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mishtib

@mishtib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

hey plse continue this ff

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Nice one!
Loved it!
End was superb 😆..no discussion about my personal life.. 😆
nw..i want to read.. "with us at home"
will u write it for me..😉

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

congrats...

part 1
awesome...
oh wow that was so nice...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

part 2
awesome...
Maan in tears?
oh that terrible...
Geet is too much...
but for his betterment...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

part 3
last part
awesome dear...
so lovely...
their story starts from here...
cute...

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

don't tell me this was the end.please nooo at least give an epilogue.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

my God Shruti...

how can u imagine these concepts...

are u really from this planet...

wonderful story...

thanx for pm...

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

it was good to read an unusual os

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

loved this hatke story...

i loved the first part where the 3 entered in uniforms with sling bags... i cant even imagine our msk in that avataar😆... the 3 jobs u gave as per their requirements were fab!

the taming of the tiger was really fun!!! the way u made geet know his problem of perfectionism and then working on it was fun to read... u even left maanu nearly in tears! but am happy that he passed all the tests in flying colours and all r now in praise for him... now thats our MSK...

the ending again was superb... but yeh dil maange more...