MG OS#18: Raina Beeti Jaaye

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Maancey

@Maancey

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

At least tumhare OS mein Maan waapis toh aaya 👏👏👏... Hamara GHSP 3 saal ho gaye lekin abhi tak waapis nahi aaya... sob..😭sob... 😭 Was way too brilliantly written & justified reunion ...⭐️⭐️⭐️

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

cool what to say . mindblowing and freaking awesome . as i said u agn and agn u r fabulous writer and from u , i savour each and every emotions u potray . start was really made me tensed , i was scared while going down ki is it will b happy or heartbreaking . when maan came back, i was relaxed . u beautifully described longiness and need of each other .It was quite emotional to see both of them and der reunion doesn't need word to say .

Happy ramadan ,enjoy ur stay but plz keep writing . will b missing u in forum .

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

mind blowing OS dear

i loved it👏👏

it is nt easy to stay away from ur partner just after 4months of ur marriage but they both did for their better future

loved their re-union

P.S. will soon read ur other work

Edited by impoojaverma - 12 years ago

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

abhi iss OS ke baare mein kya kahun...

itna emotional tha ki I am just speechless...

wonderful OS...

thanx for pm...

will wait for ur more works...

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

lovely OS

liked the way it was portrayed in innocent way

Their family seemed sweet

especially rajji was so understanding

maneet love was adorable

on the whole superb

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

just beuatifulll from start to finish. I loved the way you build up her loneliness...her pain of being left behind. And just when you start wondering what about Maan you brought in his POV. The anticipaion of his coming back...the sweet short moments stolen in front of everyone...ahhh wonderful...just magical

Last part was very romantic...more than anything it was a promise to be always together

very well written and loved it completely...

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sandymg

@sandymg

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

awesome.. amazing..

i have no words to say...

i loved it..

their small time during lunch was awesome...

the longing of geet for maan was very well written...

the way you have described each and everything made me feel as if it happened in front of me..

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sessy

@sessy

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

just loved it.while reading i was relating the charecters to my life,its soo true that it is very hard to stay away from u r husband for longer time.the elders of the family shows us that they are very strict but what ever they do they and say is for our own good.loved the scenes of maneet but sharing the meal was the best.

thx for the OS and enjoy the marriage of u r brother and u r 3 cousins marriages.

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mounacuty

@mounacuty

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

loved d end part n i thought dadi was like strict n all but she was so lovely yaar i was shocked when she supported her bahu...n maan hayye he was dieing to meet his his jaan...dont know how dey bear for 3 yr seperation

hey dont leave dear atleast lately sahi but os deti raho i so love ur os's😕

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

beautifully written

and dadima she is such a sweetheart yaar

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