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Posted: 11 years ago
oh long time sweety where r u in these day
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very nice story
geet is working with maan from last 5 yrs
both love each other
maan dint confess his feeling to geet due to his insecurity to loose her after that
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firstly thank u all for the lovely comments n likes
n really very very sorry for the delay
sach mien i was all set to type the update the other day but unfortunetely my paper which was suppose to be held on 18 of june got prepone to 12th ..thts y i couldn't update


relly sorry ...but abhi me jaying to type n will come back in a day or two after finishing it ..pakkkaa ..iss baar sachi mien paakaa ..😃

leaving u all with a teaser 😉😉

TEASER

Adi : ji sir ..pari ne bhi kaha tha wohh change kar k nikal jayegi ...but actually mien aapko aur car ko dekhte dekhte hotel ke side parking mien aagaya n yahan geet ki scooty parked hai ..



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Maan (looked away clearly knowing it's a fake smile she is wearing) : its ok geet ..tumhain thanks kehne ki koi zarorat nahi hai ..mene jo bhi kiya ..

Geet (interupted him) : insaaniyat ke naate kiya ..(maan looked upto her ..she never interupted him ..n thr was edge of acusation in her voice he could not miss but yet could not understand y was it so ..he could not stand this side of her ..this our cold behaviour of hers ..he couldn't stand n answered just to get over with it)

Maan : han insaaniyat ke naate hi ...tumhari jaga koi bhi huta ..mien wohi karta jo mene aaj jiya ..

Geet (maan looked oposite to her n she smiled unknown to the tear trail that dropped from the corner of her eyes) : jaanti hoon ..meri jaga koi aur huta aap tab bhi yeh hi karte ..5 saaloon mien kuch aur samjhi hoon ya nahi ..aapke andar ki insaaniyat ko samajh hi gayi hoon ...after all kitni baar iss hi insaaniyat ne tu mujhe bachaya hai ..

Maan (turned back to her almost at the edge of loosing but then griped the steering wheell n said) : aaj k liye itna thank u kafi hai geet ..tumhien ghar chor deta hoon ..

Geet (chuckled n wiped her wet cheeks) : aur kitna chorenge mujhe aap

Maan looked stunned with her words thr was so many things that one sentenced said that she never will ...


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RAIN n MAANEET ...😳😳


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enjoy n keep guessing whats in store ..till i come back

miss me ..
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lovely story... continue n pm me...
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nice teaser, try to update soon
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interesting teaser ...
Continue soon ...
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hi all,
hopefully sab theek hu ..
its a holiday season for most of us ..so happy holidays
here is the update from my side ...

sorry for the delay but i ve already told u all the reason ..

A VERY BIG THANK YOU FOR THESE LOVELY PEOPLE ..thnxx a ton for all ur appreciation n love ...🤗

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previous part @ pge 23

MG SS :
Salaam -e- Ishq


PART 5

Dil ki baat phir dil mien reh gayi ...
Khamoshi thi kal bhi aaj phir baaqi ...
Bas khamooshi hi reh gayi ...

Naa hum kuch keh saake aur
Naa unhoon ne kuch kaha ...
Mien tanha chali thi saloon pehle ...
Aur aaj bhi tanha reh gayi ...

Who bina kuch kahe mujh se ...
Mera sab kuch le gaye ...
Aur mien aaj bhi khali haath reh gayi ...

Yeh kaisa saath hai humara ...

Yeh kaisa saath hai humara ke ..
Hum-kadam hukar bhi who humsafar nahi ...
Who mere sab kuch hugaye magar ...
Mien aaj bhi unki kuch bhi nahi ...!!



With a smile on her face she was still thr standing in that very hall greeting every guest a bye .. n like every time they were again miles apart ...not just in walking distance but by heart as well .. Receiving all the praises n applauds just as he walked her down the dance stage he was again that very boss she was accustomed to ..left in a mid of all those masses she was again lost ..lost with her own broken heart ..but this wasn't knew ..in last 5 years thr were in-numerable moments when she felt her heart being crushed under his walking away steps ...but this time with her naked feelings the pain was all the more ...those few moments with him on the dance floor she bared her heart to the man she loves the moest in this world n yet all what he did was to just walk away without a word ..without a second look even ...was just wiping away her tears enough ..?? did he really thought she was crying for nothing ...or he never understood anything ...?? Thr were actually so many questions that she could do nothing but to be thr n wait for him to be back n answer them ...Alas ..!! when he walked in the party again he never looked at her ...even that one look which was all she was gifted with was now gone ..n then she smacked herself to reality ...HE NEVER NOTICED U APART FROM BEING HIS EMPLOYEE THAN HOW THE HELL WILL HE UNDERSTAND THE REASON OF UR TEARS ..n everything again came back to the very point it all started ...


Geet : adi sir ..umm ..aap pls baqi k guest ko c-off kardoge ...ill ..ill leave now its too late now ..

Adi (with a genuine smile) : sure iss mien pls wali kiya baat hai ..waise bhi its just another 30min.s n every1 will be gone ..

Geet (with a slight smile) : hmm .. chalo phir ill leave good night ..

Adi : good nite ..n drive safe late hugaya hai

Geet : I will ..bye


With a fake smile she made her way out while passing by the guests ...just at the exit gate she glanced back n saw Maan conversating with Mr. Sinha ..normal completely just as he was when the party started but how easily he changed all this beauty for her she thought looking at him calm ...


n with a sigh she wiped the little wetness from the corner of her eyes n hurried away from the party to change in the hotel room n leave this place n get away from him ..

Dard jo aaj usski ankhoon mien dekha hai ..
Maaf karde ae khuda mujhe ..
Ehsaas huya hai abb jaakar ke ..
Anjaane mien uss pari ko kitna
Dukh mene de diya hai ...

Jaaon kaise saamne uske yeh bata mujhe ae dil ..
Sharmenda jo apne ap ko mene iss kadar kar diya hai ..
Ashqoon ne usske mujhe ..kya batoon
Aaj kitna daara diya hai ..

Meri kismat mien nahi kisi ko khushi dena
Aaj uske aansoon ne yeh baat ..
Ek baar phir sabit kar diya hai ...

Door hai woh tu kya huya
Dil ko aaj bhi sukoon hai mere ..
Ke abb bhi yahin kahin aas paas hai woh
Bas iss hi khayaal ne mujhe khush kar diya hai ...
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It was so difficult to stand thr in the mid of all those people who unaware to the emotional trauma he was going through were so adamant on praising him ..he never felt so irritated with all the claps n applauds ..knowing that the shaking girl beside him was getting scared of all these people n even he was ..for they don't know what they enjoyed was not just a dance performance for them ..it was way too deep a moment that actually led him to the depth of her hearts ...her eyes had always been the mirror to her heart n soul but today the image of pain it showed shook him completely ..

He always loved the fact that he can read n understand the emotions she hides from the world but today the intensity of her pain ..pained him like never before his resistance hurts her he knew but it pains so much he never thought ...still with the past he had stopped him to go ahead but her pain all the more encouraged him to stay away from her ..

He loved his parents n showed them ..he was his mum's fav child ..dad was his buddy but they left him at the age when he didn't even completely understand what death means ..n than thr was his elder bro .. thr was a huge difference of age b/w the 3 childs of Khurana family ..n so only maan's elder brother was able to take a v.good care of maan ..

dadi maa being held up with an infant aniee n the KC was completely free from maan's worry for she knew his elder brother will take good care of him n he did too ...n than the love of his life came as a mother figure in maan's life who pampered him n aniee to the very limit ..actually spoiling them 2 as his brother use to say ...but than the 2 of them did seeded true values n good morals in both children ..

But God again gave him the punishment to love someone so dearly ..just as he came in Final year of BBA they both died in a plane crash ... life never let him have what he loved ..n he simply can't afford to loose geet this time ... he is happy having her by his side silently knowing that is just enough he won't greed for more ... never again make the same mistake for the 3rd time .. yet the thing he failed to understand in his fear is ..if u don't hold on to a thread so thin tight u might not even get to know when n how the thread will slip off from ur clasp n u'll be left empty handed ...

He saw geet walking out of the party but couldn't dare to look at her again .. how easily a human being can run away from his deeds ...face what he want n runaway from everything he don't want to .. sinful human nature ..

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Almost after an hour almost everyone was gone ...in an empty hall maan was sitting on the steps of that very dance floor when adi came informing him that the hall is going to close n they should leave .. by the look of his boss he knew maan is just physically here n mentally lost somewhere else .. but obviously he couldn't question him ..

Adi : sir umm .. late hugaya hai I think humien chalna chahiye ..

Maan : tu sab guest chale gaye ..??

Adi : ji sir ..

Maan : n hall band karna zarori hai ..

Adi ( laughing in his style) : ehehe hee hehe e .. sir its past 2 ..aapko neend nahi aayi ..

Maan (lost) : usko itna dukh dekar mujhe neend kaise aayegi aaj ..

Adi (couldn't hear his almost mute voice) : ji sir ...??

Maan : nahi kuch nahi ..uppar room mien kuch files rakhi hain ..mien lekar aata hoon than we'll move .. I'll drop u ..late hugaya hai ..

Adi : right sir ..


Maan would have long gone but a few voices in the corridor stopped him in his track n he knew it was geet .. the high pitch voice of her was alarming n a few notion clearly depicted geet was struggling against that jerk Varun Sinha ..but he couldn't locate them at the lavish corridor of this hotel ...instead the voices went high n higher making him go mad with restlessness ..

Geet (was moving back while he was advancing towards her) : leave me ...sir plss jane dijeye mujhe...aap.. aap hosh mien nahi hain ..

Varun (geet had hit the wall n he trapped her with his giant structure) : really ...hu sakta hai .. (tracing her face with his filthy hands ...making geet jerk her face sideways trying to move out of his sight but couldn't ) .. waise bhi tum jaise larki ko dekhne ke baad koi hosh mien reh bhi kaise sakta hai ...

Geet ( she started pushing him away while he held her hand tight in his clasp) : jaane dijeye mujhe sir plss ..choriye mujhe yeh kya kar rahe hain aap ..leave my hand ...(geet was loosing her patience).. I said leave my hand ..choro mujhe ..warna mien ..

Varun : warna kya han ...?? Kya karlo gi ..?? ..waise maan ke saath dance karne mien tu koi problem nahi thi ..woh choye tu bhi koi problem nahi hai ...tu mere saamne yeh attitude kyun han ...

Suddenly thr was someone screaming for her ...the voice was un-mistakably maan's ...geet could nvr make a mistake with this one ...with a jerk Geet freed herself off his hold n slapped him hard ...she may be naive in understanding such approaches but she isn't week to keep numb when somebody advance towards her ...a girl's will defend her dignity is probably the strongest emotions a girl harbors within n the her strongest weapon as well ... her eyes were filled with tears but the instinct to defend herself was way too strong ..with a sudden fire in herself she pushed him away n just as he fell down she heard 2 steps coming thr way n ran only to dash into maan ...



her breathing was shallow n maan's face was filled with wrath ...but varun unaware to the presence of another person continued spitting shit ..

Varun : tum indian girls ka yeh hi problem hota hai ... boss ke saath kuch bhi chalta hai ..but koi aur saamne hu tu sati savitri banne ka natak karti phirti hoo ..

Geet was too shaken to hear any of his bullshit but maan did ..n if geet wouldn't have been clinging to him ..surely at this moment varun sinha would have been part of history ...but the shaking form of geet n her tear striken face stopped maan to increase any kind of violence ..

Geet (hugging maan hiding away from tht pervert) : wohh ..sir ussne ...pata nahi kahan se aagaya ...mien tu apna cell phone lene wapis aayi thi ...but wohh ...yeh ...

Maan (cupped her face in his palm n wiped her tears away) : shh .. kuch nhi huya ..mien aagaya hoon na ..kuch nahi huga ..

Varun (stood up hearing them both n with stumbling step walked upto maan)
: oh god maan stop it .. bacha tu mien bhi nahi hoon ..mere saamne yeh natak kyun ...?? Aur mien kuansa isse life time k liye maang raha hoon ..just one ...//

Maan stepped ahead n punched him hard on his face before he could complete his words n the drunk jerk fell down bleeding ...while geet clutched onto his hand from back clearly geet was hell scared to bear any more drama for tonight ...n so only maan held her hand n starting walking away when varun uttered the cheap remarks of the night ..

Varun : itni possessiveness kyun maan han ... tum se pehle bhi iski life mien koi raha huga ..tumhare baad bhi aayega ..this is commercial world ..iss jaisi larkiyan kaise yahan tak puhanchti hain yeh tu tum bhi jaante hu aur mien bhi ...

Maan turned too quick for varun or even geet to realize n punched him hard on his face n he fell down almost unconscious ..geet was trembling with fear when looked at her but a strange confusion was thr in her eyes as if she was trying to understand something ...n he knew geet didn't heard varun's last word or even if she did she didn't understand what he meant not at least now ...may be she will if she thought about it all in more clear n calm state of mind ...but maan didn't wanted tht ...the confusion on her face n the fear in her eyes was the last things he wanted to see on his geet's face n with a desperate attempt he cupped her face in his hand n made her look into his eyes



Maan : look at me geet ...meri taraf dekho ..(it was probably the most difficult thing for them both ...thr was so much pain in hr eyes n equal fury in his tht it made it impossible for them both to maintain an eye contact but she did ...she did looked up to his face when he spoke).. u trust me right ..?? (a tear pearl slipped down her eyes n she nodded like a child when he wiped the tear trail ever so gently).. tou phir rona band karo ...stop crying ...nothing happened geet ..u r safe ,,mien hoon yahan tumhare saath kuch nahi huga ..

Geet (tears falling down her eyes while she spoke with hiccups) : wohh ...woh usne aisa kyun kaha ..mujh jaisi larki ...(she sobbed hard while maan closed his eyes he knew geet couldn't handle such crude words)... mene tu uss se baat bhi nahi ki thi party mien ...sachi sir mene nahi kaha tha kuch bhi .. woh khud hi mere peeche aagaya jab mien room se nikali mobile lekar ..tu usne ...usne kyun kaha mujh jaisi larki ..

Maan (maan opened his trying to control his temper each word of explanation only triggered his fury n the urge to beat that basdard to death but she held geet in his protective embrace n walked away) : chalo yahan se geet ...

There were manager with security walking in on the floor ..

Manager : mr. khurana yeh sab kya hai ..is everything ok ..humien ek customer ne room se complain ki ke yahan kuch log shor macha rahe hain ..

Maan (st) : kisi larki ki awaaz par bahar nikal k mada karne ki tou sochi nhi magar yeh complain karna zaror yaad raha ...🤢🤢



Maan : nothing manager ..problem solve hugayi hai ..sharaab ke nashe mien apni had bhool gaya tha yeh ... mene yaad dila di ..

The manager eyed geet who still lost in varun's words standing behind maan n understood everything that might have happened ..n maan took geet out of the hotel .. maan ordered the chauffer to bring his car when he saw geet standing outside the shelter of hotel porch getting drenched in the slight drizzle as numb as ever ..he walked to her not knowing what would be the words to get everything normal again but s always all he could do was call her name ..

Maan : geet ...

She turned with a dead eyes staring at him with confusion ...it looked as if she wasn't aware of the drizzle soaking her wet nor the tears that just dropped down her lashes burning him in the fire of hell .. n before he could say anything he felt his mbl vibrating it was adi's call ...as always not being able to see her distressed form he walked away at a safe distance to attend the call ..

Adi : sir aap kahan hain ...??

Maan (still looking at geet who was now facing her back to him) : umm .. adi kuch imp kaam yaad aagaya tha ..tou mien nikal gaya ...sorry ..tum ..tum ek kaam karo ghar chale jao ..koi problem tu nahi hugi or ill ask some1 at KM to send u a car ..?

Adi : nahi sir mjhe koi problem nahi hugi ..but sab theek hai na ..aap ...aap pareshaan lag rahe hain ..

Maan (looked at geet wondering if really everything is fine but sighed n answered him) : nahi sab theek hai ....(lost in his thoughts).. aur jo nahi hai ...ussko theek karna mujhe aata hai ...

Adi (he couldn't hear him properly) : ji sir ..??

Maan : kuch nahi kale k kaam karna office jaldi aajana ..kuch imp files hain finish karni hain ..

Adi : alright sir ...(maan was about to cut the call when he stopped him).. sir wohh ..

Maan : kya huya ..??

Adi (hesitant) : wohh sir ..geet ...geet aapke saath hai kya ...?

Maan (looked up n saw where geet was standing n then looked around if adi was anywhere near them but he wasn't) : umm ...nahi ...I mean wohh tu kafi pehle hi nikal gayi thi na ...??

Adi : ji sir ..pari ne bhi kaha tha wohh change kar k nikal jayegi ...but actually mien aapko aur car ko dekhte dekhte hotel ke side parking mien aagaya n yahan geet ki scooty parked hai ..

Maan (relieved he didn't know what happened a few minutes ago) : han wohh actually mene use office ki car se drop karwa diya tha ..late hugaya tha kafi iss liye ..

Adi (relived that geet would be fine) : oh ..ok sir thank u ..mien tu darr hi gaya tha uski scooty yahan dekh kar ..uska mbl bhi nahi lag raha ..

Maan (thoughtful n then answered as if he was not concerned at all) : hmm ..aur kuch ..

Adi : nahi sir ..sorry ...I mean good night sir

Maan : gud nite adi ..

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PART 6


Geet was actually so glad maan got this call at the right moment ..or knowing herself she probably would have cried buckets in front of him again ...this solitary time gave her enough space to regain her balance again ...tonight was actually a very eventful one ...n



after years not that she hasn't faced so much in one day before but its been years n this one today was so un-expected that it took her all self control ..first maan's offer to dance ..n then her over-whelming emotions ..n then again his oblivious behavior ...n bam ...!!
This accident ...but she did well ..at least she didn't ran away from the party or something ..maan still wouldn't ever get know the reason behind her tears .. n then that bas***d ..she did slapped him off her ...he couldn't even harm her an inch ..it was all good ..the thoughts were calming enough to make her feel a bit better ..if not than at least it was enough for her to hold her tears n pretend to be normal till she is alone ..

The journey till geet's house was seems to be so long ...n her scared posture holding herself with her hands crossed in front didn't helped maan either ..in any other time he would have wished for this time to stay forever but tonight ..with her silence it was suffocating him ..surely she was still thinking about the words of that varun but what possibly he can say to her ...till now she was in much of a shock to understand what he said but now with all the time she have she will surely understand what he meant ...what will be her reaction ..?? will she be upset ..surely she will be ...but then will she come office tomorrow ?? ...what if ...what if she left the job ..?? the thoughts were innumerable ...and terrifying as well ...the thought of her leaving had him stop the car with a jerk ...

Maan (turned to her cupping her face he said with a urgent plead in his voice) : geet please mat socho uske baare mien ..



Geet looked at him with a blank look.. she couldn't understand the edge of plead in her boss's voice n words came from her mouth but it was clear from the look on her face that she wasn't really in this moment ..may be she wasn't even talking to him as well ...

Geet (looking past maan in oblivion) :
uss ne jo kaha ...//



Maan (shook her holding her shoulder) : bakwaas kar raha tha woh ... samjhi tum ...aur tumhien koi zarorat nahi hai usske baare mien sochne ki ...nashe mien tha woh ..bina soche usne kuch boldiya ...bhool jao abb geet ...please jitna sochogi utni ziada takleef hugi ..

Geet (looked at his grip n then at him ..a question in her eyes ...his authority ..the liberty he was taking was questioned for the first time ever ..he wasn't use to it n it made him retreat n geet to voice out her question for the first time) : kitna asaan hai hai na aapke liye ..kisi ki kahi huyi baat ko bas yun hi bhool jana ..

Maan looked at her taken aback with her accusation ...but she looked down

Geet (composed herself): I am sorry ..aaj phir aapko meri waja se itni problem hugayi ..

Maan : geet tum jaanti ho aisa kuch nahi hai ..

Geet (looked up n smiled faintly at him) : thanks ..aaj jo kuch aapne kiya usske liye ..

Maan (looked away clearly knowing it's a fake smile she is wearing) : its ok geet ..tumhain thanks kehne ki koi zarorat nahi hai ..mene jo bhi kiya ..

Geet (interrupted him) : insaaniyat ke naate kiya ..

maan looked upto her ..she never interupted him ..n thr was edge of acusation in her voice he could not miss but yet could not understand y was it so ..he could not stand this side of her ..this our cold behaviour of hers ..he couldn't stand n answered just to get over with it ..

Maan : han insaaniyat ke naate hi ...tumhari jaga koi bhi huta ..mien wohi karta jo mene aaj jiya ..

Geet (maan looked oposite to her n she smiled unknown to the tear trail that dropped from the corner of her eyes) : jaanti hoon ..meri jaga koi aur huta aap tab bhi yeh hi karte ..5 saaloon mien kuch aur samjhi hoon ya nahi ..aapke andar ki insaaniyat ko samajh hi gayi hoon ...after all kitni baar iss hi insaaniyat ne tu mujhe bachaya hai ..

Maan (turned back to her almost at the edge of loosing but then griped the steering wheell n said) : aaj k liye itna thank u kafi hai geet ..tumhien ghar chor deta hoon ..

Geet (chuckled n wiped her wet cheeks) : aur kitna chorenge mujhe aap

Maan looked stunned with her words thr was so many things that one sentenced said that she never will ...it wasn't her to voice out her feeling but today he got know how much he has hurt him ..till now he knew she loves him ...but never actually understood the level of hurt his ignorance gave her n now that he know ..every word of her gave it a new meaning .. geet must have noticed the torned look he have had weared thts why she never turned back to look at him

Geet (turned to open the door n said without looking him) : mera ghar aagaya hai sir ...good night

She left just as she said n he was left seeing her walk away ...in that moment telling her his feeling was more important than taking the next breath ...

Maan (looked as she walked paas another house to reach hers n said in a barely audible voice) : mien tumhain kabhi nahi choronga geet ...kabhi nahi ...

an urge so strong that over powered every other thought made him come out of the car n walk towards her

Maan ( a few steps behind her he called her name like some whispers soft n full of emotions that had her stoped in her track in the middle of the road) : geet ..



She turned n it looked as if the whole world stopped with her ..she was wearing a bottle green patyala ..probably she had changed in the hotel room that had been given to office staff ...but was every bit as beautiful in the dark night ...dangerously sensual in the light drizzle that he walked towards her like a moth attracted to fire ...n she kept looking at him as if she heard the unsaid words ...her eyes full of confusion ..her face glowing ...a few pearls wetting her eye lashes making her look angelic ...he approached her with slow steps ..the words were at the tip of her tongue n just as he 2 or 3 steps away from her a sharp horn spoiled it all n from the dark corner thr was suddenly a jeep coming in full force ...he eyes widened in horror while geet turned to the source of sound naturally when maan pulled her to himself n like a jet plan the jeep zoomed past them ..

Geet was paralyzed for a second when maan was checking her ...cupping her face with utmost fear ..

Maan : geet tum theek hu ..tumhain lagi tu nahi ...kuch bolo damit ...

Geet jerked out of her nightmare with his high pitch voice n nodded

Geet (sighed in relief) : mien theek hoon ...theek hoon mien sir ..aap ...aap theek hain na ..??

Maan (left the breath he was holding till now in relief) : geet andar jao ..

Geet (stood thr confused) : gi ..

then looked around to see she was just in front of her own house ..before she could register anything completely in her head she saw maan going back to his car ..and just like that he zoomed away .. as always ...

bas ek lamhe mien who itne paas aagaya
ke usski garm saansoon ne
meri rooh tk ko mehka diya
phir bas yoonhi sard raat ki thandak mien
who mujhe tanha chor gaya ...😭



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Just as geet rung the bell ..her Maami opened the door as if she was on her toes waiting for her ...indeed she was ..but before she or even geet could say anything her Maama ji came from behind n in a worried voice inquired her ..

Tanmay : geet beta kahan reh gayi thi tu ...(geet stood thr paralyzed remembering all the event of the evening n went numb)... kab se tujhe call kar raha hoon ...kitne time pehle teri call aayi thi ke tu party se nikal rahi hai tu phir itni dair kahan reh gayi ...aur yeh ...yeh kya haal hai ...bhegi huyi kyun hai tu ...bol bacha sab theek hai na ...

Gayatri (seeing geet's state) : kya aap bhi ji ...bachi abhi aayi hai andar tu aane do usko ...dehleez par hi choro hugaye hu aap tu ...chal geet tu andar aaja ...bacha mera aaja ..(held her from her shoulder n made her step inside breaking geet's trance) ... kitni bhegi huyi hai ..jaa pehle upar ja change karle ..phir hum baat karte hain ..

Tanmay (sighed realizing he over reacted n asked geet to go up n freshnup herself n turned to gayatri) : tum usske liye khana garam kardo phir mujhe uss se baat karni hai ... raat hugayi hai par ...koi baat nahi khana ..//

Gayatri : hugaya aapka ...party se aarahi hai woh ..office se nahi ..khana kha liya huga ussne ...aur kya baat karni hai aapko ...mujhe pata hai ...shaddi ki hi baat karni hai na aapko ..subha kar lijeyega ...waise bhi mujhe ache se andaza hai phir apne kisi kangaal dost ke bte ka rishta laaye hunge aap geet k liye... pehle hii bachi itni thaki huyi hai aur aapko iss waqt yeh sab baat yaad aati hai ...

Tanmay : gayatri tum par choro na tu iss dunya ke har larke mien tumhain koi na koi burai zaror dekh jayegi geet k liye ...iss liye iss baar geet se mien baat karoonga ..

Gayatri (angry) :
karni hai na aapko baat karlijeyega ..but subha abhi bilkul nahi ...pata nahi kya huya huga jo itni ghabrai huyi hai woh ..

Tanmay : tum ...tum upar jaakar uss se baat karo ..dekho kya huya hai ...

Gayatri : abb aapko mujhe batane ki zarorat nahi ke mujhe kya karna hai kya nahi ...dhundh garam karoongi phir jaongi usske paas ..

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While on the other hand geet just came out after changing her dress n stood in front of the window looking at her best friend's house just opposite to theirs' ...a tear slipped eyes remembering those beautiful days of her life ...n just then gayatri entered in the room with a glass of milk in her hand n geet turned to her wipping her tears with a smile ..

Gayatri (came beside her n a smile caressed her face lovingly) : mien teri maa nahi hoon but 10 saal ki thi tu jab se tujhe jaanti hoon ...abb bhi lagta hai tujhe k tu mujh se apne aansoo chupa sakti hai ..??

Geet eyes filled with tears n she hugged her tightly while gayatri gathered her in a motherly embrace sooking all her fears n pains n geet kept on crying hugging her close ..n parted when she felt a bit composed n gayatri made her sit on the bed n sat beside her ..

Gayatri (held her hands) :
abb bolegi kya huya ...

Geet (wiped her tears) : kuch nahi ..bas wohh ...(sighed when despite her full efforts another tear trail slipped from her eyes)... preetie ki buhat yaad aarahi thi ...

Gayatri (sighed knowing her dear child's pain) : bacha jo chale jaate hain unko wapis tu nahi laaya jaa sakta na ..aur ..kitni baar samjhaya hai mene tumhain preetie ko iss tarha roo kar yaad karogi tu tumhain hi nahi ussko bhi takleef hugi ...

Geet (sighed wipping her tears standing up close to the window gazing preetie's house again) : jaanti hoon maami ji ..sab jaanti hoon ...phir bhi its ...its so difficult to except it even after 5 years ke ..ke my best friend is dead ...(and new tears made thr way out of her almond hazels)... har baat share ki hum ne ...harm or par saath thay ...aur bas yoon hi chali gayi wohh ujhe chor kar ...aur sirf wohh nahi sab chale gaye ...sab maami ji ..sab

Gayatri (sighed not knowing what to say) :
beta zindagi aisi hi hoti hai ...kisi ke jaane se nahi rukti .. kuch bhi hujaye yeh tu behte pani ki tarha hai kisi haal mien ruk nahi sakti ..jahan raasta milta hai chal deti hai ...

Geet (nodded in oblivion) : hmm ..mujh se behtar yeh kuan jaan sakta hai maami ji ..

Gayatri (stood up n caressed her head going out of words she decided to leave her alone than to make it worse for her) : dhundh rakha hai pee kar soona bheeg gayi thi na ...

Geet smiled continued to look out for sometime ...while gayatri left defeated n disheartened ..n saw tanmay eagerly waiting for her down stairs ..

Tanmay (worried) :
kya huya kuch bataya uss ne ..??

Gayatri (sighed n sat on the sofa) : preetie ..

The name was enough for tanmay to understand why geet's mood was so off ...no matter how much she pretends to be all cheerful ..full of life ...deep down they know how much pain the poor girl is burying in her heart ...wasn't it enough on her part to loose her father at the age of 10 n then to be shifted here so far away from her mother as well that god decided to snatch her friends away from her as well ... there was a time when her day started with preetie rushing in the house waking her up n then the whole group of girls will go to hr school together ...not only this geet was lucky enough to have all her friends in her college as well .. her life was one that who ever saw her smile envied her ...envied her for how she could have such amazing friends ..envied her for how they all girls use to protect geet ...envied her because she was a thr precious princess whom they all kept safe from all the world's problems ...n then all of a sudden preetie's death n then thr group being shattered was too much for geet to bear but she drowned herself in her new internship in KC then ...and KC never left her afterwards ...but still the pain is their always will be just surfing in moments like this when she has none to share her thought with ..

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On the other hand geet sat in her room with all her pictures from school till college life scattered all around ...her best friends
Aroohi ...the masti-chor
Suhaana ...the phrankstar
Ridhima ...the Einstein
N Preetie ... the dearest companion for all of them ..


The memories she surrounded herself with to get over the pain maan left her with ... but who was she kidding she can never get away from him ..his memories ...her feelings for him ...everything will remain as it is ...


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pheww its done ...hopefully didn't bored u all ...n one thing how did preetie died it will be revealed later in the story plss don't take stress for that one ..

n now lemme know how is it ...😳

WAITING FOR UR LIKES N REVIEWS

luv ya all
sobia

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 11 years ago

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