MG-OneShot ~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar..~ Updated.. on pg-60/ Jan2. - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: daredevilisback

wow then toh waiting eagerly😃

fir toh update karna hi padega..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Shonameet

fir toh update karna hi padega..😉


Hum sab wait kar rahe hai..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: daredevilisback


Hum sab wait kar rahe hai..😃

i didnt had any idea that my story is that much famous..ke puri khurana family is waiting for the update😆
Thanks fr the pic..its cute😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
so sweet maan
loved this one alot
thanx for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_rati

so sweet maan

loved this one alot
thanx for the pm dear

thanks for loving this maan😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Thts nice part. N i really liking this OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

this update is specially dedicated to "@daredivilsback" thanks for waiting dear & for ur beautiful comments😊
hope u'll like it!


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His mom had given him geet's landline number along with her personal number. But he was relucant as he didnt knew what to say? How he should start the conversation? More over what he will talk about? As they hardly know eachother. He wasnt sure that if he should call or not? Then he used to think..."usne bhi toh call nahi kiya!" and that become a valid point for him to not to call first!
After a week or so of their engagment..
That night...He was in his room...busy, working on some important files.. When his cell phone rang. He recived the call after few rings that too without checking the caller ID.
Before he could even say a "hello"...he heard someone shouting.. "naina..naina..stop it! Mera phone wapas de.." time stoped for him..he easily recognaised her voice.. It was her.. Geet!
He felt very different that time..the feeling was new to him. He felt happy that she had called first to talk to him..at the same time, he was surprise with her taking the inciative.. "not bad!" he thought with a slight smile.
"per, mujhe jiju se baat karni hai na.."..naina's reply brought him back out of his thoughts.
"toh..ghar ke phone se baat karna! Why my phone?" ..geet sounded irritated.
"kyun? Aap ko darr lag raha hai? That jiju will think that its u who is calling him.. That u want to talk to him.." hearing naina's teasing words... He couldnt help smiling.."ohh..toh she didnt called him"..he thought!

"mujhe kyun darr lagega? I didnt called him. Aur na hi mujhe kisise koi baat karni hai.."..geet shouted in annoyance.
They both probably had forgot that they were still very much on call..and he could hear them.
He kept listening to their nok-jhok..& honestly he enjoyed it alot!
"achha? Sach me?" naina teased more.
"han..agar unhen baat nahi karni toh fir main kyun karun?" geet fought back.
"unhen?? Ummm?" ..naina smirk teasingly.
He too smiled shyly listening geet reffering him as "unhen" it felt really special.. He didnt know why?
"tu..tu na maar khayegi aaj.." geet warned. And then he could hear them running around shouting at eachother.. laughing..
He chucked hearing them fight like that..he heared them for few more minutes.. then he cut the call with a pleasent smile on his face.
After an hour, his cell rang again. This time he checked the ID & saw geet's landline number flashing on the screen.
"it must be naina" ..he thought.. & recived the call. And Sure enough it was naina only. At first, he was wondering as to what to talk..but then naina made it quite easy with her light talks and teasing.. she was really sweet girl. They talked for sometime..after that suddenly naina said.. "just a minute jiju.." he thought that she might have some important work.. But next moment, his view totally change about her.. "she is naughty devil" ..he thought..
"arre...dii..dii.. Apki friend ka phone hai.." ..saying that naina handed the reciver to geet.
Geet who was totally unawer of her devil sister's mischiefs..took it & said.. "hello.."
His heart skiped a beat hearing her sweet "hello"... He was lost in that blissful feeling..when she said again.. "hello?"
but then he didnt know what got into him that he did what he had never thought of..
"toh..tumhe mujhse baat nahi karni..?? ..hmmm??" ..he asked, shocking not only geet, but himself too.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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"this update is specially dedicated to "@daredivilsback" thanks for waiting dear "
Thank you so much dear..
Your dedication touched my heart😊
Luv u for this[<3]

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I loved the update from starting till end 👏
Maan's dillema to call geet or not...I found it really cute...
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I can't tell you how much I liked naina..
so cute she is 😊
And finally Hamari attitude wali geet😆
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but at end they talked ..
Naina k smarteness ka kamal😆
""toh..tumhe mujhse baat nahi karni..?? ..hmmm??" .."
Hayyyeee😳
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Thank you for updating again..😊
Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan ladkiyan pehli bar sharmati hai...initiative toh ladko ko hi lena padta hai...samjhe buddhuram...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...





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thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt pr eagerly...

continue soon plz...






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