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akmg92

@akmg92

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

NICE...
PLZ CONTINUE...

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256748

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Really nice bring the day when geet was on tv

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

man that was even more powerful than the arhi version
but lot of difference in the first bit of it
oh maan how could you think like this
wait does this mean you will write more on maneet
dude you could have lost her forever
and lucky you didnt man

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saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

loved it dear continue if u can

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Anupama

@anupm04

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Nice one
Pls continue it

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@Fazila~

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awesome...i dont know them...but this is great... :)))

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

PLEASE CONTINUE ONE MORE PART AND WANT DEV TO BE PUNISHED MAAN TREATED HER VERY BADLY SO HE SHOULD ALSO NO SHE WAS INNOCENT AND SHE WAS TRAPPED AWESOME OS GLAD HE CONFESSED THANKS FOR THE PM

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Nice..wud hav been better if dev too had to pay gor his sins

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Nice one!
My fav part is that after dream wala part.. Maans reaction & realisation..his emotions were so intense..beautifully described and dialogs were also good.
Luvd it!