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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: custodian75
Great update. Loved It a lot.

Thanks for clearing Geet's misunderstanding.

So they drank bhang. Good. Now they will be able to tell their feelings to each other.

Next update soon. Please.

One should hope so..😃

Thanks for the comment. Please leave me a line or two in the future also. It makes me feel like writing more.

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: spvd
part 29
awesome dear...
so lovely...
loved it so much...
cont soon dear...

Thanks Deepa😃

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: valli30
Thats amazing update
maan missing geet ,he just wants to see her once
geet is back and their encounter at stairs and the way you described their feelings the longing in maan's eyes was really awesome
geet seeing megha and maan's relation thinks he has move forward in his life
She always thinks she can't let him in his iife but he is already a part of her life without her knowledge 😃
Finally she came to know about megha and for first time she is letting her insecurities and trying to show her feeling towards him 😳
Maaneet's holi 😃
But why did dev wants maan to drink that 😕
Jo bhi ho acha hai may be they will bw able to express their feeling
Lovely precap
Waiting for next part

p.s. Sorry for late comment dear

Thanks so much😃

Dev is being naughty because he knows Maan does not drink.

Updating soon.😃

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

am breaking my own records of becoming late...

going to read the last update once again...

will comment in a while...

and with regard to the question at the top... yes i wanna update... yeh bhi koi poochne waali baat hai?

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: dqno1

Sach hai...

I would rather read Muskan or Aashu or Ritzy or Reet or Palin or any of our gifted friends than write my bekaar story..🤢

Tujhe acchi lagti hai, bas hai na...😃

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: dqno1

Tera kuch ho sakta hai toh bol de..🤣

Nahi hosakta kuch 😆😆

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Yeh blue dikha ke melty karring...😳

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

again sorry for being late...

last part was just wonderful... though maaneet love is very silent but it always spread a magic around me... in addition to it the songs u choose... hayeee... cant ask for more!!!

just loved the staircase part... loved that she is trying to open up as her problems are solving ...

again u brought confusion among them... 😡 but happy that u got it cleared soon...

holi scene the best...total dreamy...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

THANKS TO THE FOLLOWING READERS FOR YOUR LIKES AND COMMENTS. 😃

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Avi I love you for such back-back updates ❤️ 🤗

Piya ke rang mein rangnewali se jiya dhadkane wali tak mast progression 👏

Reading this whole part I was having a laughing fit ... enjoying it so much that I was either smiling or giggling. I loved it 😃 Right form Adi giggling like a girl to Rajdhani express, multiple trains, do do fruits, stinking Shyamlal, Polo, Plomish and ending was like a the final blow to my giggling fit Nakul getting shocked with his wish and being asked for two fruits 🤣 🤣 🤣

Hayee My Maan's wishes are somewhere somewhat coming true. Having office romance, she being contentedly and safely tucked in his arms. 😳 It actually was the compensation for enduring and living through all that silence, avoidance, longing and anguish form such long separation... he was justly, romantically and handsomely rewarded for all his wait and holding onto that hope never once letting go. 😉👏

I loved his control. his inner voices his simple wishes and his care for her. 😳 I loved her simplicity, unrestrained being herself in front of him uninhibited making him know her better... 😳 And finally the duo lived some moments of sweet intimacy, desires out in the open and actually being aware of the effects caused. ☺️

Naureen 👏 👏Too good girl! I love her shayari. and this one was beautiful and deep. Hayee afterall uski nadaani hi toh hai jisse usse seene se lagaye rakhne ka mann hota hai Maan ko aur uski dhadkane tez ho jaati hai 😉

Maan bechara had to endure the torture of not being able to express his desires at the gain of having her with him not avoiding and in such close proximity. J from dhudhwala Shyamlal 😆😆 Indeed loved the combined effect of heart full of desires and love for her, body wanting release for expression of it all and mind filled with stinky Shyamlal... 🤣

Geet's innocence came out all shinning again. 😊 Even though she was speaking all random yet it did speak of her simplicity and naivety. The two fruits and care for him to have the best (Though i hate papayas... 🤢 But i'm glad uske wajah se baat toh aage badhi 😆) The way she was concerned for Shyamlal's wife's dreams and wishes she revealed her own choti choti dreams and wishes and wants in her life and future. 😳

I relived all the GHSP days through this update ... Gitt, his care, her sleeping with his hand under her cheek, Aise mat dekho, ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi, the forehead kiss... I can go on and on 😳

The whole sofa scene with the song, his desires the bliss and the kiss and even tying of her dupata end to his wrist to not let her go was so romantic and dreamy 😳😳 Loved it ❤️ Loved the song selection its soulful and beauty in words. 😳

Bournvita and spicy Pizaa 😆 atrangi combo 😉 But Maan aadat daal do aise sab cheezon ki 🤣

I loved his care for her likes and comfort. The way he made his workers life hell for getting a packet of bournvita 😊 👏 And also how he related her needs for bike ride, being there for her and taking care not by saying it in words but living it for her without her stating it by his each and every action and deed right from the start. 👏👏👏 ❤️ Also how he voices internally how he will be restless after feeling her so close and she will be blissfully unaware of it and asking him what happened ... 😳

Nakul being added in the end was too good 😆 Finally itna saara gusaa jhelna ke baad kuch toh accha mila 🤣

Ending with him dreaming of her moments with him,. and she being the song of his life was 😳😳 I loved it and was craving for more... 😃

Thanks for updating continue soon... me missing my Dev-Naina 😉

🤗

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago