new SS-DANCE PE CHANCE part 6 /pg 12/ 31 dec

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gurti30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

beautiful dear
poor geet dance se pehle hi maan se panga le liya. God save her from oyr sadu 😆

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shebs786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

beautiful dear...

loved it...raj bach gaya aur geet gaye revenge kai chakar mai

awesome dear ...cont . soon
will be waiting
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angelic-eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

sporthy_smile28, shebs786, gurti30, nitya, Hanishadevi, lehr,

thnx for liking my SS...it really encourages me 4 writing more..😊

plz do comment dear...

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angelic-eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hanishadevi ------

u are such sweetie pie yaar..even with few likes u cont writing..i really reaspect u..wonderful update..i think the paint wan spill on maan,,wrong guy..geet is gone yaar😆😆😆..pls cont😆soon..

thnx dear...😳

actually meri DI ne mujhe bola tha ki likhna mat chodna agar pasand h to...aur mujhe maaneet bhot pasand h...aur mere liye ye like bhot jyada important h...inn sab se important aap logo ne like kiye isliye mujhe continue to karna hi tha😎...thank u sooo much for the lovely comment...n i m glad that u like me...👍🏼

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angelic-eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

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.bloom. ,lehr ,gurti30,shebs786, punam2712 thnx 4 the lovely comments dear...😊 hope u all like my writing... plz do comment...😭 and aage aage dekho hota h kiya with maaneet...😉

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sun4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

lovely update . it seems that we will get to see sweet little fights of maan geet. as geet always results up in diong blunder and here she mess with MAAN SINGH KHURANA so how can she escape

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Wow..awesome update
She took revenge from maan instead of raj. Lo
Poor geet .
Love the update
Thx for the pm

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angelic-eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

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shah10,sun4u thnx 4 the comment dear😊 i m happy u like my ss... it encourages me...😊

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angelic-eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

drashtirocks1,nitya,ammyicycool thnx 4 liking my SS dear...😊 plz do comment... i m happy u all like my SS...

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angelic-eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

😆 DANCE PE CHANCE😆

PART-3

Actually geet has planned to take a revenge from RAJ who lost her assignment and for this they did some research on Raj where they found that every evening Raj plays basketball and then comes to locker room for taking shower and change of dress ...

So as per plan she hanged a bucket of blue paint on the top of bathroom door so that when Raj comes and opens the door the paint will fall on him.

They were just inches away...her heart started beating faster due to fear or may be due to some different feeling...

Geet- wo...wo...wo... pointing towards the gate of the locker room

guy- what the hell u think about yourself...huh!!!...u are messing with maan singh khurana...

geet made O-shaped mouth- oye hello...before she could say further maan spoke...

maan- with a rude voice... I m not here for your hello-hi...do u get that...u gona pay for what u did...

geet- bas bhot ho gaya khote de putter...it was ur mistake that u came here ... u spoiled my plan and now u are scolding me...then thinking to herself ...babaji now I have to make another plan to take revenge from Raj...

Before he could complete his sentence he saw Sadu in the corridor...he hid behind the locker pulling geet with him... there was no space between them...she wanted to scold him on this act but Maan kept his palm on her mouth and gestured with his eyes towards the gate ...Geet followed his gaze and saw Sadu passing by the locker room.

When sadu was gone they turned to look at each other and realized their position...their mouth were inches away with Geet's hand on Maan's chest and Maan's hand on Geet's waist... there heart- beats mingled with each other like their heart beats for each other...they looked at each other and they were again lost in each other's eyes ...a tempatation lingered over them to feel each other...there gaze broke when they heard the sound of boys from corridor...and suddenly geet pushed maan and ran away from the back gate...

For a second Maan couldn't understand what happened with him and he looked at the back gate.Then Maan heard the sound of boys and it dawned on him that he was soaked in paint completely and he should clean this up before someone makes a mockery of him.So maan went to take shower.

After searching for her friends for about 15 minutes ,geet finally found them enjoying in caf ...the moment she saw them laughing and chatting she fumed in anger.she went near them and patted one of her friend preeti on her shoulder...the moment her friends saw her face which was red due to anger, the expression on there faces changed...they gulped down there saliva...

geet-what happened girls???have you seen any ghost???where???? I can't see any ghost...chill yar...enjoy...have u ordered for me anything or did u all forgot me here also like u forgot about me in the locker room ???

Preeti(geet's friend)-yaar actually ...

Geet(angrily)-u still have something to say to me after what u did to me in the locker room..preeti u are my best friend na then how could u leave me alone...aur wo bhi uss dhusttt daaanav ke saath...

the moment these words left geet's mouth her friends got anxious and then they saw the state of her clothes

Naina(another friend of geet)- geet what happened to ur clothes???? did something happen between u and that hotty???

At that moment the scences of the locker room flashed in front of Geet...when he touched her lips with his palms a shiver ran down her spine thiking about it...

Naina poked Geet- Geet..where r u lost???

Geet who was still lost in their moment smiled

Naina shouted GEET and then her flash back broke and she realized she was smiling...she composed herself again and made grumpy face...

just then peon came..

peon- Geet beta Princi apko bula rahe h...

Geet- ji kaka m aa rahi hu abhi...

Geet again with anger face roared to her friends that she will see them after returning from the Sadu's office and left...

In Princi Office

Geet- good evening sir...u called me sir???? any important thing sir...????

Princi- yes Geet... I want u to meet ur dance partner...

Geet searched his room and found no one...hey babaji yahan to koi nai h..she pauses...kahin Sadu to dance nai karne wala...nai babji aisa mat karna mere saath...murmers to herself.

Before she could further proceed her thoughts she heard a knock on the door...her back was towards the door so she didn't saw the face of the guy...

Princi- come in

Maan entered the room and stood near Geet without paying any attention towards the girl...

Princi-meet ur dance partner and gestured towards his side...

Maan+ Geet- tummm?????

Maan+Geet- what the hell...before they could complete they heard Princi's voice...

Princi-glared towards them with anger- what????

Maan+Geet- while looking down...sorry sir

Maan whispers to Geet- Tumhe to main dekh lunga

Geet-with attitude- anytime...partner jo hu...

PRInci- now u both have met... so tomorrow onwards u can start ur practice...I have arranged a choreographer and u can meet him in the auditorium tomorrow at 10am...ok???

Maan+Geet- ok sir...

Princi-u both may leave now...

After coming out from the cabin

Geet-Sadu kahin ka..ye dhust danav hi mila tha mera partner banana ke liye...

Maan- oye hello mujhe tumhara partner bane me koi interest nahi h wo to Sadu ne bola h varna..

Geet pointing her index finger towards Maan- varna..????

Maan pointing his index finger towards Geet- wait and watch....and they left...

While going home they both were thinking about each other. While Geet was thinking about the moments spent in the locker room, Maan was busy in making a plan to take his revenge from Geet.

Next day

Maan planned to take his revenge'..he went to the auditorium and settled everything in the place with his friends help...but he didn't tell them the reason and the person's name..

Shaku- yar kiske liye itni planning kar raha h????

Maan- can't u wait for some time???

Shaku knew there is no place to argue with MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA...so he stoped asking question...where as Karan was far away to stop..

Karan asked with curiosity- Maan are u serious????

Maan engulfed in his work-yes I m

Karan again with curiosity (because maan never played prank without any solid reason)- r u sure maan??/

Maan irritately- yes I m...

Karan- what did that person do???

Maan with anger-nothing

Karan- who is that person????

Maan who was getting pissed off with the questions and saw Geet and smiled mischeviously ... his friends who were now curious to know the reason of his evil smile followed his gaze and then they saw Geet

Karan again asked question- wo to Geet hai...your...

Before karan could complete his sentence maan shouted

Maan- haan wo meri h...and all were shocked except Maan...

Suni

NOTE- SORRY for not including Precap in this update...will surely include in the next update

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Edited by angelic-eyes - 12 years ago