MG-OneShot ~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar..~ Updated.. on pg-60/ Jan2. - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thats how started their message chats! They both felt that it was more comfertable, compaired to phone calls..as it was easy to write ur thoughts instead of voiceing it directly. Incially it was just casual talks..random stuff.. But as time passed, it got deeper..they started to share about their likes & dislikes, their daily life, friends, families.. All this was knew to both of them. Both used to find escuses to message each other.
As feeling got attached..there was this sudden need to know each other more. And their occassional phone calls become regular! They both didnt even realise when & how they came so close.
The person, who was a total stranger for them just few weeks ago, now has become so much important to them...that now its simply impossible for them to think their life without that person!
They used to share everything..every little detail of their daily life. He used to tell her all about his office works, his projects, his outing with friends, his time spent with family..everything! He had told her so much about everyone that she felt as if she had known everyone from always!
Same was the case with her also..he got to know every detail about her life..from her family to her best friends to her collage & studies!
Thats not only it!
When u get attached with someone..u feel/get concerned for them. Thats what happened with them too. When u get to know someone from up close..u can easily know if they are in pain or upset..thats very natural. So if he would be upset on something...she would guess it instantly. And would try to cheer him up. Similarly, when her mood will be off.. he would make her smile with his teasing.
They used to talk in day time also..but it would be short..as they had their respective works to concentrate on..his office & her collage! But at nights, after dinner,that was the regular & fix time for their phone calls. They would wait whole day for night to come so that they could talk to eachother without any disturbance! They would be so lost in their talks that none would realise that how much time has passed..and many times they would end the call half heartedly, in wee hours..that too coz they couldnt keep them self awake any more!

Once, he got really late in the office & came back at 11pm..which is their phone call time. At 11.15 his phone rang..he was eating his dinner & his mother was sitting in front of him.. He didnt took the call..instead messaged her that he will call after 10minutes.
When he had called her finally..and told her how he got late in the office..she had chidded him that how he shouldnt over load himself with work and should take care of himself..
"itni late aaye ho?"
"achha..dinner kiya ki nahi?"
"kam se kam khaana toh time se khana chahiye naa.."
"9pm is the limit..u should come early from now on"
he was really amused with her dominance..but he loved it..he loved it that she cared for him so much!
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first again
Awesome 👏
their cute lovely moments...
Improvement in their relation ...
You showed it nicely..
like they start with msgs..
and then frequent calls...
Their care for each other...
Geet's dominance❤️
The way she cares for him...
loved it...
Beautiful update...

will be waiting..
continue soon!!
Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shona will edit my cmt 2mmorow...busy right now...sholly,,.
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweeet.. maaneet getting closer.. i see love.. cont soon hun.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Shona will edit my cmt 2mmorow...busy right now...sholly,,.

its ok sisy.. Me too going to sleep right nw..was just sending pms!
Good ni8..and really sweet dreams!
Luv u😊🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

sweeet.. maaneet getting closer.. i see love.. cont soon hun.

thanks for liking:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww another one.. Sahi toh kaha maan needs a deadline for home
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Woww another one.. Sahi toh kaha maan needs a deadline for home

sure..ab geet ki toh sunni hi padegi na..;)

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