MG SS- STILL WAITING #2 PT26 PG131 new thread link in INDEX - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it and waiting eagerly to know more about why maan treated geet like that...according to this update, he loves her and wants to protect and take care of her, then why is he not...what is he so scared of????..also how come he let geet go away and not get close to his babies???
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 18
present :

Maan looked at them with teary eyes, while babies slept on geet holding her, feeling their mother close to their heart n soul, these two are starving for her as they didn't heard her voice from mrng, n they were restless, n after seeing their mumma they are contained n peacefully. It was almost 9 pm n now aniee was restless as her both kids are alone since afternoon n must be starving for their mother, Arjun read her restlessness n came near maan n said "maan we both are gng mansion back as aniee is now restless for kids n kids too must be restless, but ammy n mithi are sleeping peacefully, soo i cant take them with us soo take care of ur kids n their mother too, if u can." saying soo Arjun left with aniee while caressing both kids n Geet hair.


Maan locked the door n went near them n tucked all three inside quilt. Caressed kids face then kissed them on forehead n looked at Geet painfully, how much she is looking pale n weak, he came near her face touched her face with his fingers n slowly his fingers were replaced with his lips, he kissed her jaw line 1st then nose, cheeks, eyes, forehead n then caressed her hair lovingly n sat on stool beside bed n took her one hand in his n kept it near his cheek n was looking at the three angels whole night.

In morning Don't know when maan slept but he opened his eye with knock on door. Aniee n Arjun was there with small Dhruv who was not leaving aniee today as he is still small 6 months baby. So aniee bring him took, they came inside n looked at Geet n then kids who woke up with sound n looked at each other n then at geet n again eachother n then at maan n again each other then aniee n arjun then both again looked at each other n then at dhruv n again each otther n at last at geet n both started crying lungs out holding her close to then.


mumma uto na wly ire stlpeing , mele ko aat kalni ahy crying ammy saidsaid whild holding geet neck n keeping his face on her chest n was crying (mumma woke up na mumma, y r u sleeping soo much we want to talk wid u mumma")

where as mithi was shaking geet hand n face n saying mumma mitti aul ammy mumma pass nini, drluve aul dicha dii jaise bua pass nini .. aithe(mumma mithi n ammy want to sleep in ur arm like dhruv n badi dii sleep in bua lap)

shaking geet with all her effort n seeing her ammy to start shaking her n calling her mumma mumma. Maan n arjun tried to calm then bt the small hearts want their mumma now, maan tried to console then bt they too are MSK son n daughter same like him rigid.

Mithi is soo tender hearted like her mumma too emotional n soft she looked at maan with her big doe shaped teary eyes n asked him Mitti mumma hult dadaa, mele se baat bhi nii ki.. olo naa(mithi mumma ko kya hua, y she is not talking wid us, is she angry from us dadda" she cluthed maan shirt n was crying but still holding
geet's one hand in her small chubby hand.)


Maan was standing like zombie, he dont know how to console his kids who are crying hell, aniee was too emotional seeing the kids who want their mumma with them, arjun was trying best to console ammy but he was getting violent if he try to touch him, he bite arjun's hand soo arjun left him with his mumma. They were crying continously from 15 min n every min their cry was getting heavy n more soundfull that doc came inthe ward hurridely, he too tried to make them understand but know only thing can stop them is their mumma's love care n her safety n warm embrance. Doc shook maan n said him to pacify kids bt maan was too unable to control them now n he cant force them. He was too helpless now in front of his three angel who are not hearing him. He was only praying that kids cry affect her n she woke up from them at least for her kids who are her life n breath.

This is the 1st tym lyk god heard or heard kids crying that suddenly geet's both hand started working n in semi unconsious state she cocooned her both hand in her kids like smothing their pain. Mithi n ammy looked at her hand which is now holding her two lives n she was breathing heavy, now doc need to work fast soo he commanded maan n arjun to part babies from her but as they tried to take kids from her hold her breath was getting more uneven n her hand was working violently. At last aniee shouted at them " stop parting her kids from her u both cant u see she is not liking it in her this state too, n doc. If she can survie then only this soul can make her live soo plzz u treat like her that" but in that things kids cry reached their peak as their mumma is not waking n now they are trying to part them from their mumma.


Geet hand n body was literally shaking n kids were crying more seeing her like that n maan was getting restless with passing every sec he was scared to touch geet bt at last his mind gave up over heart n he touched her face caressing it, it was like smothing her pain which she was gng through, her eye balls were dancing inside closed eyes like she is watching bad dream, n yes she was watching every incident of her life, her every pain n all n with sudden moments her lids were moving with more speed n with jerk she opened her eyes n shouted maan. She was scared like hell n continouslly saying "leave me...leave me" kids were scared seeing their mumma violent n anybody who can cansole her is only maan, she looked at maan as he was trying to calm her, she hugged him with soo force n hide her face in maan's neck while sobbing leave me, help me plzzz maan ji help me" maan threaded her hair with his fingers n smoothed her back while hughing her n in this process only doc. Gave her a injection to calm her nerves. After half hour she was calm then only she heard her jaan's sobbing voice n peeped to look at them from maan neck n smile at them n then suddenly her smile fade n as reality stuck her n she with jerk came out with maan's hug n with teary eyes.



precap :family moment in present or past not decided yet ...










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Posted: 12 years ago
chalo kuch acha mila ente dino ke badh 😆😆
awee ammy nd mithi so sweet huggi to them 😃😃.
geet ko aya hosh 👏👏👏
par geet tho dar gaye maan se .pata nahi abb maan kya karega geet soching this
geet is happy to see her babies 😛😛

me want present family moment 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally u updated
missing this ss sooo much
bt loved the update
cute angel of maaneet
how cutely they were complaining
finally geet is awake and will be shocked to see maan

update next soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW DII awesme part...
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loved both kids a lot...
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geet is in so pain & my maan also...
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geet hugged MAAN 😊 HAYEEE long time😳
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loved it... nd u also..
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love NELU 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part
Loved the kids trying to wake geet...
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
loved it
feeling bad for ammy and miti...they are missing their mother speaking...
their cry bring some senses in geet and she opened her eyes...
she instantly hugged maan and cried...
nice precap
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
kida were too good
geet awake bcoz of kids
maan soothing her
geet seeing her kids
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE VERY EMOTIONAL SHE WORK UP FINALLY GEET WORK UP AWESOME UPDATE WELL DONE
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Posted: 12 years ago
after a long time..nice part..
kids r too stubborn
but their cry reached geet n she woke up 4 them..

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