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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: spvd

CS
nice...

prologue
was that Maan's dad?
what happened?


well u will have to wait till the story unreveals
glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
nice...
cont soon...
sent eh buddy invite...

PS - can u post the link in this thread when u update?
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i hv acceptd ur buddy invite thanx n ill surely post the link when i update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Amazing ff
add me to ur pm list nd do pm me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Miss.Perfectiie

Amazing ff
add me to ur pm list nd do pm me!


thanx dea ill surely pm wen i do so
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

thanx dea glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

PART2

The moment she walked out ,the boys as usual gape at her

Her hair a rich shade of ebony. It flowing in waves to adorning

her glowing, porcelain skin. Her eyes, framed by long lashes,

were a bright ,sparkling with naughtiness ,her hazal almond

shaped and seemed to brighten the world. A straight nose, full

soft pink lips with minimal make up she seemed the picture of

perfection. as she smiled moving towards her friends, lightening

up the whole atmosphere and making the boys sigh in

contentment as she walked in full attitude giving a dam care

whats happening around her.

The moment she walked out locking her car. Wearing a aqua blue

knee length dress with thin straps her brown curls left lose

swaying on her shoulders boys were gaping at her as usual . she

shot them a dangerous glare and they all dispersed in no time.

She walked straight to her friends where prem. Where

prem decided to try his luck once again

"You know geet your beauty makes the morning sun look like the

dull glimmer of the moon". Prem exclaimed all dreamily but was

crushed with geets next set of words

"Cut the crap prem you very well this trick of yours wont work on

me so why do you waste your time try it on some of your gay

friends I m very sure that they will kiss you the very next

moment". She said with a straight face .while all burst out

laughing with prem smiling sleepishly for his stupidity .others

giving him a look you will never change .

After having a hearty laugh meera spoke

"Geet what about the presentation we have to submit today you know if we dont submit it today we wont be allowed to answer ISA examination".

While geet just handed her the pen drive and shut her while

armaan checked it yaar

"yaar Geet tu humesha itna acha presentation kaise bana paati hai".

Geet was always the topper of her batch and was highly ambititous even if she didn't attend most of the lectures she always managed to get the maximum marks no matter what where even professors didnt dare to speak a word against her after all she was the Geet handa

Geet just shrugged it of arrogantly saying,

"Hum class ke liye late horahe hain".

They just sighed walking off to class knowing that no matter how

much they may try to be playful with her she will never change

While in another part of the city


Women: "when is he coming"? she asked the other man present in the room

"After 5 days ma". he replied app

"App jante hain apkao kya karna hai".

"Ji ma main ne unlongo se bhi baat karliya hain".

"Kya jawab tha unka".

"Unhone kaha he ki who soch kar batayienge app fikar mat

kijiye humien yakien hain unka jawab ha hi hoga".

"Kyun nahi unka hi faida hai ismein".

"Par humien gudiya ki chinta horahi hain kya who manegi

unhein to hum paise ke lalach se mana lenge par gudya ka kya

mujhe nahin lagta who manegi".

"Hum manayenge unhe aur wo app unki chinta mat kijye aur

waise bhi hum unhe uss ghar jaise nark se bhar nikalne ke liye

kar rahe hai".

"Agar app kehti hai toh". saying so he walked off leaving the old women in deep thoughts


Midnight delhi night club


All are swaying and having fun a gala time to the beat of the rock

music and the center of attraction is none other than Geet who is

lost in her own world dancing in full swing with her friends

giving dam care to the rest of the world

As the music ended they all moved towards the bar counter and

ordered for their respective drinks and as usual within no time

Geet was completely drunk and the others were having a tough

time controlling her.

And to worsen the situation a unknown guy who was observing

her lustfully for a long time came forward seeing her drunk and

said,

"Babes can I have the right directions to your heart I am in love

with u at first sight".

All her friends what was to happen now.

Her eyes blood shot spliting fire. "You heard Armaan what he

said ,he says he loves me". and she starts laughing hysterically

"Geet just calm down bacha". Armaan tried to cool her down

"love he says love Prem he says love".

"Meera is there any thing called love in this world" and laughs out

loud , the whole club was dead silent only echoed laughter could be

heard and the entire attention was diverted towards her but all her friends

were looking at her painfully and were just mute spectators to

her condition being helpless un able to take her pain away and

give her a peace of mind atleast for some time knowing even if they

speak now they wont be able to soothe her inturn worsen the situation

hurting her all the more here the guy looked

at her horrified as she walked towards him stumbling and balancing herself towards him and on reaching him she put her hands dangerously around him and started speaking,

"my dear boy you know i pitty you as you are still living in an illusion of love .there is nothing called as love in this world it only has lust and greed which makes a person attracted to the other".

"There is no emotion called love which exists in this world its just a mask to hide the true face of the person to get what he wants hiding behind the cover page of love and I guess u know what I am talking about". saying so she gave him an evil smirk looking at her

He was terrified and just flew away from the place in no time

sum of the other girls standing there as mute spectators till now

gathered some courage and asked her "Than what about

marriage"? is it also fake

Geets friends cursed the girl for making the situation worse.

Geet wickedly smiled at her and said,

"MARRIAGE huh?? its just a deal btween two people a mutual

agreement Well to be frank its just a game to destroy your life and

your so called life partners life making it a living hell and joining

hands in corrupting others life .It is a permanent treatment to their

desire get what ever you want from the other person for your

greedand when your done have divorce and go to the next simple

isn't it".

Saying so she just walked out leaving all of them baffaled with

her response.

Except her friends who knew why she said these things and

mentally wowed to do anything to get her happiness back in her

life .

But no one knew what fate had in store


plz guys respond did u like d concept or not shud i continue & as i am a new writer & give thanks to ash aka kawaii di and osheendgr8 also to rakhi di aka PrithviSanyo1 for helpin me in posting the pics and my dear friend shruthiruchs for supporting and helping me in editing ...

Thanks to Alwayzz GurTi 4 helping with banner

srry if ive 4 got mention anyone...

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Edited by mymaaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Sexy_Witch

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luved-it


THANX glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
👏wow u write amazingly
I m glad that u send me pm😃
loved the concept😃
waiting for the next part😃
do update soon😃
love aanya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: aanya84

👏wow u write amazingly

I m glad that u send me pm😃
loved the concept😃
waiting for the next part😃
do update soon😃
love aanya


thanx dea glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Will read , and get back to you ...

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