MG OS#18: Raina Beeti Jaaye

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

sahi mein jab pyar dur cale jate tab dono ko halat kisiko bayan nehi kiye jate...

superb n beautiful os...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awesome dear. so touchy and emotional concept. poor maneet they were seperated for 3 years and longing to be in each others arms. wow you described their longing to be with each other so beautifully. loved the character of rajji and abhi who helped maneet to meet chupke chupke. i was scared kahin maan ka accident na hojaye aur wo wapaas na aye but happy that he came back and will take her with her. plz do write other OS and SS

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional beautiful OS! Superbly written! Maan went to America n dey meet after so long! All da best Ramazan! Hope u come back n write again! Love all ur works! 😊

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Angel

@prettyji

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

was quite long but a blast love it

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piya27

@piya27

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Shown the fact in a really very beautiful way and also with a hope that they will come back loved the os from the bottom of my heart not saying it but really mean it

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birdy2011

@birdy2011

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

it was a beautiful os 👏...

when i started reading it i thought it is sad os...but it is amazing ...😃

their love for each other you expressed very beautifully 😛...al da best for your future work

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

aap kahan jaarahi hai...leaving such fabulous writings...you are going to come back and give such beautiful stories again and again... wonderful emotions...first her wait...her longing...poor girl left alone just after four months of marriage...till maan called her ...was terrified for her...and when he decalred he is coming back...until he reached home safely...I was just crossing my fingers...!! he came back ...he searched for her...and loved his brother and wife...soo much understanding ...such a wonderful...and secreat reunion...love marriage ka asar...and their shared meal...chori chori... infront of whole family...! each and every character is realistic and good at heart ! from the sweet mother in law to dadi...kya kya praise karoo...and the passion you built for their awaited night... awesome os !! enjoy your vacation...and all the marriages you are going to attend...and do come back to give us more and more of maaneet...will wait...

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Neha

@cherieLover

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

aww... that was such a simple yet veryyy beautiful story...

while reading it as geet was getting anxious... i was also getting anxious... as what will be his reaction?!

actually i was more worried about his safety that geet was waiting since 3 years and if meets any accidents! :( but thank you for not adding any tragedy...

they way u described geet's relationship to his family and maan apolpgizing to geet's parents was just cherry on top of cake...

the excitement to be with each other after 3 years was clearly felt as a reader...

I am totally in love with your writing... I will really really miss you and your work, i hope u will consider coming back to IF and write much moreee for us...

you have a great fun back home!!

Awesome os...

Reallyyy ... madly... simplyyy in love with your work!!! :)