MG FF: Mysterious lover. note PG14. new prlg

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Amazing update...
Geet has so much pain in her...
Waiting fr maans entry...

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drrose31

@drrose31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

prologue ... sad His father died taking a promise from him...

ch sk... so many chrs ... 😲

parts 1 and 2..

good start .. so its a college side story ... where in geet has a friend's circle and is like a rich brat ...

doesn't believe in love and marraiages ...

interesting

waiting for more ...

thnx for pm sweets

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

part 2
nice part dear...
cont soon...

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niki

@mymaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: drrose31
prologue ... sad His father died taking a promise from him...

ch sk... so many chrs ... 😲

parts 1 and 2..

good start .. so its a college side story ... where in geet has a friend's circle and is like a rich brat ...

doesn't believe in love and marraiages ...

interesting

waiting for more ...

thnx for pm sweets

thnx dea glad u liked it and i have changed the cs in colours oly to understand what colours m gonna use for every characters dialog n its just for the start till thr readers get accustomed to the them n dnt hv difficulties in knwing who has said the dialog bt still ill b changing it after 10 parts or so perhaps

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niki

@mymaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: spvd
part 2
nice part dear...
cont soon...

thanx dea will try to update faster this time

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Shayad ye concept samaj ane me thoda time lagega...

So thoda wait kar k dekh te hai age kya hoga...

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niki

@mymaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Shayad ye concept samaj ane me thoda time lagega...
So thoda wait kar k dekh te hai age kya hoga...

i think you are the first to understand the deptness of the ff knowing dat its not as simple as it looks like with out me telling or revealing it well you are absolutely right about it and thanx dea for taking your time to read ma ff