The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 18

Originally posted by: dqno1

Please bana do...

meri jaan chuttegi... besides I hate my writing... I would rather read yours...😃

School construct kar na hai na Daadima ko..😃 young teacher coming..😉

Originally posted by: dqno1

Sheen..🤗

I like her too. More Maaneet after DevTara

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

😲😲

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Waiting Then like Despo 😆😆

Originally posted by: love2_soma

sasha tu toh aise bhi gayi...maan ne nehi geet ne bhang wala thandai peeli...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

Originally posted by: honeygrape

that was an awesommme part Avi...they spoke finallyyy yay n sooo much more happened between them...wowiee...

loved geets possessiveness, jealousy n all for maan...

for once even i was scared when you wrote about the love in the eyes of maan n megha...but soo happy to see maan as meghas brother...

nice megha...i like this megha...

aah sasha the idiot is here with her chudail plans...😡😡 hope she not a threat in this story ...

thanku for updating...but eager to know about nt and dev...but will wait till u have enough tym ...

dont stress urself...we ll wait...your health is more important for us than the updates...so tk care...😡

Originally posted by: Onir

Firstly so sorry to take such a long time to read and comment on this part, even after I bugged you so much for an update. And when You updated I just couldn't read as was badly held up.

Anyways moving to the update, I as always just loved it. It was again like a sweet tingling feeling left behind that I'm still savoring. You could say its like condensed milk that I'm relishing reading the minute and tender moments between the leads. I was in quite an off mood today but when I logged in and read this part my mood did change drastically and thanks to your writing I feel so much better now. 😃

The distance and its effects with their longing was so well worded by you in the starting few parts. Bang on! Juts few words and everything explained so beautifully. 👏👏 The longing and ache he felt with her absence around him just touched me, I guess I'm just loving this Maan more and more for the inherent nature that he possess... one who is just holding onto that thin thread of hope and unbound love no matter how it is reciprocated because now she is a part of his existence whose thoughts are within his entire being so involuntary as that of taking a breath. I love him for his simplicity in his wait and his determination to be there standing for her so that whenever she comes she will find him there for her where she left him as simply as her Maan and not some MSK. ❤️ 😳

That hug that they shared was like an oasis in parched desert quenching their thirst for each other. 😳 Such soothing and calming picture it presented. They way both of them were having their fill of each others presence once again was so sweet and brought a smile to my lips. Actually "Pyaar hua chupke se... ❤️ " they were having their own quota of each others subtle change in persona and appearance after such a long gap. And Indeed it was feeling of being home for these two souls separated by circumstances. 👏

He being happy for her and being content that though she didn't call him but his small unacknowledged effort for her did help her in tiding over her problems for now was so heart touching.

I loved the gradual change you showed in our very own Bambi. An innocent lamb was experiencing feelings of jealousy, possessiveness and anger. Her place not only as a worker but also in the life of her Ma(a)n was causing some insecurity in her. Jhalli! Doesn't realise that he can't live without her and feels and craves for her in everything around him. 😉 Yet the Bambi in her couldn't be suppressed for long as she is inherently sweet and innocent, and that is showed in her thought of letting go if that is what causes him happiness.

She puts up a wall of avoidance between them again as she feels she has lost out on her chance for love and happiness as she pushed him away form her numerous times, not being aware that he bounces back again each time seeing that small gestures and deeds of love for him in her to stand there itself waiting for her. 😳

The holi invitation and her being blissfully unaware of Maan and MSK being the same, shows that Maan has chosen the best for him who knows and feels for him just as Maan and not some MSK. 👏👏

Her crumbling of misconceptions and defenses on revelation of Megha's relation with Maan was good one and well timed.😃 So Megha is his sweet muh boli behn. 😊 (Wonder what's in store here... 😉)

And then that whole holi scene with him and her having that Mahii eyelock and having those moments of pure bliss in silence conveying their unsaid emotions and feelings without the need for words. ❤️ 😳👏 Loved it!!!! She was made to experience being the Woman for her Man... he made her feel new emotion as he has been making her feel other emotions too, be it of friendship, companionship, jealousy, cribbing, anger and then feeling of belonging. 😳

Dev babu ne indirectly madad ki... to break that silence between these two... 😉😆

Indeed piya ke rang mein rangne wali... 😳 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Loved it AND CONTINUE SOON... 😃

Originally posted by: heytal

Lambi judaai ke baad milne ki rut aayi😳

Maan missing his Geet

Distance makes heart grow fonder and here Geet rules his entire being leave alone his heart😳

His longing, craving for her one glance, waiting endlessly for that one phone call, happy that she scored so well, fear that Geet has left for good but relieved that her Daarji is fine😊

His longing finally paid off and she returns

Poor Maan not sure wether its his dream or real😕😆

But her tripping and him holding her in a near hug puts all his doubts to rest and not to forget his restless heart is finally at peace😳

Intezaar ka phal meetha hona chahiye... after all it is Maan, how can I deny him his Geet?

Geet feeling jealous seeing Maan- Megha comfortable together

A regret that she lost her love clearly indicates that now that the issues back in HP are sorted out by Dr Siddharth she had been thinking about Maan and her somewhere in the back of her mind

But again the current scenario makes the distance seep in

So close yet so far

Geet trying to mask her feelings and making failed attempts to move on

here Maan totally restless and loosing patience with her indifference and questioning self of her feelings😒

Both struggling within the inner war making them all the more confused and lost

😔
Perceptions become reality if not clarified. They have already suffered so much. I could not add to that..

Holi!!!!!

Holi ke din dil mil jaate hain

rangon mein rang khil jaate hain😳

I know in the middle of July, Avi is the only crazy person to write holi but I love this song (haiyee my first Salman song!!) and I wanted to do that for them.

So true Holi did do the magic

The festival of colours brought back colours in their life

Geets discovering the truth of Megha- Maan relation

Geet hiding behind the pillar to looking at him to her hearts content

Maan catching her looking his way and then Dev's prank does the magic👍🏼

Fantastic update Avi

so well put down clearing all the aspects

Geet's HP encounter in brief, Maan's quest in her absence, Geet's longing for him, their drifting away yet again and finally their close moments on Holi day😃

I struggled with this chapter the most. Too many things were going on and I wanted to focus on the reunion not the judaii, so it took me a huge block to get over. Glad it came out OK.

The song was superb never thought it could be used in this set up but it seemed perfect yaar😛

Ab next Maaneet part toh Dev-Tara ke baad milega na😕

not that I mind but ab wait kaise hoga

Thanks for updating yaar

Love u

🤗