cant say as my parents dont like me reading/watching love stories or hearing love songs... chup chup ke read kar rahi hoon.. so cant on the video 😔

but yes i really loved the bhang effect esp the dudhwalla part😆😆 loved geet and seriosly bechara maan...

p.s dqno dear u literally forced me to write 😉 love ur bindass attitude👏👏

thanks

Thanks so much! Ab isse padh ke accha laga... I am glad you liked it😃

Dev-NT part probably Mon/Tues...

Avi 😃

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

today i was like... jo bhi ho jaaye... avi ka update padthe hi comment karoongi... and here i am...

i really didnt wanted to finish todays part... especially the starting part... where the talli geet was all over our controlled maan... is there any way that u go back and write more and more on that... i can read it on and on...

30 chapters are over and may be nearly 15 of them where on maaneet... but we got to read the actual them not their silence for the first time ... i enjoyed it...

i loved that train part... shyamlal part was too funny...

all that was total dreamy... reading their slow romance i had not thought maan would get a chance soon to take his lady love in his arms, hold her for so long, hear ranting from almost silent geet, forhead kiss and what not... with maan am too in dream land now... but its sad that geet doesnt remember any thing...

Mujhe khud loot kar, kitne pyaar se mera haal puch rahi ho.👏

the song ... the pic... the vm... all just perfect

ps: i commented for the 29th part at page 30

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Will comment later 😉
Thankooo For Updating 😃

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: valli30
lovely update👏👏
geet blabbering in her dizzy state😛
maan controlling himself but geet is not helping him😳😳
rajdhani express 😆😆😆😆😆 geet its maan's heart beat
loved their convo😃
maan is so happy to have spent those few hours with geet and that to so near to him😉
geet didn't remember anything
waiting for next part

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

Next part probably Mon/Tues😃