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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi all
Kaise hu Sab ...??
Well me very very disheartened ..likes decreased ..sob sob just 36 on last ..:(

Last part @ page 21

Sorry for the delay to all those who were waiting ...this one for all those lovely girls who helped me with the song ...its from Hindi movie kasoor ...:-)
Thank u so much ..

MG SS :
Salaam -e- Ishq

Part 4


the little Khurana in his casual wear ..n gelled hair just the replica of his chachu who was wearing black shouted pointing ..

Prem : who rahi geet aunty ..(N ran)

Maan looked in prem's direction n froze seeing geet in a long dark blue frock having a really delicate light work of silver by the border with churidaar ..n the swize roll in her hair ..wearing the simplest of make-up with dark kohl .. she looked "Gorgeous" in her high neck sleeveless frock in every way ..Confident ..Simple yet Stunning with her million dollar smile shinning in that dim silver light standing in the middle of a big party hall covered with the richness of blue ..ozzing out the royal touch of Khuranas ..

Prem ran towards geet n with a smile she bent to his level hugging him ...

Prem : geet aunty aap kitni preetie lag rahe hu ..

Geet (smiled n setted his spikes a bit) : thank u ..waise aaj tu aap bhi buhat dashing lag rahe hu ..

Prem (raising his collar) : hai na ..ek dum chachu jaisa ..unhoon ne hi ready kiya mujhe ..

Geet smiled n looked back at maan standing thr in all black ..casual but smart dressing ..but the minute she noticed his first three buttons of his black shirt open ..her eyes went big colouring her cheeks red .. For a moment maan looked into her surprised eyes than smirked knowing his effect on her ..her blushing red cheeks enough of evidence upar se uska nazrien churana ..n she looked down n answered prem in low shy voice ..

Geet : han bilkul chachu jaise ..
(Me wondering does that means that maan is looking dashing *winks* ) ..

Dadi n aniee came to her n she raised greeting them ..

Aniee : waoo geet seriously tumhain har rooz aise hi ready hona chahiye ..but yep usually that simple simple dressing par jab u dress so good in partied its just makes u look dam good ..

Geet (looked at maan to catch a glimpse he was looking at them all only caught she looked away) : aniee ..abb mien office mien thorai itna tyaar hungi ..

Dadi : hone ki zarorat bhi kiya hai ..humari bachi tu har tarha se pari lagti hai ...(Cupped her face).. Buhat sundar lag rahe hu beta ..

Geet hugged her n saw maan looking at them while talking with adi ...she couldn't help but to admire n drool over tht casual look ..so rare to see ...but he looked away couldn't give away tht he was eavesdropping on thr talks ..mesmerized with her looks in such rich shades ...

Geet adi n pari were busy looking into the doings of party n presentation when Sinha's arrived n maan dadi received them ...thr were relatives n few board members a private party with a commercial cause ..

Just as the prep for the presentation completed ..geet went towards maan who was then standing with mr sinha n his son ..geet greeted them n maan introduced her as his chief client advisor geet informed maan tht they r all set for presentation while maan asked her to wait as they were discussing something n she left to pari ..gaurav sinha continued talking about the project but maan was distracted with the way Varun kept on gazing geet everywhr she went ..

It was normal ..commercial world ..people n thr dirty minds n Eyes even if he is MSK ..he cannot stop this but geet ..as ignorant as ever conti with her talks with aniee n pari ...laughing giggling ..

It is often to c people flirting with female employees ..maan never paid attention most of them knew how to handle such approaches but geet ..she was different ...too naive to understand any of such things even those in direct flirty comments she would b standing confused ...for the first few times it was humanity that urged maan to be round her in such parties ...than don't know when it converted into a feeling of protectiveness ...n now may be possessiveness ..but geet was always somebody who he protected ..somebody he cared for ...n now off late its getting on his nerves .. seeing others eyeing in that way ...n her innocense around such crowd of perverts ...sometimes he is left wondering ..How she managed before in her life ...?? But than now he is here for her ..

Before he ends up snapping ...he asked gaurav Sinha to announce the project collaboration n ordered Adi to be ready with the presentation ..excusing he went to check WHR geet was ...

In the lone corner ..geet stood cursing her bad luck when she saw maan coming her way ..lost in his looks she stood the admiring his every features ...his tight skin fitted black cotton shirt only making it difficult ..making every muscle inch so prominent that she couldn't help but to drool over his sexy looks..

Maan stood in front of her at the distance of few steps saying something ...while she was lost in the movement of his perfect M-shaped lips n that rough beared jaw ..

Maan (realizing her mental absence in a high pitch) : Geet ...Geet ..!!

That broke her trance and she realized what she had been doing ...looked down pouting ...turning red with embarrassment ..

Maan : dhyan kahan hai tumhara ..kab se presentation ke bare mien bol raha hoon ...n u r just ...( he looked away irritated) ..

Geet (under her breath) : lo abb yeh aise mere samne ghumienge tou mien kya kar sakti hoon ..waise Bhi inko tou bara maza aata hai na jab woh aadhi nangi larkiyan makhi ki tarha inke aage peeche hoti hain ...
Upar se sawaal suno ..mera dhyaan kahan hai ..?? ..aur kahan huga ..yeh tou ..

Maan (snapped seeing her mumbling nonstop ) : enough geet ..kya bole jaa rahi ho ..jawaab do ..

Geet ( answered back without thinking) : tou pehle aap apne buttons band Karo ..

Maan stood thr shocked while geet turned her back to him ..embarrassed like never before ..bit her lips n smacked her head ..turning red every second ..

Geet : pagal larki ..( closed her eyes n looked down) ..kya bol diys ...( starts biting her nail)... abb kya karoon ..

While maan smirked now knowing whats all that about ..a tint of blush coloured him red as well with her naive blabber .. with no intensions to embarrass her any further ...trying hard to control his smile he cleated his throat gaining her attention ..n asked in a casual tone ..like he never heard anything ...

Maan : tum yahan kya kar rahi hu ...?

Geet (turned with a red blushing face still head bowed down with embarrassment) : woh mien laptop connect kar rahi thi with projector ..Adi sir n pari have gone thr to join as Mr Sinha starts announcing .. (then looked at the laptop with baby worried face) but yeh hu hi nhi raha ..

Maan looked at it n than at her ..something in her innocense that makes him fall for her every time ..n he kept looking into those deep eyes full of worry n than the blushing red cheeks adding to her beauty ..

Yun tou kam nhi haseen zamane mien ..
Par unki masoomiat jaan-lewa masoomiat ki baat aur hai !!

Geet bent down to connect the cable taking maan out of his dreamland ..n he stood thr seeing her efforts just as he took a step to help her she straightened ..n her hair bun opened making her silky black hairs fall down her shoulder in a wavy style ..

Geet : lo yeh hi baqi tha ..itni mushkil se bana tha ..

Maan looked away trying to hide his smile seeing her angry pout that child like expression ...n looked at her back after a moment struggling with her hairs... involuntarily n so suddenly he said ..

Maan : rehne do geet ..yeh aise hi ziada ache late hain ..

Geet stood shocked with his words wondering from when did he started noticing me ..?? While maan confused n worried ..kya zarorat thi yeh kehne ki ek tou yeh larki jab Bhi mere samne hoti hai koi na koi garbar zaror hoti hai ...pata nai kyun itna kho jata hoon iski Baaton mien ..

Maan : umm woh ..Sinha uncle is going to make the announcement now u be ready with it..

Geet (confused) : ji ..yeh connect hugaya ..

N maan left abrubtly ..

Geet : in he kya hugaya ?? Chaddo ..baad mien ..

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Presentation was done ..the whole media was now pouncing on maan n gaurav Sinha with thr questions ..while geet stood with pari ..

Pari : geet how r Sinha with thr work ..I mean Mk suddenly made plans to deal with them ..

Geet : theek hi hain ..gaurav Sinha helped maan sir when he started he was one those big ones then but he left to establish in abroad n seems like after 5 years had a change of heart since it was never something as big as it was in India ...stocks ke bare mien he didn't wanted me to dig much just said to study the project ..

Pari : hmm ..woh tou theek hai what about thr son varun Sinha ..

Geet (confused) : tou kyun cid jaise sawaal pe sawaal kar rahi hai .. mujhe kaise pata huga ..

Adi ( just joined them) : kya nhi pata ..?

Geet : Adi sir aap iss ko yaad Kara do ke mien kc mien client advisor hoon ..gov. ki character certificate nai se sakti ..

Pari : mien tou has pouch rahi thi ..

Geet : Adi sir jawaab deinge ,..mien chali prem ko dekhne pata nai much khaya ki nai usne ...

Adi : kya huya pari ..

Pari : tht varun ..he is been following geet since last 15 min ...n the fool she is haven't noticed yet ...u know her sir ..

Adi : relax ..u just b with her ..aise Mk Bhi kuch disturb hain must b tiredness ...

Pari : dreamy works so hard na Adi sir ..waise should we tell him abt this varun ...??

Adi : umm ..dekhte hain if we found him free anytime ...

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While geet was looking for prem in the party hall ..varun got his opportunity n came to geet almost spilling his drink on her but she stopped in time ...

Varun : I m so sorry ..aap ka dress ( he tried to touch her but she back away)

Geet : its OK ..nothing happened ...

Varun ( extending his hand) : B t w ..I m varun ..Varun Sinha ..

Geet ( wasn't paying attention n was scanning the hall for prem) : hello ..I m Geet Handa ..client advisor KC ..

Varun ( embarrassed withdrew his hand) : Sab log dance kar rahe hain ...aap ??

Geet : I m sorry ..mujhe jaana hai ..I'll see u later ..

Geet went away spotting prem ..while varun stood thr feeling insulted ..

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The party was at its peek with a slight dip in the weather as it was late night ..dance n drinks high on everyone ..n geet lost in her own world with her friend n prem was long back to KM with dadi ..while aniee was thr chatting with geet ...n maan having continuous tabs on both his girls ..

Aniee : geet tou kabhi dance nai karti ..plss aaj tou ..

Geet : no ways aniee madam ..yeh dancing n all aap humari girls party ke liye choriye ...I won't ever dance in such parties ever ..!!

Aniee : uff tum Bhi na ..

Pari : I agree itne years mien kitne log ne iss jhalli se dance ko poucha but Iska jawaab wahi same ..

Thr laughter was broke midway by varun's appearance much to pari's annoyance ..

Varun : hi girls ..mind if I join ...??

Pari (whispers in aniee's ear) : need to help this dumbo here aniee ..

Aniee gave a confused look to her but realized as he started his convo ..

Varun : strange ..dance has began n such beautiful ladies r standing here off the dance floor ...?

Pari : well seems like thr no better company present here thr we could have asked for Mr Sinha ..

Varun : well than may I offer mine to at least one of u ..(extending his hand for a dance) ..geet ??

Geet who was till now a mute spectator of this convo ..smiled a surprised smile ..

Geet : umm ..uh ..I m ..I m sorry but umm ..I ..mujhe dance nai aata ..so

Varun (insisting) : at least a try ..

Aniee : I don't think varun ..geet has given u ..ur answer ...

Varun (ignoring all grabbing geet's hand) : I won't make u look bad ..(pressing her hand tightly) .. cmon ..

Geet took her hand off his hold n backed ..while aniee took a step forward almost to slap but maan came thr in time ..

Maan ( in a calm voice but fuming red eyes called her) : geet

He was fuming no less than aniee seeing it all from a distance ..the fear in geet's eyes was all to set maan on fire ..but this wasn't the place to show his temper he knew ..but couldn't have tolerated geet under varun's dirty gaze so did what came to his mind first ..

maan (extending his hand in front of her) : dance ..??

Geet stood there shocked n paralized her eyes switching from his hand than to his face having that commanding expression n to the person just standing to the right hand side of her ...n before she knew maan took her hand in his ..her eyes locked with his n he knew she is scared feeling her hands turning cold but he can't back of now ..with a request in his eyes n command in his hold he led her to the dance floor leaving a sighing pari n aniee while varun left ego hurted ...

Geet didn't knew what was happening around her any more ..blindly following his lead she was now on the dance floor in front of him having the privacy of the dim lights ...her hand still in his firm grip ..her eyes were in so much of confusion ..did he do it just to save me ...?? ..n his full of unsaid unexpressed feelings ..

He could see aniee on call surely she was giving dadi the big news n pari with Adi n pinky sharing wht happened may be ..he has this clear chance to leave her n this moment here ...varun was long gone for geet to be in peace but did he wanted to ..?? It took so much ...so many years to bring her here ...but looking t her he knew she was in a dillema ..n before he could decide anything ..he heard her meek shy voice ..

Geet : mujhe sach mien dance Karna nhi aata ...

Maan smiled looking at her bowed head guessing she probabling was turning red again ..n the band hit the piano with a new song ..

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N maan said looking into her eyes ...

Maan : don't worry miss handa I won't let u fall ...(geet looked down knowing he was pointing at her clumsyness but maan took a step n held her firmly against his length holding her waist her head snapped up n body stiffened feeling him so close n heart stopped for a single beat ..he could feel she wasn't comfortable may be scared even ..his hold soften n he said looking at her giving her the choice) trust me ..


Hey...la la la la la la la la
La la la la la la la la la la la

Thr was so much depth in his words n eyes geet just couldn't help but to fall for him all over again ...leaving herself at his mercy ..placing her hand on his shoulder ...looking into his eyes living a moment of ineffable joy in her life ...she did trusted him ..with herself ...with her whole existence ..


Dekha jo tum ko yeh dil ko kya hua hai
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaya kya nasha hai.. Haan..

Her simple gesture of surrender would mean so much maan never knew but at this moment knowing that she trust him with her was the most proud moment of his life ...lost in the eyes of the angel in front he found himself moving at the beat of thr now synced heartbeats rather than the music ...

Female
Dekha jo tum ko yeh dil ko kya hua hai
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaya kya nasha hai.. Haan..

Geet never knew when n how she fell for her sado boss but ever since she realized it ..every day the feeling seems to intensify only ..

Mohabbat ho na jaaye deewana kho na jaaye
Sambhalu kaise isko mujhe tu bata

N now meeting him ..living around him for him is her life but knowing the differences they have ...n the way he has been with her ...she knew her feelings don't have a future ..but how can she help her heart ..

Female
Mohabbat ho na jaaye deewana kho na jaaye
Sambhalu kaise isko mujhe tu bata

The thought of him knowing it all n his reaction made her eyes mishty ...her body stiffened ..making him worried ..

Dekha jo tum ko yeh dil ko kya hua hai
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaya kya nasha hai.. Haan..

Geet broke the pose n was about to walk away when panicked he jerked her towards him making her fall on him ... thr heart beats race in marathon ...her hair covering her face now ... he swriled her around once gaining the position again ..the moment was unbearable her leaving like tht was like death ..he needed her thr in his embrace like he needed his next breath to live ..

Music ..

A few strands got stick with the wetness of her tear pearls ..n he caressed it away sending shivers down ..a new sensation building up in her tummy making her hold his shoulder tightly ..sending shivers down his entire being ..


Bheegi bheegi alko se
Chori chori palko se
Kyon mera sapna churaye

He urged her to look above n she obeyed gently ..concern oozing out of his eyes ...questioning her ..n she shook hr head looking down ..

Jhuki jhuki ankhiyon se
Dheeri dheeri batiyon se
Kyon mujhe apna banaye

A closer pose a closer look to her down casted eyes n flushed face ...they were swaying with the beats ..gaining the attention of the crowd now ..
Tracing the length of her arm he held her hand n twirl her with a jerk her back was plastered with his chest ..her heart racing fast in his hold ..her knees could no longer bear her weight with his hand snaking her front so passionately n she leened back ...closing her eyes ..dazzled ..

Meri nazron pe chhaye
Khushboo ke jaise aaye
Mera tan mann mehkaaye
Sasoon mein yeh pal pal
Jaane kaise hulchul
Kuch bhi samajh mein na aaye

Her one hand cluthig his while the other covering his on her front ..lost as she was moved with his lead ..a moment when she finally managed to open her eyes n saw in his tilting her face ...the urge to turn n hide herself in his embrace from him only was so strong ..the thumping heart n wild thoughts scared her n she tried to move away ..

Shararat ho na jaaye mohabbat ho na jaaye
Sambhalu kaise isko mujhe tu bata
Shararat ho na jaaye mohabbat ho na jaaye
Sambhalu kaise isko mujhe tu bata

Just a little distance n maan's heart was restless ..n he pulled her back ..resistance was clear on her face ..he stood thr looking at him with a plea ...her eyes could no longer hide her feelings but heart feared for the aftermath ...

Meri hai yeh mushkil
Ab to yeh mera dil
Bas mein huzoor nahi hai
Itna bata de mujhe
Kaise samjaaon tujhe
Mera yeh kasoor nahin hai

Shaking with the turmoil she was desperate to run from him ...never in all these years she felt so vulnerable with her feelings ..but what was it that he couldn't let her go ..may be because for the first time maan saw so much uncertainty so much pain in her eyes ...he just couldn't let her go like this ..

Music

She looked in his eyes still confused with what was happening all these years of differences n this moment ..but like his touch had his own tale of comfort ..holding her close he moved with the music ..never leaving her gaze ...n she finally gave up on everything resting her forehead on his shoulder ..the tears she was holding spilled while he held her close never allowing anyone to see her like this ...every tear pearl getting sooked in his skin exposed from the open v of his shirt ...

Chaahe hum chaahe bhi to
Pehre lagaye bhi to
Kaise din raat ko roke
Aag bina yeh jale zor na koi chale
Kaise jazbaat ko roke

The unsaid love ..every unnoticed gesture sometimes becomes so unbearable that words r needed but what will happen if someone just can't get enough strength to say ...!!
WHR will the love story end ...??

Yu chaahat ho na jaaye mohabbat ho na jaaye
Sambhalu kaise isko mujhe tu bata
Mohabbat ho na jaaye deewana kho na jaaye
Sambhalu kaise isko mujhe tu bata...


Music ...

Ankahe jasbaat kahin khamoshi mien kho na Jaye ..
Darr hai kahin kisi mor par yeh benaam bandhan toot na Jaye ..


Precap :- second part of the previous precap holds ...sorry it got a bit more prolonged than I planned ...

"Something bad happened"

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Pheww its done ...hope u all liked it ...plsss plsss plsss leave a few words ..really took a lot to update this one ...n yes
Passion isn't my forte so sorry to those who were expecting something like kurbaan ...I couldn't ...:( but hopefully yeh itna bora nai tha ..
Jo Bhi tha do let me know ..

Luv ya all
Sobia



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Posted: 11 years ago
NoTe

Next is ..
ISHAQZAADE
Hopefully
Tomorrow ...😉😳

PMS after tht ..till then t.c n ..
All my dear family members ..muhaazzz
Bye all ..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
geet drooling over maan was so cute!!!!!!!!!😳😆
that varun sinha looks quite desperate kind of person😡
thank god maan came at right and asked geet for dance!!!!!!
maaneet dance beautiful😳
beautifully written!!!!!!!!👏

when will they confess their love towards each other

precap scared me
what bad will happen😕

try to update next part soon!!!!!!!
Edited by -MSKdeewani- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
maaneet drooling over each other
varun asked geet for dance but maan came at right time
loved maaneets dance
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Posted: 11 years ago



very passionate update...

u created magical feelings with this part and song was perfect...

I was mesmerized...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE
BOTH GEET AND MASAN CANT KEEEP THEIR EYES OFF EACH OTHER
AND GEET IS JEALOUS OF ALL THE GIRLS DROOLING OVER MSK
WHILE MAAN DOESNT LIKE THE BAD EYES OF MEN FOLLOWING GEET AROUND

AND THE DANCE AND MUSIC WAS AWESOME - BUT WILL THEY BE EVER ABLE TO EXPRESS
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 4
awesome dear...
Maan is protective and possessive and jealous too...
lovely...
he knows Geet is attracted towards him...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u post the link when u update in this thread?
FF Daily Updates 9
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Posted: 11 years ago
dono pyar k haath per majboor...dil mein pyar magar honth bandh...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesme part
hope they confress their feeling soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hayeee sobi... A tight wala hug to you...
Luv ya lots... Muuaahhhzzz...

Last both parts were just superb...
Pyaar hai.. Jatate hai bas dikhate nahi...
Hayeee Prem is so adorable yaar...
Loved geet's pampering for prem...
And then in 4th part the song...
I have vm of that song on maaneet...
Its tooo beautiful re and song is just awesum...
The way u described their unsaid love was just wow...
Ye dono kab bolenge apne dil ki baat...????

Waiting for next egarly...
Luv ya hugsss...

Ur's.. Dadi..😉

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