MG-OneShot ~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar..~ Updated.. on pg-60/ Jan2.

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: --Fairy--
Awww Maan restlesss so cute
loved the update

thanks dear..:)
happy that u liked it:-)

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: love2_soma
<div align="center">maan eager to meet geet n his wish fulfilled...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm lso...

waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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yes..finally!!
And all thanks to his mom..:-)

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum update! Maan's restleness well portrayed! Annie teasing him! Maan happy to c her, well written, update soon

thanks u so much!
Feels good that u liked and enjoyed the update..:-)

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

thanks:)

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: mayapari
Wow...
Superb narration dear...
Nice emotions...
Awesomely portrayed...
Its Smurfub:-)

thanks alot dear..:-)
good to know that u could relate to all emotions..:-)

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
Nice update
Geet ki ane ki khushi main maan ke mann main laddo fut rahe hai😊
Maan teasing se dur kyu bhagta hai? Teasing vo hai jo rishte ko aage bathane main...samjne main...kubsurat banane main help karte hai
Intezaar...restless ...nervousness ...excitement ...maan ke sath sath mein bhi feel kar rahi hoo..
At last ...wow...!!!eyelock...!!!

Baharo phul barsavo mera maheboob aaya hai...

wah..song choice toh ekdum sahi hai..:-)
bt airport wale allow karenge..phul brsana..😆
Thank u so much dear for ur beautiful comment..i truly loved it!
Sahi kaha teasing & masti makes the situation light..aur bahut maza bhi ata hai!
Keep liking as well as commenting dear..
Thanks again..:-)

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: spvd
@page 50
awesome dear...
lovely...
Maan is so fallen in love...
cont soon dear...

ya, pyaar toh hai..bt he still has to realise it and depth of this feeling!
Thanks:-)

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: Shonameet
wah..song choice toh ekdum sahi hai..:-)
bt airport wale allow karenge..phul brsana..😆
Thank u so much dear for ur beautiful comment..i truly loved it!
Sahi kaha teasing & masti makes the situation light..aur bahut maza bhi ata hai!
Keep liking as well as commenting dear..
Thanks again..:-)

Ya, airport wale to allowed nahi karenge par ye to maan ke mann ki baat hai na...
Weise bhi vo apne dil ki baat kishise sher nahi karta...haina...??
Geet to kitni shay hai pata nahi kya karengi...maan se baat karengi na????
Ab to aap phone ki baate bhi nahi sunati😭
Teen update se uski baat nahi suni...

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
agreed ke wo dono apne dil ki baat zahir nahi karte..but then these two days will bring them closer and help them to open up to eachother more.
Aur rahi bat phone calls ki..toh i never intended to give many phone conversations! Infect i added the extra ones just coz of ur wish!
And abhi toh calls ki gunjaaish hi nahi hai...ya fir hai..;)

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: Shonameet

Maine to bas aise hi bol diya , aap apni story line waisi hi rakhiye, jise aapne soch hai
Waiting for next two days and maaneet moments...

Edited by sheetalvasa - 11 years ago