MG OS#18: Raina Beeti Jaaye - Page 4

beautiful os dear

beautifully written...the story was really heart touching...awesome story

Great os buddy.

I m in short of words,fm where shud I start.
You wont believe but fm d moment I started reading d OS I cud feel Geet's pain but dont know I was scared as I progressed thinking that wud Maan be back to her.Was it possible that sm thing had happened to him and wont be back and Geet wud be left alone for ever.Till the time I read that Maan was back,I was sceptical.
And when he got back it was a bless.The chori-chori wala two minute meeting of Maaneet,their hug,then the dinner with each other,everything was so thrilling.

Abhinav,Rajji,Arpitaji,dada ji,Geet's parents,all were so good but the best person I found was dadi ji.She may not be a sweet heart but definately a great soul.

And then the Maaneet reunion,its heavenly.The way their cravings were shown in their love making is awesome.Geet's submission,Maan's dominiance but with love,its heavenly jst like the morning after their night of unison.

The whole feeling was just unexplainably beautiful.

Thanx for d OS and d PM too.
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Buddy
Fm ur note,its clear that U R upset and sad but still I wud like to request you to come back.
You're going to pak for festivities,best of luck for ur trip.Enjoy there and forget about all the tensions and sad things.When U cm bk,be back with high spirits.
And pls be back to us with bang.

Love ur work and will miss you during ur break.Please reconsidor ur decision and do cm bk.

Shall be waiting :-):-):-):-):-):-):-)

Beautiful OS
Really loved the longing of two lovers who love each other madly bt staying away frm each other to secure their future n coz of circumstances their only way to connect each is their phones
frankly speaking one pt of time i was really scared when maan told geet that he coming back kahi koi twist na aa jaye n plance crash n accident types bt thank god he landed safely n reached home
Rajji n abhi is very sweet they hv seen geets longing fr maan n thus them chance to meet alone fr some
that eating the way maan n geet were making morsels fr each was really sweet
Dadi praising geets food n then praising geet n rajji was shock fr both of them
finally maaneet together in their room romancing each Other n finally maan promised geet that he will take her with him n wht more geet wants only to be with maan
Really really loved it
Pls dont stop writing come back aftr finishing all ur family Function n eid pls

Awesome concept
The most beautiful written story on reunion of husband and wife after three years
And maaneet made it special
Superb dear

It was a beautiful story from.start to end...
Geet waiting fr maan.fr 3 year n finally the wait wz over...
Loved dere close moments...
Superb os

awesommme one shot...loved the way you portrayed both the characters...most of all thanku ssooo mcuh for not keeping even a tiny bit of negativity in the story...lovvvd it...can we a second part tooo of him taking her to states n enjoyin somthng like that once u are free,...i havent read half of your stories yet...have bookmarked it...do write more😊

OS
awesome dear...
excellent...
Daadima is so nice in her own way...
and Maan is back to his Geet...
lovely...

Awesome di !!! What i liked the most is , how realistic was ur explanation of the intentions & lifestyle of typical middle class family !!! It was very realistic !!! Maaneet were ethereal !!! Their love filled all the void in their life !! Lovely !!! Dada - Dadi , Aprajitha , Abhi - Raji , masi , chachu , chachi & everyone were very positive & lovely characters which is really appreciable !! Maan's characterization was unique as very few ff/ss has portrayed him as a middle class guy !!! Loved it di !!!