new SS-DANCE PE CHANCE part 6 /pg 12/ 31 dec - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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when are u going to update...waiting...
update soon...
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SS- DANCE PE CHANCE

Sorry guys for the delay...actually i was out of town...i will update other parts soon and i m glad u all like my story...thanks for your patience dear🥳...
thanks for the lovely comment and for the likes🤗...shower with your likes and comments...
PART- 4
Maan's friends were shocked on hearing his comment and continuosly blinked their eyes.

Maan( raising his eyebrows)- what???

His friends in unison(still shocked)- what did you just say?

Maan9looking confused)- I just said that she is mine ... Oh sorry..sorry..i want to say that she is my dance partner.

Shaku- oh, then its ok.

Karan- looking at maan in disbelief...are is sure u meant the same??

Maan glaring at Karan as if he can kill him right now - ofcourse what else do you think??

At the same time Shaku saw Geet approaching the auditorium.

Shaku- leave it yaar. See Geet is going inside the auditorium...

On hearing Shaku, Maan went behind Geet towards the auditorium.

Maan- oh...finally Miss Handa got time to come to the audi.

Geet raising her eyebrows as if asking so what?

Maan- if u have not forgotten Miss. Handa we were supposed to meet at 10 am and now its 10:15 am...you are late Miss. Handa...Maan Singh Khurana don't like people who do not value time...

Geet- you are speaking as if I came an hour late...i am just 15 min late and its not a big deal...Mr. khurana...

Maan- it might not be a big deal for you but for me it is...

Geet- moving away from him...whatever...muttering to herself...as if I m dying to be in his good looks. Don't know why is he so arrogant...khadus khurana..nai nai..ye toh DUSHT DANAV hai...I just hate him...hey babaji let this competition get over soon as possible and I will never see his face again.

Maan self thought .. maan u should not talk to her rudely..u have to carry out ur plan na and for this u have to jhelofy her.

While they were in their own world they reached near the door of audi..

Geet opened the door and entered inside the audi which was completely dark. Geet tagged to Maan immediately..

Geet- maan its completely dark... can u switch on the lights???

Maan- smirking and taunted...i am trying to locate the switches my highness...before he could say further..

Geet- do it fast Maan...still tagged along maan.

Maan- still taunted...for that u have to leave me my highness...he pauses...geet are u afraid of darkness'.????

Geet- gulped down the lump in the throat..Nooo...i m not...

Maan- are u sure Geet???

Geet- said slowly...yes...m kisi se nahi darti...i m Geet Handa...hey babaji ye kahin fhasa diya mujhe ab to vapis b nai jaa sakti...murmurs to herself..

Geet moved away carefully...even after few mins when Maan didn't switch on the lights. Hey babaji this khadus khurana will not help me..

Geet- put a brave face..Hey babaji now I have to do something otherwise ye khadus mera majak banayega...suddenly she got an idea and took out her phone and switched on the light.

Geet- self praising...tu kitni intelligent hai geet...just then she turned to look for Maan and lost her balance was about to fall back but Maan caught her wrist at the right moment due to the the phone's light availbility..Maan pulled her with such a force that Geet colloided with Maan's chest'.Maan lost his balance but Geet managed her balance in time...

At the same moment the lights in the audi came...

Geet sighed in relief...thank u babaji...before she could complete her thank u talk with babaji...splash!!!!!!!!

Geet turned to see the source and gasped at the sight for few seconds...Maan in the tub...tub full of honey...

Now Maan was all wet and seeing him like that Geet started to laugh..

Geet- while laughing...Maan what happened??? Did you take bath in honey????

Maan came out from the tub gritting his teeth..GEETTT

Geet- while controlling her laugh...haan Maan mujhe pta h ye mera naam hai...

Just then a guy came in blue t-shirt and black jeans...thin in structure but reflected charmness from his features...he stared to Maan and Geet...vice versa.

Man- hi...I m Raj...before that man could complete...

Geet- drooling at him...I m simran...lost in him...

Maan thought Is she mad or something??

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Edited by angelic-eyes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first 🥳

awesome update dear
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh god seriously simran! !!!!
No wonder ye geet ne kaha
Ab maan kya bolega himai SRK sorry., sorry MSK! !!
That was 2 funny! ! !😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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simran...hahahaha🤣 love your update dear...
u r awesome...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ammyicycool, geetkamaan, sporthy_smile28, Hanishadevi, lehr, shah10, thank you for the like and comment...
lehr shah10 geetkamaan thank u for the lovely comment and hope u will like other parts too...
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thank u so much 4 the lovely comment and MAAN WILL DEFINiTELY GIVE THE ANSWER...🥳4 that u have too wait 4 the nxt part...
Geet is Simran...oops...Geet is Geet...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE I REALLY LIKE 3 PARTS A LOT PLZ UPDATE NEXT SOOONNN
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love all your update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maaniqra KINGKHANFAN thank u for the lovely comment...😊i will update soon...
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DANCE PE CHANCE
Part- 5
Man- hi...I m Raj...before that man could complete..

Geet- drooling at him...I m simran...lost in him..

Maan thought Is she mad or something??

Maan+Raj- what????

Just then Raj saw Maan...

Raj- hey, what happened to u???your dress seems to be... before he could complete...

Maan realised his condition, glaring at geet.

Maan(glared angrily)- Geet how dare u push me???

Geet(with puppy face)- maine kya kiya Maan...what have I done Maan???

Maan angrily-don't behave like u r innocent..

Geet again- I m really innocent Maan...maine kya kiya tum to khud gire na..

Maan gritted his teeth- really main khud gira hu Geet...???

Before they could continue their fight...Raj tried to stop them, and speaks to maan

Raj- It looks something sticky...he touched Maan's shirt with a finger and then on tasting it found honey...

Raj- honey????... from where did this honey came on you???

Maan pointing towards honey tub -from there...

Raj- r u serious????

Maan glared at him on this question ...raj seeing maan.

Raj- u r getting me wrong dude...I mean to say how can a tub filled with honey come in this audi???

On understanding Raj's point Geet looked towards maan...maan looked a bit frightened...at that time Geet understood everything and looked at Maan.

Geet- so you planted it here.

Maan putting a brave face- nooo...why while I put it here..

Geet- don't try to act innocent. Now, I understood ur plan...that's why u didin't switch on the lights..

Maan like a small kid caught- nooo Geet...sachi...

Geet- sachi Maan...and pounced on him...

Geet- I'll not leave u...u Dusht Danav...

Hearing this Maan again in MSK avatar..

Maan pointing his index finger to Geet- what did u say Geet???

Geet pointing her index finger to Maan too- Dusht Danav...DD kyu tum to Khadus bhi ho...

Raj who was a mere spectator till now came in action on seeing Geet's new side.

Raj(tiying to pull Geet away from Maan)- leave him...what are u doing??

Geet(who was now in Raj's hold tried jumping on Maan)- leave me..main nahin chodungi isse aaj..

Raj(who was about to loose his temper shouted)- stop it you guys..

Geet- tum ho kon mujhe rokne wale?

Raj- I m ur choreographer...Maan needs to change his dress...I m right Maan???

Maan(glared at Geet)- I'll be back..

Maan left from there and Geet and Raj talked about the necessary things needed for dance rehersals...

After few mins Maan came back..

Raj- lets start. First we should decides a song. Do u guys have any suggestion.

Maan- yes, I think we....before Maan could continue Geet interrupted..

Geet (smriking) - Raj I don't think Maan will be able to suggest a good song..he is good at only one thing..turned towards Maan...which u did few mins ago..do I need to remind u??

Maan- Geet let's not go there again...

Geet stared at Maan- No, I want to discuss that...kya kar loge tum ...haan bolo

Maan- Geeet...

Raj- stop it u guys, if not then I will have to talk to ur Principal.

Maan+Geet- nooo...sorry Raj. It will not be done again.

Raj- good...so, Maan tell me the song...

Maan- I think " pyar ki ek kahani suno" from " honeymoon travels" will be perfect..

Raj- I think it's a good choice Maan. Is it ok with u Geet???

Geet- yeah..it's a good choice..but still I think...

Raj- Geet...stop it...
Geet- ok...as u say...
Raj- so, the song is selected. Now we have to decide the Dance form..
Geet- I think a combination of Salsa and Tango...
love
Suni


Edited by angelic-eyes - 11 years ago

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