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Posted: 11 years ago
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DANCE PE CHANCE

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Part- 6




Maan- I think " pyar ki ek kahani suno" from " honeymoon travels" will be perfect..

Raj- I think it's a good choice Maan. Is it ok with u Geet???

Geet- yeah..it's a good choice..but still I think...

Raj- Geet...stop it...
Geet- ok...as u say...
Raj- so, the song is selected. Now we have to decide the Dance form..
Geet- I think a combination of Salsa and Tango...

They practice a lot for few days and in between those days they continue their pranks or nokjhok...sometimes Maan twirl Geet and then dropped her, or they put weird things in the clothes or in food...and then argued about half an hour for whose fault in the prank...

Raj loved their chemistry but sometimes he also landed in the mess created by Geet and Maan...like bali ka bakra...sometimes they test their prank on him and then continue on each other...raj had tough time to separate them during the fight...but he respect them for the dance...they danced well when raj told them on serious note...


Finally the day has arrived to perform...


Host- finally the day has been arrived for the couple dance performance...ladies and gentleman lets rock this competition (I know it's a college guy's competition...so their will be hooters and whistles also).here we have three judges to judge the pairs on their dance and chemistry...marks will be out after the performance and the lowest scorer pair have to leave the competition...

Here the first couple manse and devyansh...for Delhi University...big rounds of applause for them...



A girl and guy came on the stage and music started with their dancing...and so on the other performance afterwards...


meanwhile Maan and Geet dressed up for the performance...Geet was moving back and for in the room...while Maan as usual chatting with his friends...

After seeing geet getting tensed for the performance finally Maan spoke up...

Maan- geet what happen???

Geet- nothing... looked at the ground nervously...

Maan- I know u r nervous...tell me what happen???

Geet- nothing...I m not nervous...

Maan- Oh!!Really?? Then why r u sweating???


Geet looked into Maan eyes and saw the generousness...

Geet- I m nervous for our competition...first time I m doing a couple dance and that on national level too...I m freaking out...I don't know what to do...I m nervous for our competition...first time.... Maan put a finger on her lips to shh her up...and she blinked twice looking at Maan...Geet blabbered when she was nervous...

Maan- Shh! don't be nervous I know u can do it... coming closer to her...now their faces were inches away from each other and they were staring into each other eyes...Geet looked into Maan's eyes and wanted to figure out the genuineness but suddenly it change into mischief...after all u r with MAAN SINGH KHURANA...shouted on her face and start laughing..

Geet made a o' face- u jerk...dusht danav...I hate u...main..main...

Maan- kya bakri ki tarah main main kar rahi ho Geet...bolna nai aata kya...

Before they could continue their fight they heard their names...

Host-Here our next pair of couple dances...Maan and Geet from NIT College...

Stage was pitching black and the song started...

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha

A spot light came on to Maan and he was standing facing back to

the audience and made a posture of arms folding in front of his

face and chest...he was wearing a black shirt with black pants and a cream vest coat..


Ek Ladki Thi

A second spot light came on to Geet and she was standing same as maan... wearing a cream colour frock upto knee length and a black belt on the waist...

Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno

They made some sound by flipping their shoes on the wood stage...

Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi

They came near to each other...and geet looked at the crowd for a second and get nervous...


Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The Ajnaabi

Geet was crossing Maan...

Dono Tanah Se The
Per Woh Kehte Kise
Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi

but Maan held her wrist and twirl her around...and Geet collided with Maan's chest...

Maan- Geet don't be nervous...and looked at her puzzled face...i know u r nervous...ur heart is beating really fast...


geet didn't know why her heart was beating this fast...she had danced many times in front of crowd but then she thought may be because of pair dancing...

Geet- jhalli kahin ki...talked to herself...

Maan smiled seeing her talking to herself...geet looked into my eyes and then dance...don't be nervous..


Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno

Ek Ladka Tha

Geet put her left hand on Maan's shoulder and Maan placed his right hand on her shoulder...geet's right hand in maan's left hand...they started moving back and forth in a sync...

Ek Ladki Thi
Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The Ajnaabi
Dono Tanah Se The
Per Woh Kehte Kisi
Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi

They moved side by side and do the clap things while facing each other faces and tapping with their foot on the floor...Maan twinged his fingers with her and bend her backward...


Gumsum Gumsum Rehte The Dono
Phir Bhi Dil Mein Kehte Dono
Koi Sapna Hum Bhi To Paaye
Ek Din Tute Gum Ke Woh Ghere
Jhilmil Jhilmil Aaye Savere
Masum Badla Jaagi Fizaaye
Woh Mil Gaye
Woh Khil Gaye
Aur Pyaar Ho Hi Gaya
Jo Chaha Tha Woh Paya To
Hosh Kho Hi Gaya

Maan moved her back in straight position...they looked into each other's eyes while moving with salsa steps...Maan's eyes talking to geet's like they can dance without any steps...like they were feeling the whole song...Maan notice Geet's eyes first time...the change in her eyes colour from brown to greenish lighten up...whole ambiance making a effect on Maan...

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi

Maan lifted her in the air and make around on the spot...and then he put her down on the ground while swinging into his arms...she stretched her legs wide open...and lifted her up again with a force...


Holle Holle Ab Woh Deewane
Gungun Gaaye Dil Ke Tarane
Sunsun Jhoome Saari Hawaaien

Dhadkan Dhadkan Hai Bhehki Bheki
Tanmaan 2 Chahat Hai Mehki
Sapne Apne Jaddoo Jagaye

Inhe Dekhoge Jo Jaanoge
Kya Hai Nasha Pyaar Ka
Yehi Sochoge Yehi Chahoge
Sang Rahe Yeh Sada

Maan's hand on geet's waist and he moved round with her...she slid slowly downward touching maan's chest and stomach...sensuality cames automatically in the dance...she moved away from him with twinging her fingers with him...he tagged her towards himself...she moved under his hand and passed him...

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi

Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The
Ajnaabi


Dono Tanah Se The
Per Woh Kehte Kise
Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi

They swapped their position parallel...maan twirl geet for few times and now they were again in straight position...now geet drowned into maan's eyes...his eyes spoke volume to her...song finished but they still stand looking into each other eyes...


love

Suni

sorry guys for the late update...actually really really late update..sorry......but i hope u still remember my story and read it...i updated it as a new year gift...happy new year...

hope u comments and like it...


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y2ylkePBCfw[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by angelic-eyes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
After a long time loved there dance
Waiting for the next!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
part 1 - 6
awesome updates..
thanx for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
nice part loved maaneet's masti
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
kahin gana sach na hojaye...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written! Lovely song! update soon! Happy New Year!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
LOVED THE UPDATE SO CUTE LOVED THE DANCE AWESOME SONG AND LOVED HOW THEY TRUSTED EACH OTHER THANKS FOR THE PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb dear
geet was hell nervous but maan make sure they perform well

Happy New Year
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
wohooo after sooo long i thought u forgotten 😛😆
awsum part 😊
heheee soo maaneet nok jhoks started bechara raj 😆
awww geet nervous for the competition bt maan hai na sab sambhalenge 😉
hayeee maaneet dance
cont soon waitin eagerly for next 😉
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After a long time loved there dance loved maaneet's masti
Waiting for the next!!thanx for the pm..

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